Summary: What if Tris was born into the Eaton family and Tobias was a Prior. The war doesn't happen. All our favorite characters, and Marcus *the evil jackass*, are here. What will Beatrice and Tobias do. Will Tris be abused by Marcus like Tobias in the original book? What will Tris tell Christina about where she comes from? Guess your gonna have to find out by reading.
A/N: For all of you that have followed or faved my other story, I'm Coming Back For You, I am continuing with that story. It's just I thought of this and wanted to see if anyone likes the idea. As always constructive criticism and ideas and reviews are always welcome and appreciated. The story starts out a few weeks before Tobias's choosing ceremony. Caleb and Beatrice are still the same age, just in this they're in different families.
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Tobias POV( I will be using his real name until he leaves Abnegation)
My choosing ceremony is in a few weeks. I don't know what I'm choosing, just that I can't stay here in Abnegation where I'm trapped and can't be who I am. Mom understands that. She's the one that's always encouraging me to do what I have to, what I need to, to be free, to be myself.
"Honey?" Moms never been the non-affectionate Abnegation mother that she's supposed to be. That's one of the things I like about her, she still has traces of her old faction in her.
"Yea mom?" I say.
"Your awake. Good." She replies.
"Why? What's wrong?" I ask nervously.
"Nothing's wrong. I just wanted to talk to you. Do you know what you are going to choose? You don't have to tell me, I was just wondering."
"I'm not sure yet. But I will yell you. I know that at least. As soon as I make my decision I'll make sure your the first to know." Just then the weird crying noises start up. I don't actually know if it's crying it just sounds like it. I've never really asked either. "Mom? Why does it sound like someone is crying every night? I mean we're Abnegation we're supposed to help people right? Shouldn't we help that person that's crying too?" I ask her.
"Honey that's not someone crying. That's the wind passing through the houses. You know you could be Abnegation of you truly wanted to be. Your caring enough." She says to me. Though I can tell she's keeping something from me, I don't press any harder on the subject.
"Yea, but I still think I'm not selfless enough for Abnegation." I tell her. That's always my reply. It's not that I don't want to be here or that I want to get away from my family no, I love my family, I just don't feel like I'm selfless enough for this place. After that my mother goes out of the room and I drift into a dreamless sleep.
A/N: I know it's a really short chapter and in sorry, but I needed to make it this way.
Was Tobias right is there really someone crying or is it really what Natalie says, that it's just the wind?
Do you like where this is heading; can you guess where this is heading?
As always I would really appreciate reviews. If you don't review, I will find you and make your life miserable. *wink wink*