hay guys this is my first story and really excited about this please review i will only contiue this story if people like it. :) i am not the best at english so please bear with me lol thanks to MidnightDisturbia for helping me on the english part of it.

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The damp grass ran free against my torn and batted feet, the cold night air soothed the burning pain in my arms, neck, back, and legs. I felt like just laying there listening to the stream tricking past reminding me that I had did it, I had escaped but I knew that if I didn't start moving I would not stay that way for long. I ran up to the river and started washing my body trying so hard to get rid of my sent. I knew one of the ways that they tracked people was by smell. Then I heard it the most terrifying think I have herd. The voices of my kidnappers. "oi you she when this way I can smell her." at that point I new they were on my tale if I did not move they would catch up with my in a matter of seconds. Then suddenly my adrenaline kicked into overdrive sending me and my feet as far away for there voice as possible. I had made a gap in-between them and me but that gap was shortly out lived. I hard there feet closing up with mine running at an impossible speed. With in 30 seconds of me running they had caught up with me and had pined me down. "oh god oh god" I half screamed half whispered whilst tear started to run down my face and trying uselessly to pull free form his grip. "Shut up" he commanded. I didn't stop crying I couldn't stop crying. He tied my hands together with a piece of rope whilst his mate was doing the same with my feet. Once they were done he dragged me along the ground using my long black hair .I felt sharp rocks and broken glass make deep cuts allover me. He was constantly shouting at me "shut up shut up" over and over again till he finally gave up had hit me round the head with something hard. My world insanely went black.

I woke up in a room that I new all to well. In a weird déjà vu moment one that I had become all to familiar with. I was lying on a bed with my hand handcuffed to a black metal framed bed with black bedding, black walls, black doors, no windows actually the only source of light ways an oil burning old-fashioned lamp placed far out of my reach. Then I suddenly felt a presence in my room like someone was watching me. I tried to more but as soon as I did I wish I handed. A shooting white hot pain when right thought from the arch of my feet to both temples of my head. I screamed out in agony and as soon as I screamed I heard a laugh coming from the corner. That insanely made me stop my screaming, make me feel anger, and so scared then I felt my stomach knot up. He stared to step out from the shadow in and unnerving pace. "Imogene Imogene Imogene how many time have I told you not to pull something like that." he said in a eerie calm voice that made my hair on the back of my neck stand up on end. He walked over and sat right on the edge of my bed and lent over and looked me right in my eyes he was so close the I could feel he cold ice breath." i told you something bad would happen if you did" he continued in that same sicken voice. "my name is not Imogene its Carmon" I spat. He laugh again this time I was trying so hard not to show that I was afraid." you can't hide your fear for me Imogene I can smell it "as he said that his canine teeth grow bye at lest 2 cm. I close my eyes knowing what he was going to do. Trying to prepare myself for the pain. But nothing can prepare you for the pain of a vampires bite.