Here's the prologue of my story Eon...Please give me some good tips/reviews so i can become a better writer, and if you wanna see some anime characters in this chapter, tell me! I also know that this is a little wordy and should be more in detail but this is my first story so go easy on me :p
Prologue
"Sir, we're losing numbers fast," said an android, "we're not gonna win the war if we don't retreat now!"
"I'm well aware of that," said Rayclopsalon, "I know that retreating is a good idea but it'll make me look bad as an android leader. Plus that leviathan makes things worse."
"Sir, the alien leader Galatrax needs to talk to you on our monitor." said another android.
"Alright…" said Rayclopsalon. An alien image came over the front of the ships monitor.
"Rayclopsalon, we can't defeat the Dark Leviathan! We need to retreat!"
Rayclopsalon glared at him, "So Galatrax, the big bad alien leader, is scared of a destructive, 200 foot monster who has the power to destroy planets?"
"Well, it'd be better than getting our butts handed to us and dying!" said Galatrax, "Do you think we can still win?"
Rayclopsalon had a triumphant smile on his face, "Actually, I think the legendary Ibaraki clan on Earth can help us…because they got him." Galatrax went from worried to being nervous and said, "It's worth a shot. And after that, we can continue our war." Therefore, the android and alien races retreated from the legendary Dark Leviathan. A few hours later, the android race finally made it to Earth.
"We're here, sir," said one of the commander androids.
"Yea, I can tell," said Rayclopsalon (who was already out of the ship and in the city that the Ibaraki clan lived. Rayclopsalon knocked on the door and a 28-year-old man, who was sporting spiky blood-red hair, answered.
"Who are you?" asked the man staring up at Rayclopsalon (because Rayclopsalon was 6' 5" and Reagon was 5' 7").
"Are you Reagon Ibaraki?" asked Rayclopsalon.
Reagon looked at Rayclopsalon, "Yea, who wants to know?"
"What's going on dad?" asked an 10-year-old boy with spiky black hair who was sparring with his 9-year-old brother, who had spiky blond hair, and a 2 year old boy, who had spiky blood-red hair ,was watching.
"Nothing is wrong Rygon and Roegon. This is just a friendly businessperson that I am going to talk to outside. You guys keep training, I'll be back in a second."
"So what do you want?" asked Reagon.
"Well we need your help to take down the Dark Leviathan." said Rayclopsalon.
"I thought my dad killed him." said Reagon.
"Apparently not!" yelled Rayclopsalon, "We need your powers to defeat him. We came here so you could defeat this thing and my alien friend can continue our little war."
Their conversation was cut short due to a loud roar and the Dark Leviathan came down from the skies.
"Told ya." said Rayclopsalon. The Leviathan looked around and caught a glimpse of Reagon. It let out a loud, blood-curdling roar, released a black beam from its mouth, and shot towards Reagon. Reagon jumped out of the way but realized that the beam was headed straight for the Ibaraki Clan's home. Before Reagon could save his family, he yelled something and the house exploded. Reagon could not believe that his family just died right before his eyes. He turned and faced the Dark Leviathan with pure anger and hatred in his eyes.
"You and your pathetic alien friend can stay back…I'll kill this stupid creature myself…and then you guys are next for bringing this thing here!" yelled Reagon.
"I'd like to see you try." Galatrax said with a tough guy sound in his voice.
Then twelve different colored lights surrounded Reagon and in a flash of light, his appearance completely changed. Then, the battle against the Dark Leviathan raged on for several weeks and ended with a huge explosion caused by Reagon and there were no remains of any of the two battlers after the smoke subsided. Rayclopsalon looked over at Galatrax who was beaten up as badly as he was, "Well, I guess we caused enough damage here. The last surviving member of the Ibaraki clan and the Dark Leviathan both died in battle."
Galatrax started to make his way toward his ship, "Shall we continue this battle of ours here in a few years?"
"Why not? Give it a few years and we'll be good and we can make this planet our battlefield." Rayclopsalon said.
As Galatrax left Earth, Rayclopsalon let out a sigh and sent a small ray of dark light, which headed toward the burnt down Ibaraki home. As Rayclopsalon headed to his ship, he looked back at the destroyed city, "And I have a hunch that there will be a pretty epic battle here on Earth if they step onto the battle field."
With that said, Rayclopsalon took his leave, and went to the deepest voids of the space...
Alright, the prologue is done but chapter one shall be up soon. don't forget to review!
