So i'm one of these I wish Jack didn't die people, who isn't? Anyway please tell me what you think!
Rose was laid on the piece of wood Jack had found for her in the middle of the freezing ocean, wondering, hoping, and begging that a lifeboat would return to get them soon.
Oh how Titanic had changed her life, she had escaped Cal, her mother and those other insufferable 1st class now-it-alls. The only two she was sad to leave behind were Molly Brown and a man called Mr. Andrews. Rose let a tear slide down her cheek as she realised Mr. Andrews would probably be dead now, the last time she saw him he had been stood in front of the clock in on of the halls, he had worn no lifebelt and wasn't even going to try and escape. Molly was what people had called new money, she was brazen loud and always said what she thought, Rose admired that in her, too many women in the first class world faded into the scenery, let everything be decided for them. Rose had been one of those women, her insides screaming the opposite of whatever she said, when she met Jack it all changed. She began to say what she really thought, she had to get away from Cal and the others, she needed to be with Jack. Because from one of the first moments she had seen him, Rose knew she loved Jack.
Jack floated in the freezing water still clutching Roses hand. The cold had taken over every part of his body as he fought to live. He had to live, he needed to be there for Rose. His friends laughed at Jack when he first told them about her, they said he would never get with a first class girl, not because he wasn't a nice guy, but because he was third class and she was first class, and that was just the way the world worked. He felt his body slowly giving up on him, he was feeling more tired with every second that went by. A tear rolled down his cheek as he thought about his friends from third class, most of them would be dead now, especially the men, they had no chance of getting in a lifeboat. He practically cried for his best friends on the ship Tommy and Fabrizio. Tommy, who they had met on the boat had been a real friend, he was cruelly shot by one of the lightollers who were guarding the lifeboats as he tried to get in one, still it was probably better than the fate that most of the bodies in the water now had met. Fabri was an old friend of Jacks, he had helped him when he came to England from America, he was on Titanic with Fabri after they won the tickets playing poker. Jack had been looking forward to showing Fabrizio all the great things about America, and Fabrizio had been eager to see them. Jack had not seen him for a while now, Jack tried not to think about the fact that he was probably floating in the sea now, dead, or at the bottom of it if he wasn't wearing a lifebelt. Every particle in Jacks body wanted him to give up, to just let himself die, but Jack couldn't. He had to stay alive for Rose, because he loved her.
And then Jack was engulfed by darkness as unconsciousness claimed him.
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