PLEASE REVIEW THIS REIXNAGISA SHOUNEN-AI!

It was late night and Rei and Nagisa were lying on Rei's bed. Rei was holding Nagisa.
"Rei, I love you so much!" Nagisa said.
"I love you too!" Rei said.
They went in for a gentle but tender kiss. Instead knowing the butthole but in this thing, a gentleman, roughly kissing his shining lips.
Kissing Nagisa violently, it comes to an end.
"Oh Rei!" Nagisa said.
*Nagisa raised Rei's shirt and genlty rubbed Rei's nipples*
"I love you Nagisa. I don't like know how to show you though" Rei said.
"Tommorow, when we go to school, we need to invite Rin over here" Nagisa said.
"Nagisa, let's go to sleep, it's getting late" Rei said.
*Rei squeezed Nagsia's butt*
"Oh Rei! How naughty!" Nagisa said.
*They went to sleep together, but before the night was over, they sealed it with a tender kiss.
*The Next Morning*
"Nagisa, we have to go to school! We over slept!" Rei said.
"Last night, our last kiss last night, I feel, you weren't into it. Are you mad at me?" Nagisa said.
"No.I was just tired. I love you. I could never be mad at you." Rei said.
"Ok" Nagisa said *They were both ready for school and right when they're at the door with the door open*
"The bus should be here any second now" Nagisa said.
"How can a boy be so sexy?!" Rei thought.
"Nagisa?" Rei said.
"Yes?" Nagisa said with a soft voice.
"I love you so much!" Rei said.
*They were making out violently*
*The bus comes along*
"ALL ABO-" The bus driver stopped and everyone watched Rei and Nagisa make out.
"Nagisa! You were so fricken cute! Why were you gay?!" Eilly yelled on the bus.
"All the hot one are usually gay" Gou said.
"I'm hot and I'm- ok never mind" Rin said.
*He sat back down*
*Nagsia pulls away from Rei's grip*
"The bus is here" Nagisa said.
*Nagisa and Rei get all up in the bus*
"Why were you guys kissing where we can see you?" Gou asked.
"We had no idea you guys were there!" Rei said.
"Why didn't you guys ever tell us?" Rin said.
"We thought it was sorta obvious" Nagisa said.
"Plus we wanted to tell at school" Rei said.
"I don't mean to be rude but are you guys dating?" Rin asked.
"N-no. We're not." Nagisa said.
"So you guys have already slept together, but aren't dating nor are you married?" Eilly said.
"Yeah. Don't stick you nose so far in my anus, Eilly" Rei said.
"He means buisness" Nagisa said.
"Ok. You guys are like really weird" Gou said.
"So why aren't you guys dating?" Haru asked.
"Wait a minute. I just thought of something. Rin doesn't go to this school and we go on a train. Not a bus" Rei said.
"Oh, honey! Your so funny!" Nagisa said.
*They did a quick kiss*
"I uhhhhh" Gou said muttered.
*She opened her window and vomited*
"Ewwwwwwwwwww! She threw up looking at how gay you are!" Eilly said.
"It's just how we are! It doesn't matter that I like to like mens faces..." Nagisa said.
"WHAT? OTHER THAN MINE?" Rei said.
"I've never had another boyfriend before you, I promise!" Nagsia said.
"Good. You gave me scare!" Rei said.
"Have you had any boyfriends before me?" Nagisa asked.
"No. You are my first and the only on eI will ever have. I love you" Rei said.
"I love you too!" Nagsia said.
"Gay love isn't accepted here!" the bus driver said.
"So? We love eachother!" Rei said.
"I don't care! Now get off my fricken bus!" the bus driver said.
"At least he got us to school" Rei said.
*Everyone got out of the bus and into school*
"Rei, Nagisa, please no gay things at school, ok?" Gou asked.
"Only if we can still go go to the restroom" Rei said.
"Ok. Just don't tell me what you did in there!" Gou said.
"Ok. Let's go quickly before school starts" Rei said.
"Ok" Nagisa said.
*They went to the bathroom*
TO BE CONTINUED PLEASE REVIEW THIS IS MY FIRST SHONEN-AI OR HOW EVER YOU SPELL IT!