The Final Battle
The battle was nearing an end. Nande, the last rider and her dragon Dramor had just killed Murtagh and then proceded to kill the king's magicians and wipe out most of his army. All the while Eragon and Saphira had been fighting Galbatorix and Shruiken in the keep's dragon had placed numerous wards around it to keep the Varden and Nande from helping Eragon. With the power she had just gained from the army Nande obliterated the wards and the walls around the hold. That left little more than a plateau. Dramor landed just as Roran,Arya,and Nasuada arrived. They all began to join the fight, but Nande knocked them backwards with magic. "This is Eragon's fight and Galbatorix would kill you anyway,"she began to rush forward anyway, but was met by a scaly, green tail."What the hell was that for?!" Roran screamed. You would do well not to speak to me like such human,Dramor said with a Eragon and the king came dangerously close with their duel and the party stepped back. They were all disrupted when Roran shrieked; they turned to see Roran fall to the ground with an arrow through his heart. Eragon roared in fury and uttered several lines from the ancient language under his breath. The archer that had killed Roran fell writhing in pain, then after a moment exploded in a bloody mist."That was dark magic,"Nande said in her usual heartless then screamed, "How can you watch him die and still be so cold?!"she glared into Nande's yellow cat eyes for a moment. Nasuada was angered beyond reason and tried to slap inhuman speed Nande caught Nasusda's wrist and broke it in three places. The king took advantage of the confusion and threw his black-silver sword and stabbed Saphira through her chest into her lungs and heart. She roared in pain for a moment then abruptly fell to the ground in walked over and retrieved his sword from Saphira. "Don't touch her" Eragon, who had just gotten up said with a voice of thunder. Nande's usually emotionless face recoiled as she felt the seething hatred that emanated from Eragon. Galbatorix lunged forward and stabbed Eragon through the heart. He simply threw back his head and laughed,a savage and inhuman laugh full of malice. Galbatorix tried to yank his blade out,Eragon, still laughing like a madman,threw him back and smote him in the chest with both Brisinger and his own wasn't dead and began screaming as his organs began to expand and exploded.(Just as the archer had before)Eragon laughed for several he coughed blood twice and the world fell away. "Noooooooooooo"screamed rolled from Nande's catlike eyes.
Author's notes:Alright it had trouble posting the first time but I think I fixed me know if there are any let me know if you want the story to go may not be dead.(Smiles)If you think so it may be a while,because I'm working on The Dark Is Rising.(the story where I think I finally learned how to fix my stories.