This is a story from my friend, Hannah.
She's a goth and she like's the Hanagumi (flower) team.
She's my best friend in the whole world!
If you like the story reveiw it and I'll tell her what you think about it.
She would love to hear what you have to say about her story!
Halloween trick
"Come on Yoh! This will be fun!" Horo horo shouted as he knocked on the door.
He loved halloween and he feelt really scary in his death costume.
Yoh came out. He was dressed as a vampire and had fake fangs in his mouth.
But he did'nt look very happy.
"Anna's not coming any more. She's too busy reading some old book she found" He said sadly.
"Aww, well we can go just go our own" replied Horo horo. He did'nt see why Yoh was so unhappy.
It was'nt uncommon for Anna not to come with them.
After a hour
Yoh and Horo horo came back to see Anna. When they got to the garden they stopped.
"Uh,Yoh did you always have overgrown plants and knee-deep grass?" Asked Horo horo stepping cautionsly towards the door.
Suddenly a peircing shriek rang out.
"HANG ON ANNA! WE'RE COMING!" Yoh shouted, running into the house.
When he got into the hall he saw Anna surrounded by zombies.
When she saw Yoh and Horo horo she cried.
"I didn't mean to do this! I was reading a spell book I found on a wall and I thought I would try a few spells! i didn't mean it!" Anna said.
The zombies turned around and looked at Yoh and Horo horo. Then they moved so there was a path leading to Anna.
Yoh ran and hugged Anna tightly and Horo horo picked the book up.
"Why is it glowing?" Horo horo asked.
"Who cares! We're going to be eaten by zombies!" Anna shouted.
The zombies came closer to them.
BANG!
The door crashed down and three figures ran in. It was the flower team; Marion, Matilda and Kanna.(Mari, Macchi and Kanna)
"Okay, lets kick some zombie butt!" Kanna shouted. Marion turned into a blur, kicking every zombie within two meters.
Kanna joined her whilst Matilda ran and snatched the book from Horo horo.
Flicking through it she found a reverse spell. Reading that page she shouted
"By the power of Earth and Air
Fire and Water
I command the zombie spell
To be reversed!"
All the zombies faded away and Marion and Kanna collapsed to the floor.
"Is that it? That spell didn't even ryhme!" said Anna who was in Yoh's arms.
Instead of anwsering Matilda helped Marion and Kanna up.
"Come on we've got our book! Let's go scare some kiddies or something!" Matilda said.
The flower team walked out of the house at the same time Ren walked in.
"Wow what happened here? And who are the chicks i just passed?" Ren asked.
"Its a long story..."
THE END
Personaly I thought It was a good story but Ren was a bit ooc...
What do you think?