My friend gave this story to me to edit and continue writing that is exactly what I will be doing. I will be editing and uploading all the chapters again and adding more as well. Hopefully if you still look forward to reading this I'll keep you interested. I am still new to writing so critiques are welcomed as long as you're not rude or an ass about it. It's not hard to critique nicely. Read some reviews where people were concerned with lemons…it is rated M for a reason not just language and future violence…ummm duh. There will be sex scenes. I'm warning you now, so I would prefer it if I don't get future reviews complaining about that. If you don't like something you don't have to read it. That simple, I hope. Also, read reviews about how people were concerned on how Iggy could "see" things I will be editing all the chapters. Another thing wish to say to whomever will read this story now, characters will be OUT of context. As much as I did like Maximum Ride I'd prefer to have the characters take on the personalities I wanted them to have in the story, I will take advice or critique but please don't say the character is not acting the way they should be, I want them not in character.
Thanks, and to whom ever will read or continue to read this story reviews and critiques are welcomed and you're AWESOME!
