Hi,
This is my first fic and I think it's terribly written but I can't make it better, constructive criticism is welcomed.
Disclaimer, this is only once for the whole story: I Don't own Rick Riordans characters.
So done, Now on with the story.
Sally pov
I was making cookies while watching Estelle. I waited for Paul to come Home so we could see a movie. Then the doorbell rang, I opened the door and expected it to be Paul but it was Grover.
"What is going on? Where is Percy?"
I said while looking over his shoulder, there was only air.
"Percy and Annabeth they" Grover's voice broke "T They passed"
I let him in while tears formed in my eyes. "Explain please"
Grover started to talk while tears fell silently from our eyes.
"Camp got attacked and they were the first there. The monster attacked them. When we found out we were getting attacked, we ran with everything we could… they only thing we saw was monster dust and a d-dead Annabeth on Percy's lap. His last words were: I'll see you soon wise girl, my wise girl. Annabeth probably had a claw in her belly and she died fast and Percy passed of injuries. We came too late. I came too late"
We silently mourned their death. Then I heard the door open and close again.
"Sally, I'm Home. Where are you?" I heard Pauls voice from the kitchen
He came in and saw me with tears falling from my eyes.
He ran to me and gave me a hug and asked what happened.
"I-its Percy… He-he passed"
When I looked up I saw Estelle she walked towards me she silently grabbed my hand and said. "Why is mommy sad?" Paul grabbed Estelle and put her on his lab "Estelle, sweetie. Your big brother isn't here anymore"
"No, he is at camp with Annabeth"
"No, sweetheart. He is in Elysium. Visiting Hades."
"When will he come back Daddy?"
I tried to answer but there came no sound out of my throat. Fortunately Paul could explain.
"He won't be coming back. He will miss us, you especially"
"Why is he going then?"
"He doesn't have a choice. He loves you honey, always remember that"
~Line break~
While Paul made Dinner, I went to our cabinets and got a box out. It was filled with photo books. I grabbed the box and took it to Percy's room. I started with the first book. I saw the first ultrasound made of Percy, the next was his birth announcement card, I only made one just to remember this. He was so little back then. She went to the next page. His first bath, him asleep, him drinking some milk and sweeter baby pictures.
She then grabbed the next book. Them together and the beach on Montauk, his school picture, his first time losing a tooth and more of him while being a little child. The next book was the biggest with him as a teenager while, knowing of camp. I saw the 7 smiling, Percy kissing Annabeth, Percy sleeping (and drooling) with Estelle on top of him. She started to cry again. Paul walked in, he picked her up and took her to the sofa. To eat and watch Finding Nemo as it was Percy's favourite movie.
