My first Naruto-fanfiction people! So please, be nice.
The time-line is right after Sasuke went to Orochimaru, but Naruto brought him back. This story is Sakura-bashing!
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto (yet… mowhahahahaha)
Chapter one
"OHAYO SAKURA-CHAN! OHAYO SASUKE-TEME!"
The sound of the blond shinobi rang through the village of leaf, better known as Konoha, 5. am in the morning.
Uzumaki Naruto stopped up and eyed his two team-mates who were standing at the team 7 meeting place. Naruto could ignore the fact that they didn't greet him in the morning, and it didn't bother him as much as it did before that the other ignored him all the time when he was trying to get their attention. No, Naruto could live with those things since he had grown used to it. But the thing Naruto hated was that Sakura and Sasuke behaved like the raven haired boy never had run of to Orochimaru. As if Naruto and the others never had sacrificed there lives to get him back.
Sakura was always clinging to Sasuke, and he was always insulting Naruto. Just what they did before Sasuke betrayed them. Sakura didn't even thank him when he turned up in Konoha with a beat up Sasuke on his back.
Naruto sighted. He didn't know how long he could stand to be with this team anymore.
But, as always, Naruto put up his mask of emotions and tried to start a conversation with Sakura.
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Haruno Sakura was not having a good day. Firstly, her mother had awakened her an our to late so she only had time to change outfit five times that morning. Secondly, she had spilled some water over the clothes so she had to change once more. Thirdly, just when she was about to ask Sasuke on a date, Naruto had shown up and ruined her moment.
Yeah, this day was going to suck.
She sighed and went back to admire her long time crush, barely noticing that Naruto was speaking to her.
"-so then Iruka-sensei said that I had to pay for the ramen my self and I was like 'nooooo way', speaking of ramen, do you want to go on a date with me to the ramen stand, Sakura-chan plllleeeeaaassee?" Naruto said dragging on the 'please' and speaking in a unbelievable fast tempo. He looked hopefully at the pink haired girl and gave her the puppy-eyes.
For a moment Sakura didn't answer and her eyes where still on the other member of team 7. Then, when she realized what Naruto had said she turned around to look him strait in the eyes.
Her face was twisted in annoyance and anger was clearly in her voice.
"No Naruto, I will not go on a date with you, not now or not in a million years! Stop asking me out all the time, I'm never going to say yes anyway. You always come between me and my love, and you never do your job at the D-rank's our team gets. All you do is whine about everything else, like that we should get higher mission or that you should be the hokage. So get a life and STOP BOTHERING ME!" The volume in Sakura's voice had been increasing, so she had been screaming the last words.
Naruto's mask cracked as he felt something inside him shatter. His sky-blue eyes turned dull and his shoulders sank down. He turned his head towards the ground so some hair fell onto his forehead and prevented further sight of his face.
"I'm sorry Naruto," Sakura said after some deep breaths. "It's just that I've had a bad morning and sometimes are you very anno-"
"It's okey, Sakura" Naruto interrupted, not using the 'chan' suffix at the end of her name. "I'm sorry I always ask you out and bother you so much. I honestly don't know why I do that all the time. I'm sorry I make your life miserable."
The orange clad boy turned away from the girl and sat down, leaning his back to the bridge. He didn't care to play happy anymore. He noticed after a while that he had two pair of eyes on him, and looked up through the blond looks.
Sakura was staring down at him with an uncertain manner, biting her nails as if she felt as if she had to say something but didn't want do. Sasuke was just plainly looking at him, no emotions shown in his eyes.
A loud POOF was made and the silver haired Kakashi had just made it to the party. He was proud of himself, only 45 minutes to late this time, and was looking forward to see his dear team, especially a certain dark haired one, because he had decided to teach him a new jutsu.
"Ohayo!" he said.
"Your late!" came the original replay back, only this time it missed a voce.
"Maaa, where is Naruto?" Kakashi asked while scratching his head, before noticing the figure on the ground.
"What's bugging him today?" Kakashi asked the other two. Sakura looked a bit guilty, but shrugged and Sasuke didn't answer but just looked bored.
"Alright, since it seems like nobody is in a talking-mood lets get right to the training." Kakashi said and his eye curved up to the happy expression. "Naruto, you will train your chakra control with the tree climbing exercise. Sakura train your stamina with running laps, push-ups and so on. Sasuke, you're coming with me. I have a new technique I want you to learn."
"What?" Naruto growled, rising to a standing position. "You're going to teach Sasuke a new technique! Why can't you teach me something useful, instead of saying every day that I need to get better at my chakra control?"
"Naruto, your chakra control is way to low to learn this. On your current state I can't teach you anything," Kakashi said with a stern face.
"I don't believe it. I was the one who brought the bastard home after he left wasn't it? Why can't I lean the same as him?" Naruto practically yelled. He had to make an effort not to jump up on Kakashi and beat him up.
"You stupid idiot! Don't talk that way abut Sasuke-kun!" Sakura yelled angry.
"Che, dobe. It's because I'm stronger than you. Live with it."
"Naruto," Kakashi said angrily. "I'm your teacher, and I say when you are ready to lean my techniques. And now you are really far from ready so you'll have to do the tree-climbing exercise until I say that you are finished."
That's when Naruto exploded.
"WHAT HAVE YOU EVER TAUGHT ME, HM? YOU CAN'T BE CALLED A TEACHER, BECAUSE YOU'VE NEVER TAUGHT ME ANYTHING! ALL YOU CARE ABOUT IS SASUKE AND TO GET HIM STRONG ENOUGH TO BETRAY THE VILLAGE AGAIN. IT'S THE SAME WITH SAKURA," he turned to her. "ALL YOU WANT TO DO IS TO BE CLOSE TO SASUKE, AND YOU DON'T CARE FOR ME AT ALL, EVEN THOUGH I'VE SAVED YOUR LIFE MORE THAN THE BASTARD HAVE." Naruto was yelling loudly and didn't look on the three others faces. "WELL I TELL YOU WHAT, I DON'T CARE! I DON'T WANT TO BE A PART OF THIS TEAM ANYMORE!"
And with those words, Naruto stormed away.
Naruto could feel his anger going through him like fire through his veins. While he half waked, half ran away from his now former team, the only thing he concentrated on was not to run back and beat both Sasuke and Kakashi into bloody plumps. This new anger was beyond anything he ever felt, even stronger that the emotions that had him bring out Kyuubi for the first time when Haku almost had killed Sasuke and himself.
Red chakra started to pour out from his body, his teeth began to grow sharper and longer and his eyes turned into slits with a red colour taking over the sky blue. His nails on each hand sharpened and dug into his fist.
He looked around. People in the street were beginning to stare, in the worse cases pointing and whispering to each other and Naruto could understand why. His chakra was out of his control and the level of it was still in full speed upwards. Even a rocky without much ninja training would not fail to sense this sort of power.
Naruto stood still. He breathed deeply in a couple of times before counting down from ten to one slowly to regain control over his own body. Slowly he closed his eyes, and tried to ignored the people who stared and whispered to each other. With his breath calm he opened his eyes and found out that the red chakra was slowly disappearing. He looked down on his hands and spotted the claw like nails. They didn't disappear. Nor did the red eyes and the long teethes.
"It's the demon!" somebody yelled, loud enough for everyone around to hear.
"He is letting the Kyuubi out!"
"That monster!"
"I bet his going to let the fox attack the village again."
"I knew we should have killed the monster the instant Kyuubi was sealed inside of him!"
Naruto clenched his fists hard enough to draw blood. He did not want to hurt the people but if they didn't shut up soon, he wasn't sure how long he could control himself. Even though he'd just calmed down, Naruto knew he could burst of anger again, and this time he might end up hurting somebody.
"Kill him!" a man in his forty's that Naruto recognised has Haruno Daiko shouted (this was supposed to be Sakuras father, but I have no idea what his name is. Not important though).
"Yeah, kill the damn demon!" somebody agreed.
As a kunai came towards Naruto in high speed, going for the head, couldn't Naruto take it anymore. He exploded with rage and large red waves of chakra were practically melting of his body. He screamed, a loud heartbreaking scream based on the pain the village had submitted to him.
Before he knew it himself he was jumping from rooftop to rooftop in top speed, until he finally reached his apartment. Once he was there he sat down on his bed and placed his head in his hands. The anger was boiling inside of him and the powerful chakra was still steaming out of the chakra-points at his body. Naruto knew that this was too much to control with just deep breaths. His eyes roamed the single room apartment and they fell on the green backpack. That was when he made up his mind.
Naruto picked up the backpack and packed all the things he needed.
"I'm leaving," he said to himself. "It isn't fair that they treat me the way they do. Not my team, not the villagers… I need to get out of here."
He was looked up to the open window above his bed and jumped up to the windowframe. He turned around and stood still while facing the little apartment. For the last time he let his eyes go over the place he'd grew up in, the place he'd lived alone in for now fourteen long years, but also, the place he called home.
Naruto sighted. He wanted to take a proper goodbye with the ones that saw him for what he was, like Neji, Shikamaru, Chouji, Hinata and Lee. In fact, Naruto had become better friends with everyone from the other teams after the 'Rescue Sasuke Mission'. They looked at him with clear respect because he was the one who got Sasuke back. The only persons he didn't know any better than before was his own team.
He began to get angry again. The thoughts of the team was now making him angrier, and he couldn't wait anymore. He couldn't visit the others anyway. They would just try to talk him into staying, and he had couldn't risk that. He had to get out of here so he didn't hurt anybody with the chakra… or kill anybody from his former team.
He swung the heavy backpack over his shoulders, jumped down to the street below the window and sat of to the direction of Konoha Gates.
Okey, I rewrote the first chapters. I'm going to do that on the other too, soon.
Please tell me what you think...