I'd appreciate any comments on how i have done,or what i can do to improve,cos this is my first time penning something.thanks :D
Nate and Serena were having their usual tea time together
Nate and Serena were having their usual tea time together. "So,you have a new girlfriend, right?" Serena knew this, but she just wanted to be sure. She loved Nate. She always had. "Yeah, her name's Cat. But I doubt you'd know her. She ain't from around here." "Oh." Serena replied curtly. "Who was this lucky girl?" she thought to herself. "So, what's today's activity?" she asked chirpily. "Oh, yes, Serena. I forgot to say that I'm meeting Cat after this and I was wondering that maybe this would be our activity. You know, cut short our day?"
Serena nodded dejectedly. She had been anticipating all day for this week and now some girl gets priority over her. "Hey S. Are you alright? You seem to be out of thoughts today" said Nate, breaking her train of thought. "Yes Nate, I'm fine." But what she really wanted to reply was, "NATHANIEL ARCHIBALD, I HAVE BEEN IN LOVE WITH YOU EVER SINCE THE TIME WE'VE HOOKED UP! ARE YOU THAT OBLIVIOUS TO THE FACT?!"
Oh no.
She thought that she had said it in her head but unbeknownst to her, she had actually said it out loud. Her cheeks turned twelve shades of red as she looked up at Nate's face.
"Wow." Was all Nate could say. After all, Serena had left him to pick up the pieces with Blair, left him without saying goodbye. And she had chosen the easier option; to escape reality. He had always hated her for that. Leaving him to face reality on his own. But hearing her say this, Nate was taken aback. He tried to say something. Anything. But the words just wouldn't come out. At all.
Serena got up and dashed out of the cafe. The embarrassment was too much for her to take. She knew she had blown it. Her friendship with Nate was already strained, with her running away and all, but now it had just gotten worse.
"SERENA, SERENA WAIT!" Nate dashed after her and when he finally caught up with her, he hugged her real tight. "I love you too. I've always had. But when you came back and hooked up with Humphrey, I...I just didn't know what to do. And besides you seemed pretty hung up over your break up..." "I'm real sorry, Nate. For running away, for everything."
They got into a deep, passionate kiss but unknown to them, just a few metres away; Cat was sitting in a limousine. "Get me info on this Serena girl" she barked into the phone.