I suck at summaries and titles but if you are reading this, then you obviously got past that issue.
This is a murder story and people are gonna die, so don't get mad if your fav character dies. Please review and tell me what you think. Its rated "R" to be on the safe side. It's not "R" yet, but it will be (killing wise, not sex wise)
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The hot steam from the shower surrounded Jean Grey as she washed her silky red hair. She rubbed the caressed the shampoo into her hair. Jean liked nothing more than a nice hot shower after a long soccer practice. Lately, the soccer practices had been twice as long as normally, due to the big game coming up in two weeks. She had been twice as tired and twice as sweaty. The steaming, hot water felt wonderful after running for more than two hours.
The patter of the water hitting the marble floor of the shower blocked out all the noises coming from the Xavier mansion. Maybe it was too loud. It was certainly too loud for her to hear the blood curdling scream from downstairs.
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Kinda short, huh? I know I'm leaving ya hanging, but oh well. Anyway tell me what you think so far. I don't want to continue if no one is gonna read it. So read & review!
This is a murder story and people are gonna die, so don't get mad if your fav character dies. Please review and tell me what you think. Its rated "R" to be on the safe side. It's not "R" yet, but it will be (killing wise, not sex wise)
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The hot steam from the shower surrounded Jean Grey as she washed her silky red hair. She rubbed the caressed the shampoo into her hair. Jean liked nothing more than a nice hot shower after a long soccer practice. Lately, the soccer practices had been twice as long as normally, due to the big game coming up in two weeks. She had been twice as tired and twice as sweaty. The steaming, hot water felt wonderful after running for more than two hours.
The patter of the water hitting the marble floor of the shower blocked out all the noises coming from the Xavier mansion. Maybe it was too loud. It was certainly too loud for her to hear the blood curdling scream from downstairs.
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Kinda short, huh? I know I'm leaving ya hanging, but oh well. Anyway tell me what you think so far. I don't want to continue if no one is gonna read it. So read & review!