Disclaimer: I don't own Shugo chara or anything considered copyright. Sorry for any oocness.
A/N: yahh, so I know I still haven't update chibi fluffiness in a week but guess what? I'm too lazy! XD Sorry. I'm not discontinuing it's just that I'm not happy with the story but I 'm waaay to lazy to re-write unlike my friend zodiac king.
Hop, step jump!
The creek was as serene as always with its running water blending in with the tranquil scene. The crickets whispered among each other and the rays of gold slithered through the intricate branches. Amber orbs followed the green amphibian who moved along the rocks and pebbles. It hopped over from one rock to another. It then stepped to the right preparing for another leap. Splash! It then slipped and stumbled into the clear stream. She would have turned around and dismissed the scene if not for another disturbance to the rhythm of the place. The four-legged creature then shot its head out of the water and clambered onto another rock. This time, it stepped with its left foot, and jumped into the air! It soared as a royal king for a brief moment before landing on the target. Ribbit!
He smiled, and made his way down from the wood to the dirt, a pair of amber eyes piercing his every move. Cautiously, he stepped onto a rock hoping his feet wouldn't fail him. Hopping from one to another, his feet danced among the freckles of grays, blacks, and blues. She watched intently for flaws. As he readied for the grand leap, he jumped and soared like the majestic frog, only to land and lose his balance. The droplets of water splattered in applause. He shook his head in disappointment, and was ashamed of himself. She walked down from the bridge to the ground and laughed. After the laughter diminished, she then hopped onto a rock, stepped onto another, and jumped onto the last.
"You did it in the wrong order."
So what do you think? should I re-write this? It's a bit too ooc isn't it...
Tell me any ideas for the next! Drew, draw, drawn! and please please please review! Pwease?