Hi U-J-A here, I decided I would start my own Fict and well please R & R:
Disclaimer: I do not own Camelot or Nintendo in anyway but I have completed Golden Sun 1 & 2 and know all about the game.
Prologue
Ages ago, or so the stories tell, the power of Alchemy ruled over the world of Weyard.
Alchemy wrought the base elements of humanity into thriving civilizations, like lead into gold.
But in time, man's dreams gave birth into untold strife. Dreams of endless riches, of eternal life, of dominion all over that lived... Dreams of conquest of war.
These dreams would have torn the world apart if not for a few brave and wise men, who sealed away the power of Alchemy deep in Mt. Aleph's Sol Sanctum.
Chapter 1 Anchol Festival
now our story takes place in Weyard during this Golden Age...
Reholl the older of the two was an adept from the town of Vale. He was a tall Mars adept male, and characteristically had the fiery red hair which he had grown long enough to make a ponytail. But the Strange thing about Reholl was that he had intimidating amber coloured eyes which had mars burning brightly within them. He wore armour forged entirely out of Orihalkon and had Mythril silver clothing with quick boots and a war ring equipped. On his side rested the sol blade. It was a brilliant work forged by a lost race which created it in honour of the sun god. Its former owner, an old man who had moved to vale from the frozen north, had given it to Reholl as a gift for helping the old man when he was in danger. He taught Reholl how to wield the sword and unleash its secret power, Megiddo. In return for the sword, Reholl promised to return it to its final resting place, Mars temple.
His partner in travel, Princess Sevien, was the sister of the Queen of Lalivero who was a Venus adept. She was medium in height and had a figure all Lavierian women envied. She had an almost gold coloured hair with blue eyes brighter than sapphires. She wore a jewelled tiara on her head and wore a black cloak that covered her entire body and the top half of her face, giving her a shifty, though concealed look. Her weapon in choice was the Acheron's scythe. It was a cursed artefact said to be retrieved from the underworld. It was found in old ruins north of Lalivero and was guarded by the royal family and was one day claimed by Sevien, and became a part of her. Although it was blessed and the curse broken, she still was a woman not to mess with. One strike from her Acheron's scythe and the grim reaper would be on his way to claim another soul.
They both travelled through the sea of time to Lemuria as they were both attending prince Hydros' coronation ceremony. As he was the strongest warrior in vale, Reholl was sent to protect the mayor on his way Lemuria. And Sevien being the princes went with her sister. They had fallen in love with one another when they met at the buffet table, both starving. They talked all night and the next day they were engaged. They both went to live in Vale as Sevien didn't like living in the palace and always dreamed of living in an ordinary house. That same year it was the talk of the town that the newly weds had a baby coming their way. When the baby was born, it was a boy so they named him matt. But one day when climbing Mt aleph, a Grand Chimera beast attacked the family. Reholl had finished it off with a massive Megiddo. But it was too late. Sevien was hit hard in the back and 6 month old matt had been flung out of her arms and into the air. Every year, since then, on Matt's birthday, Reholl and Sevien went to that spot where a small forget me not flower patch had started to grow.
During their third summer climbing to that spot, they met, "the wise one" who told them of a fate that man would plague weyard with. Both understood of what Burdon was placed on them and went to Imil where they were to meet the healer's apprentice and then to seek out a wise man known as Thomas of Tolbi.
When they reached imil they went to the village's sanctum. In there were the healer and a young boy who had aqua-blue hair and emerald green eyes. He was around the same height as Sevien and wore a common travel tunic with a cape made of dragon scales. He had equipped the Clotho's Distaff, which had the power to restore health. He seemed to be a timid boy and seemed to be respectful of others.
The Healer said "may we help you, neither of you appear to be ill,"
"No, we wish to speak with your apprentice" answered Sevien
"Armorie?" questioned the healer
"If that's the name of your apprentice, yes!" said Reholl
And from then Armorie had joined Reholl and Sevien in their quest. He like all the other 30 members of the mercury clan was a protector of the Hermes fountain, which was capable of fully replenishing any person who was to drink from its water.
They journeyed to Anchol to find Thomas of Tolbi, the architect of the Tolbi Colosseum and the two legendary towers, Shrine of the sea god, Tundaria tower who was also said to have a hand in the design of Anemos Sanctum, which wasn't far from Jupiter Mountain.
The season was Spring during the annual Anchol festival...
As crowds were gathering around the city square, Reholl and Sevien were travelling though the streets to get a closer look of what the commotion was all about. As they moved toward the city square, they passed an old man, who seemed to be alarmed by their presence. He quickly got up from the bench he was sitting on and hurried toward the inn.
"Look at them," said Sevien in a cold tone, as she watched the old man run off, "they are making me feel uncomfortable". She paused and then said "how can anyone celebrate at a time like this anyway."
"Well they are Ancholeans, Sevien, what do you expect." responded Reholl, "they do not know of what is happening. They are too involved with their own affairs to care about the rest of the world and also they are in a remote land only accessible by sea. So news of IT probably hasn't reached this far yet. Anemos and Lemuria know what is happening and have responded in their own ways. Don't worry, when IT happens, Anchol too will know of the perils of what mankind has unleashed upon Weyard."
"Welcome all to the annual Anchol festival, Honouring Sarkyahn." Announced the rather robust mayor of Anchol. "A hundred years to the day, Sarkyahn the demon slayer that put the spirit of the Avimamander to rest in the south-western cave of Champa cove. For the celebration of these one hundred years of this festival, we have rounded up our greatest adepts to build a tower to look upon all of the surrounding land, as a treat for all of Anchol. In previous years, these men and women have built two just like it. One is in the south Tundaria and one on the Indra continent. Now, feast upon the delights of this festival" At this the crowds cheered and then began to celebrate their annual festival.
"Where can we look to find him" asked Sevien, "we don't even know what he looks like"
"Don't worry, he is here to design Anchol temple, there for he will be staying at the inn," explained Armorie, coming out of the shadows.
"Amorei, What are you doing here, we told you to stay at the harbour!" stated Reholl, "but I guess you can help us, we need to find a way to find this Thomas of Tolbi. With your cloak ball we can get into his room and kidnap him"
"We can not," Amorei said, "he is a Jupiter adept and he knows of our presence."
"I'm not getting what you mean" said Sevien
"Earlier on when you were making your way to where crowds were forming, he walked past and sensed you were adepts. I noticed him using mind read and that's why he was so quick to leave."
"What, that was him, that old man who wore the green tunic? That man didn't look like an adept though." Said Sevien.
"I should have known. His tunic had the Anemos crest on it. Only those who were in the building of the Anemos sanctum are allowed to wear it, but I thought he wore it because he was one of the ones working on Anchol tower." Said Reholl in a frustrated voice.
"If he was he would have been building now wouldn't he," suggested Sevien.
"Well I suggest we hire a room in the inn and pay a little visit to this Thomas and 'reason' with him!" Reholl said getting up and directing the group toward the inn.
Pleas R&R this story. It is my first so I want to know how it is. This is just a rough draft for a story but I will make this chapter longer than this.
If it isn't too good tell me and ill see what I can do, but please no flames, I only want to know what's bad with the story not me
Also, the introduction was from Golden Sun's creators.