This is another story I just started to work on. Its a Light Yagami X OC fanfic. Enjoy The First Chapter!
The blue jays frolic merrily outside, chirping gaily. The sun shimmers through the round smooth emerald green leaves, sending light rays of sunlight into the corridor of a magnificent marble hallway. Elegantly carved marble columns stand within the corridor, and spade shaped glassless windows peer out into the courtyard. Sharply trimmed hedges, rose bushes, and tulips lighten the freshly mowed grass. The silence echo's through the corridor, only to be broken by the sound of pattering. As the seconds go by, the pattering grows louder. Soon, a girl, around the age of 16 streaks past the elegant windows, jogging within the corridor. Her light panting mixed in with the pattering of the footsteps, jumble together in unison.
I can't be late! I can't be late!
"Karasu-chan!" A girl Tsuko, Mai calls out, with her foot in the door to a classroom. "You better hurry up!" You just glare at her, as you literally skid to a stop, placing your hands on your knee's, gulping back what little saliva you have.
"How..much time do..I have?" Karasu asks, panting between her words. Mai looks at her watch, and bites her lower lip.
"I would say, around, 5 minutes?" Mai answers glancing up at Karasu, who has already bolted inside the classroom. Mai shakes her head sighing, walking in shutting the door behind her.
God Damn it!
"Here, Mr. Fujiwara. I believe this, is a perfect case! I have already taken the liberty to try to solve it, and I have some really good ideas. Please Sir, take a look!" Karasu rushes handing the man a red envelope, that appears to be bulging. The man just quirks his eyebrow, placing his chin on his hands.
"Miss Kasegawa..I shouldn't accept this, partially because you're late." He says calmly moving his eyes to Karasu's. She just fidgets and blinks, her eyes now widening.
"But, I think I've actually solved the case! Please look Sir!" Karasu pleads, holding the envelope further out. The man sighs and reluctantly takes the envelope.
"So, you actually did a real case, and you actually believe you've solved it?" He asks doubtfully, prodding at the envelope. Karasu nods and collapses in a desk, beside Mai.
"If you actually think I'm on to something, do you think I should take it into the police to review it?" Karasu suddenly asks, tying her long chocolate brown hair into a ponytail. Mai rolls her eyes watching Karasu.
"Karasu-chan, not even Mr. Fujiwara has gotten close to solving anything. What makes you think you would actually be able to?" Mai asks sighing. Mr. Fujiwara shoots a glare at Mai, as he opens the envelope, pulling out a sheet of paper.
"Well, because I actually studied the patterns of criminals, and what people would most likely commit the crimes. Plus, I did some undercover investigating, and found out some highly useful information. I pieced it together, and interviewed the bystanders," Karasu says proudly, while Mr. Fujiwara reads the papers, concentrating.
"Yeah..You're sounding a lot like a real detective, Sherlock," Mai says grinning, pushing her glasses back up on her freckled nose. Karasu sighs and folds her arms.
Nobody ever has any faith in me whatsoever.
"Well, Karasu, I can see you put a lot of work into this, but I just don't see how you could figure out a homicide case. You get an A, but this case is bogus. I don't even think Kira is able to find and kill the murderer," Mr. Fujiwara says, with a sigh, handing the envelope back over to Karasu.
What is wrong with everybody? This case is NOT bogus! It makes complete sense!
Karasu growls and stands up, snatching the envelope away, glaring at her teacher.
"You'll see, I know this is perfect. I'm going to the police station, so actual professionals can look over it! I don't need a dead beat law teacher!" She yells striding out of the class, Mai at her heels.
"You should go back and apologize to him, Karasu," Mai says softly, after a few moments of silence.
"Make me, nobody ever has any faith in my work. I'm going straight to the police station. This case...Will be solved. Today!" Karasu says, her voice raising a bit every second. Mai blinks and sighs shaking her head.
"Karasu, please be reasonable..What if the police reject your theory?" Mai asks trying to stay quiet. Karasu glances at Mai, pondering.
Then..I go and nab the suspect.
"I don't know Mai. Please, just leave me alone until I sort things out, and hand this to the police, please?" Karasu asks softly looking at her friend with wide gray eyes. Mai sighs and nods, stopping at a bus stop.
"Good luck, Kara-chan," Mai says, waving her friend away. Karasu nods, and walks down to the subway. After a bit she's sitting in her seat, her hands on the envelope, which is on her lap.
Well...Every murder happened at 6am, all in the Kanto region. All the murder victims were female, ages 17 to 25. There was only 1 witness, for a murder. They witness believed the man was blond, around 5'9" and was wearing a black leather coat. I'm pretty sure he wasn't working alone, because the murders happened at the exact same time. I made a map of where the murders took place, and it made a perfect square. So, there were at least 4 men involved. Since it took place in the Kanto region, exactly one kilometer apart from each other, their base, if they have one, should be located close to there. I thought I could figure out where the base was by the map, but I don't see how it helps...
Karasu blinks her mouth dropping.
"I got it!" she says, causing people to look at her. She blinks and looks away, pulling out the map.
A perfect square, 1 kilometer apart from each other. They would make the base an easy access for them, so they could escape faster...So..
Karasu pulls out a ruler and places it diagonally across from one point to the other, making a faint line across, before doing the same from the other point. She follows where the lines intersect.
Its an empty house...So..Wouldn't the police have searched there? Or were they, well, searching outside of the box..Okay, either way, I may have actually found where they are..
"Uhh, Miss, is this your stop?" A man asks her, having seen her ticket destination. Karasu blinks, looking at the man, then outside the window.
"Oh, yes, thank you," she says, rising, and bowing politely before walking past everyone off the sub, and up the stairs. "Alright, the police headquarters is about a block away." Karasu grins and starts off.
As she walks, she listens to the cars, and there rumbling engines as they streak past her. Numerous people around her chatter casually, and a few kids giggle and yell. The ominous sound of constant thudding of feet on the plain gray cement waft around freely. Buildings, upon buildings, lights, people and workers swarm around their businesses. Shoppers trying to open their car doors, the rustling of their grocery bags, as their children play beside them. The sounds of a city. She snaps out of her daydream, as the large glossy building rising in front of her. She speeds up, gripping her proof tightly as she starts to run. Her footsteps patter across the road, as she dodges the vehicles, not caring about the angered drivers.
"Hey, lady! Watch out!" A driver yells as he honks. Karasu ignores him and runs straight to the door of the police headquarters.
Finally! I'm here! Karasu grins and grips the cool chrome handle, whipping the door open. The secretary glances up at the panting girl, as she strides over to her desk. Another boy is already there.
"I brought some lunch for my father," the boy says, turning his head slightly, his auburn hair falling loosely in his amber eyes. The secretary nods, smiling.
"Yes, alright, thank you, Light. May, I help you miss?" the secretary asks smiling warmly at Karasu.
"Uhh..Yeah..I have..some information on the quadruple homicides...That..May lead to the solving of the case!" Karasu says, tiredly slamming the red envelope on the counter. The Secretary blinks, staring at the girl.
"Right, well, I'll put it away for safe keeping," the secretary says with a sigh. Karasu glares. Light watches.
"For God sakes! Just freakin' look at it! I know I solved the case! Please. Just. Look!" Karasu says, slamming her fists on the counter. Light raises an eyebrow, and slides his hand over to the envelope, picking it up.
"May I?" Light asks, flashing a fake smile. Karasu looks at him, and nods, watching him carefully. The secretary also watches him.
Light slides his fingers into the envelope, pulling out the papers. He blinks, first looking at the interviews Karasu did. Then he reads over the jot notes, before blinking, nodding slowly. He then turns to the map. He looks at it, before looking up at Karasu thoughtfully. He then turns to the secretary.
"I believe she actually is onto something. I can't believe I couldn't even piece this together. This should be reviewed immediately," Light says calmly, setting his hard gaze on the secretary. She blinks and nods slowly, pressing a button.
"Chief Yagami, your son is here. And we also have some...valid information on the quadruple homicide case, brought in by a girl," the secretary says, choosing her words, before removing her finger. Karasu's mouth drops slightly.
They are actually going to consider it? I can't believe this.. Karasu blinks and sighs running her hand through her hair. Light looks at her.
"How did you figure this out?" Light asks carefully putting the papers back into the envelope. Karasu looks at him, and smiles slightly.
"It was really just a project for my law class. I decided to do a case, that nobody was really able to solve. So, I did some research, and then investigated the scene...I just pieced everything together afterwards," she says her smile growing. Light nods.
"You have potential, it's amazing you actually found out this much," he says, as the elevator beeps. All three people turn there heads to it, as a man with graying hair and glasses steps out. Following him was a much younger man, with black hair and brown eyes.
"Ahh, Light, have you brought my lunch?" the man with gray hair says, smiling walking over to his son. Light smiles and nods.
"Yes, I have. Oh, look this over. She brought it in, and I reviewed it. Its plausible," Light says holding out a brown lunch bag, and the red envelope. Karasu smiles.
"Oh! Thank you," the man says, turning to Karasu. "I'm Soichiro Yagami. It's a pleasure to meet you, Miss..?"
"Karasu Kasegawa, Mr. Yagami, and thank you for taking my information into consideration!" Karasu says excitedly, bowing politely. He smiles, and the man beside him blinks watching Karasu.
"I'm Light Yagami," Light says casually. Karasu smiles and nods.
"I'm Touta Matsuda," Matsuda says, with a slight smile. Karasu grins at him and nods.
"Nice to meet you all," Karasu says, as Light's father gasps. Everyone turns and looks at him, who is staring at Karasu.
"Matsuda, get the team together. We're going," he says, bewildered that a simple school girl was able to solve a complicated case. Matsuda blinks and nods, fumbling with his cell phone, turning away, as he jabbers on the phone.
Light and Chief Yagami both look at Karasu. Light raises his eyebrow slightly and his lips twitch to a smirk. I could use her on my side... He thinks to himself.
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