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"OUR PARTING AT THE HORIZON IN FRONT OF THE HEAVENS ABOVE"
I look at her, standing their in the open she look very angelic and I hope time would stop here and now I pray to the highest powers, that she would stay here with me.
her hair is now let down and is moving with the wind and her beautiful emerald eyes were glittering from her face how I loved her so much, in these few moments I was
hoping a miracle would happen and I could make time rewind again, I want to show her how I feel, please let her stay. I try to hold back my tears as she speaks in her position
how her gown sways to the winds facing the coming dawn as I watch at a distance, savoring every moment; and every second cause this is how I want to remember her because
I know deep in my heart that our parting can't be stop.
''Its all over now right'' she said as she looks at the horizon
''Yeah its all over''oh how much I want you to know that I love you so much how I like to stay with you forever
''As your sword I have defeated all your enemies and protected you until the end I'm glad I was able to fulfill my oath''
''Yeah you did well'' I tried as hard as I can to hold back my tears then, I wanted her to stay here with me forever.
''before I go, theirs something I need to tell you'' I turn around, and put on the best smile I could ever give him, at the very least I want to be a good memory to him. I'm sorry but I must fullfill my destiny, I must go back
to my kingdom...... I know it hurts, My heart is screaming your name...oh Shirou please bear with me a few moments more, please hold on.'
'please stop just stay with me I don't want to end it all here, give me a chance I'll make you the most happiest person in the world, I don't want to part yet, I refuse, my paradise is to be with you.... I'll die if you go away I'll die in pain and sorrow' I mourn in my thoughts as I await what she had to say to me
as I turn around with my eyes closed I call my beloveds name in a soft voice"Shirou"as I said I open my eyes 'at the very least I must leave you with one last gift that I've been hoping to say to you in the past two weeks I wanted you to know this before I go. I'm sorry, Shirou I can't hold on much longer good-bye I will never forget you................and I hope you will never forget me as well Shirou you mean everything to me and......
I know you know this, I must bid you good-bye and I'm sorry' I stated in my mind.
"Shirou" I'm sorry, I'm going to cause you much pain. Please forgive me.
" I will............always love you" ' their I said it I have never open up my feelings like this to anyone, before but I love him I putted all my emotions and feelings to these last few words '
' I feel so blessed now that I could see him for one last time before I go back , he is smiling to me and I pictured the sight as I await our out coming parting at the horizon in front of the heavens above '
as I look at him picturing him, my lover smiling back at me I pray that he would be happy and also I prayed the he would find someone that would give him the love that I could never give him. The thought of it hurts me, but I can't do anything, if anything else I wish for him to love me solely. But I know he will because I know I have won his sole affections and I know deep in my heart that he will and would love me until death do us part.....
and that is why I'm scared that he will not move on, and will still love me forever, he will live in missery knowing that I'm not their with him......'oh Shirou'
while I'm gone,
don't cry,
don't you dare shed
a tear.
don,t mourn for me,
or pray for me,
or miss me.
don't look always
behind you,
remembering
old days,old sins
and old tears
don't stop for me,
or wait for me....
just keep walking
with your face towards
the future.
don't worry about me because I wont stop, I'll find a way for us to be together I promise you Shirou.... I promise.
this was the last thought I had in my mind before the time came for us to part. As the sun blinded him and my time has called out to me. As my vision began to blur I stole one last look at my lover before the darkness took me.
shirou POV
' WHAT!!!!! NO OH GOD NO '
' you love......... me? I don't even deserve you I ordered you to do such a painful act I don't deserve to be love ............no this can't be, someone! anyone! help me she's gonna disappear no please stay. '
' NO!! I regreted everything, I regret giving that painful order, but...........if I really do love her then I'll find a way to be with her '
' I promise you I will find a way to be with you........ I............ promise '
' I swear at the seven heavens I will be with you, even death can't stop me for loving you Saber'
I screamed at my thoughts as I savor every moment looking at her, I never look away, I stared at her beauty that only she posses. I could have sworn time stopped their and then but as the sun blinded me for a moment I composed my self regain control and look again. I find that she wasn't their anymore ' yeah I knew she'd do that'
I went back home and as I entered the house Fujinee was at the door with a look of concern on her face I tried to show her a fake smile like everything was alright and she just said.
"I know you too well shirou don't show me a fake smile....what happened?"
I couldn't hold my emotion now as I collapsed to my knees exploding with tears as I cried and mourn in front of her.
"shes gone Fujinee and I'm never going to see her again she's gone.....I couldn't stop her from going away I'm so stupid,STUPID,STUPID STUPID!!!.. " I pounded my head on the ground as I said this
"I'm sorry for your loss " she hold me in her arms as I was crying and Sakura came and hug me as well as they comfort me in my sobs.
TO BE CONTINUED
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