Disclaimer: Ok, I'm getting a little sick of this, you outta know if I did
own Max Steel, there would be more episodes, and Max would be with Rachel
on the cartoon series.
A/N: This is based on the True Lies, awesome movie I tells ya. Not everything is exact though. And also, yes, I know it's a lame title. Also, I am writing a similar story .
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False Truths, by Sweet Flames of Vipers
There was a big elegant party for the rich society. Outside the mansion there was a lake. A man broke the ice and rose out of the waters, donning scuba gear. He got behind the mansion and peeled of his suit revealing a tuxedo.
He walked into the mansion undetected, and took a champagne glass and proceeded to blend in, smoothly ran up the stairs, and entered a room. A voice came out from his ear-com.
Berto: It's Big Brother watching you. We know all and see all, hermano.
Max. Very funny.
Berto: Ok, the room has laser sensory. On the floor, so be careful.
Max: Got it covered. Going turbo. *taps chest, burst of yellow flashes*
Max, stepped back, dashed and jumped over to the other end of the room.
Berto: All right, now take the plat card and slide it on the left side of the picture frame.
He took the card out of his jacket and did what Berto told him, and the safe opened. Max took out the disk in the safe, closed it and jumped out through the door and went down the stairs. He caught a woman's eye, she walked to him.
Laura: I thought I knew all of John Dread's friends. Nice to meet you, Laura Chen.
Max: A pleasure, Max Steel.
Berto: *typed into his computer* Laura Chen, expert on Incan artifacts.
A man walked past the two and up the stairs. Into the room and checked on the disk. . .
Max: *turns to the statue by the stairs* This is very interesting, Incan?
Laura: You do know your artifacts.
The man, ran down the stairs, and pulled the silent security breach alarm.
Berto: Hermano, the security breach alarm's been pulled, get to the other side of the mansion undetected. Tango music start.
Max: You tango?
Laura: Yes. . . *Max pulls her onto the dance floor*
The two impressively tangoed across the room.
Laura: And I thought this was just going to be a night boring bankers, and billionaires.
Max: *smiles* I'm sorry, but I got a plane to catch.
Laura: So soon? *hands business card* Call me.
Max: Of course walks out.
To Be Continued.
A/N: This is based on the True Lies, awesome movie I tells ya. Not everything is exact though. And also, yes, I know it's a lame title. Also, I am writing a similar story .
REVIEW STORY!!!
False Truths, by Sweet Flames of Vipers
There was a big elegant party for the rich society. Outside the mansion there was a lake. A man broke the ice and rose out of the waters, donning scuba gear. He got behind the mansion and peeled of his suit revealing a tuxedo.
He walked into the mansion undetected, and took a champagne glass and proceeded to blend in, smoothly ran up the stairs, and entered a room. A voice came out from his ear-com.
Berto: It's Big Brother watching you. We know all and see all, hermano.
Max. Very funny.
Berto: Ok, the room has laser sensory. On the floor, so be careful.
Max: Got it covered. Going turbo. *taps chest, burst of yellow flashes*
Max, stepped back, dashed and jumped over to the other end of the room.
Berto: All right, now take the plat card and slide it on the left side of the picture frame.
He took the card out of his jacket and did what Berto told him, and the safe opened. Max took out the disk in the safe, closed it and jumped out through the door and went down the stairs. He caught a woman's eye, she walked to him.
Laura: I thought I knew all of John Dread's friends. Nice to meet you, Laura Chen.
Max: A pleasure, Max Steel.
Berto: *typed into his computer* Laura Chen, expert on Incan artifacts.
A man walked past the two and up the stairs. Into the room and checked on the disk. . .
Max: *turns to the statue by the stairs* This is very interesting, Incan?
Laura: You do know your artifacts.
The man, ran down the stairs, and pulled the silent security breach alarm.
Berto: Hermano, the security breach alarm's been pulled, get to the other side of the mansion undetected. Tango music start.
Max: You tango?
Laura: Yes. . . *Max pulls her onto the dance floor*
The two impressively tangoed across the room.
Laura: And I thought this was just going to be a night boring bankers, and billionaires.
Max: *smiles* I'm sorry, but I got a plane to catch.
Laura: So soon? *hands business card* Call me.
Max: Of course walks out.
To Be Continued.