I wanted to remake the story. I didn't like the first chapter that much.
Disclaimer: I only own my OCs
Jasmine was sitting by a tree relaxing. She looked up when she saw her younger cousin Alvin run up to her.
"Alvin, what's wrong?" She asked.
"Some koopa gave me this." Alvin handed her the note.
"Come over to my castle. We want to talk to you"
Bowser
"It's a trick." Jasmine said, laughing.
"You're not going?" Alvin asked.
"No. This is a joke." Jasmine said.
Later that day, Jasmine and Alvin were playing a game, when they heard something from behind a bush.
"What's that?" Alvin asked.
"I dunno." Jasmine replied. They stared at the bush. Then Larry and Bowser jr jumped out.
"What are you doing here?" Alvin asked, hiding behind Jasmine.
"Why didn't you come to the castle?" Bowser jr asked.
"It was a trick. You were just trying to kidnap us." Jasmine said.
"Man, she's smart!" Larry thought.
"It's not a trick!" Bowser jr said.
"I don't believe you." Jasmine grabbed Alvin and ran away. They hid behind a tree.
"Are they gone?" Alvin asked.
"I think so." Jasmine replied. When Jasmine turned around, they saw Ludwig standing behind them.
"Why are you here?" Jasmine asked. He didn't reply. Ludwig grabbed them and threw them in the Clown Car.
"Let us go Ludwig!" Jasmine said as they entered the castle. Jasmine tried to escape, but Ludwig held her tighter. He walked down the hall and took them into a room. Ludwig locked the door and left.
"What are they going to do to us Jazzy?" Alvin asked.
"I don't know." Jasmine replied.
I don't think this chapter was good. I'll try to put the next one up today.