A beacon for sinners

by The world traveler

Sinners, men and women sentence a million of years without freedom or any rights. They take on dangerous missions to lower their sentences and gain their rights back. Well lets see if a group of Sinners given freedom in a world surrounded with darkness and a race being oppress of their freedom. Well this is my first fanfic so give me all the criticism I want to learn!

1. Prolog

Disclaimer- I don't own RWBY or Freedom wars they both go to their proper owners I only own the OCs

Simon a person of great power working with his many assistants and ally's to fight against On High. All of Simon's assistants have code names each representing a zodiac sign. Each zodiac choosing people to be an ally to Simon and his goal, the goal being the Great Transformation

The Great Transformation is a war that would end all wars. A world were people didn't have to fight over resources and living under a tyrannical rule. A place were people living in the skies only protect them selves and disposes others who don't fallow their rules. This Transformation will change that in time with Simon's assistants and allies will bring the this Transformation.

Ah, but I must get ahold on myself dear readers, this isn't a story of the Great Transformation. THIS is a story about a unique individual who's in contract with me Aquarius. The person in question is a Sinner. A Sinner is a person who doesn't give anything to society. They are then forced to fight against other Sinners to gain rescores for their panopticom.

This Sinner we are talking about is a young man of seventeen years old, whose name is Kazuya Takahashi. Our Sinner is about six ft. three inches tall, having unnatural green eyes. The unnatural part about them you ask? Well since Sinners usually augment their body's to do superhuman feats Kazuya augmented his eyes to scan opponents see their weaknesses and capitalize on them.

If one was to look closely into his eyes they could see the written information in his eyes swirling in a circle. The information can very when not in combat it can inform Kazuya of what a material is made of or to the physical stature of people. This will be very useful when I send Kazuya to a world filled with darkness, for you see dear readers Simon has his sights on many worlds to bring them to peace.

It seems that my time is up and I must go now, Kazuya is in big trouble now with the fighting with On High and such, but I digress. Ta ta readers of the future for the next entre of this book of mine.