Whisper of the wind (Improved Version?)
Now I, Kai Kenosha have been given by the original author Shadow Samurai of the Darkness full rights over the story, which means 1) I own all her characters that are in this story and this story only, 2) I can alter the story at whim 3) Well you get the idea.
SSOTD's Disclaimer
Disclaimer: (I hate doing this but I have to) Even with Beyblade not being my speciality I still have to say: I don't own it, although like every Anime I've ever seen I'd love to really. I only have my sacred Blade Wolborg and that's it understand! So dream of suing me and my outer Ego will come kick your ass. Now, going off point again. I do, thankfully, own my outer ego aka my character and his/her beyblade (I'm not revealing anything yet, that's why the first chap is so strange). Don't steal them, or they might kick your ass that same way as if you try suing me, this time though, I'll let them handle the punishment. Mwhahahahaha. Enjoy.
Chapter 1: Close Call
It was calm, peaceful even, silent, the calm before the storm. Above were the tell tale signs of an upcoming storm, as the dark thunderclouds glided across the sky, and the metallic smell in the air moments before it rains. A flash ripped through the dark clouds and then came the loud boom. Moment's later the rain poured down, faster and faster, the birds had long before fled to shelter. The humans of the city paid no heed to Mother Nature's warnings of a storm and hardly looked at the dark sky, before putting up their umbrella's, buttoning up their coats, carrying on with their everyday business.
Towards the centre of the city was a large circular stadium, surrounded by a lush green park. The tension could be felt even outside the park, and the roars of cheers could be heard, the excitement thundered. Yet inside the stadium, there were perhaps ten people scattered over the stadium, and the ghostly cheers vanished. The Beyblade Stadium was at this moment; at peace…all save for a team of Beyblader's. The Blade Breakers.
The blader at the edge of the dish, ready to prove that he was unbeatable stood a smirk on his face and confidence in his eyes. Tyson Granger. The rest of the team behind him, save one stood with grins on their faces, knowing the upcoming victory would be theirs. Even though they knew better than to underestimate their opponent, Tyson was finding it a hard time; the blader didn't seem to have the skill to even beat a baby let alone, the mighty Tyson. Kai Hiwatari, the only with not a smile on his face frowned.
"Don't you listen to anything I say?" Kai said his voice irritated, "Don't underestimate your opponent Tyson."
"Aww come off it Kai, you can see like the rest of us can, he's got this in the bag," Ray said crossing his arms. Kai looked up as the first spots of rain hit him. His grey eyes watching the storm for a moment.
"A storm?" Kai questioned quietly.
"We don't even know who they are," Max said, "They didn't give us names or anything, they just told us to meet them hear thinking they can beat us." Max seemed a little downhearted.
"Their asking to be beaten," Hilary said.
"For once Hilary I agree with you," Tyson said.
"I don't know, we don't have any information on them at all," Dizzy chimed in.
"Wish me luck guys," Tyson said stepping up to the dish that would serve as an excellent graveyard for his competitor's demised beyblade. Tyson looked across; he couldn't see the victim's face at all, only their lips. A smile flashed out as the person walked up to the dish. The person wore a long hooded, leather, trench coat and a pair of black boots.
"Lets do this then," The person said, the voice slightly monotonous neither male nor female. Whoever it was, was trained in disguising themselves.
"First off who are you?" Tyson demanded
"The Unknown Shadow," The figure replied holding its launcher over the dish. Tyson frowned and did the same. Ray stood between them.
"3…2…1…LET IT RIP," Ray called and the Beyblade's shot into the dish.
"Dragoon get this over and done with... ATTACK," Tyson called. The other person smiled again slightly and the blade dodged Dragoon easily. Tyson gasped and then looked even more confident as he lunged into another frenzied attack. The blade dodged each attack. The person turned its head sharply. The blades clashed head on and both blades flew back to their masters, "Nice try," Tyson mocked. The figure didn't say anything; it just turned and with a Kai like stride walked out basically defeated.
"That was pretty close," Kenny, said, "It's a good job their angle was off, or Dragoon may have been smashed."
"What d'ya mean Chief," Tyson said suddenly worried.
"That blade almost fried my circuits it was so strong," Dizzy said.
"But he didn't even release a bit beast, and it already almost fried your circuits?" Ray said.
"Correct," Dizzy replied. Kai was still looking after the blader who could have so easily defeated Tyson. The image of the beyblade spun in his mind, his eyes flew open, and he turned and walked in the opposite direction.
"Hey Kai what do y--," Tyson turned around only to see that Kai was no longer there, "Hey where'd he go?"
"Probably after the blader," Kenny said.
"Bloody weather," The Unknown Shadow said cursing the rain as it stood on the bridge that stretched over the few streams that ran through the park, then just as it turned to leave Kai was there.
"There's only one person who carries that Beyblade," Kai said. All he received was a snort.
Okay then, it isn't much but then again the first chapter wasn't. I tried to keep the plot the same while improving the story. I haven't wrote a decent story for a while so forgive me if I have things a little wrong