I'm redoing Hold Your Breath! I was reading it over and thought of some new ideas! Hopefully i have a better outcome with this one!

"Can I burrow the Impala?" I asked Dean.

"No." He said half asleep.

"Fine I'll just walk. I'm going to go visit Bella and Charlie. I'll be back later." I gave him a kiss on the cheek and walked out of the motel, just outside of Forks.

"Where are you going?" Sam asked as I passed him on the staircase. He handed me a cup of coffee.

"Thank you. I'm going to go visit my sister and dad." I took a sip of coffee and gagged. "Oh my god. Where did you get that?" I asked, throwing it away.

"Down the road. Don't go there. Be careful." He said at the door.

"Always am." I yelled over my shoulder. I walked to Forks and to the house that I spent so many summers in. as I was walking I became aware of how cold it actually was here. I wrapped the light jacket tighter around my body tighter. I knocked on the door and waited. The door opened and I saw Charlie.

"Hello. Can I help you?" He asked. My eyes widened for a minute.

"Yeah I came to visit my Dad and sister." I smirked. It took him a minute and the realization crossed his eyes.

"Emily?"

"The one and only." He hugged my tightly. "I hope its not a problem that I just dropped by without calling. I wanted it to be a surprise."

"Of course not! I have someone for you too meet anyways. We were just in the middle of breakfast." he led me to the kitchen. Bella and a bronze haired guy were sitting at the table while a blond woman was at the stove making pancakes. Bella shot up out of her seat.

"Emily!" She hugged me. "Wow you changed. You're blond now. You look gorgeous!" She hugged me again.

"Thank you. You look gorgeous as well." I smiled down at her.

"I keep telling her that but she doesn't believe me." The bronze haired guy said. He stood up. "Hello I'm Edward Cullen, Bella's boyfriend." He held his hand out for me to shake. I gasped inwardly as my skin came in contact with his cold skin. I smiled though.

"Nice to meet you Edward. I'm Emily, Bella's older sister."

"Emily this is Cecilia, my fiancé. Cecilia this is my oldest daughter Emily." I forced a smile and let her pull me into a hug.

"Its so nice to meet you. I've heard so much about you. Tomorrow us girls should take a trip to Seattle and take a shopping trip. Bella you should invite Esme, Alice, and Rosalie." she said cheerfully. Then she looked me over. "I love you're boots and jeans. They go perfectly together." I looked down and shrugged.

"I just threw them on but thank you. Its nice to meet you as well Cecilia."

"Are you hungry. I was just making pancakes for everyone." she asked when she let me go.

"Sure if it isn't too much trouble."

"Not at all." I sat down next to Edward. "So how long are you staying in town for?" she asked.

"A few days I think. It depends on how long I have off work."

"How'd you get here? There isn't a car in the driveway." Charlie asked.

"I walked from my motel."

"Why didn't you bring your car?" Bella asked.

"I don't have one. I'm riding with my boyfriend and his brother. They wanted to go for a vacation and I suggested here." I said as Cecilia sat a plate of pancakes down in front of me. "Thank you." I smiled at her.

"You're welcome."

"You have a boyfriend?" Charlie asked from the other side of the table.

"You looked surprised." I asked with a raised eyebrow.

"No. just curious. So what's his name?" he leaned forward slightly.

"His name is Dean Winchester. His brother's name is Sam." I said with a smile.

"What does he look like?" Bella asked. Cecilia looked over at me. I grabbed my phone from my pocket and slid it open. I handed it to her.

"wow that's him?" she asked.

"Yep that's Dean. I caught him by surprise." Cecilia now had my phone.

"Wow is an understatement." I smiled slightly.

Charlie took my phone next. "He looks a bit old for you." he said.

"Dad Dead is only a few years older then me." I defended.

"How much is a few?" he asked, handing me back my phone.

"Like six." I bit my lip as his eyes widened. I turned to Edward. "would you like to see him since everyone else did?" he took my phone. I watched as it looked like he had stopped breathing.

"He seems like a really nice guy. Congratulations." he handed me back my phone.

"Thank you. He is a nice guy."

"He hasn't hit you has he?" Charlie asked. I covered my eyes with my hand.

"No Dad. Dean has never tried to hit me." I said. As we ate Bella told me about her school, friends, Edward's family, and her experience when she fell out the window. I shook my head at her and laughed when she told me.

"You're still the same klutz you were when I left." I said. She smiled slightly and then leaned on her elbows.

"Why did you leave?" she asked. I bit my lip and looked into her brown eyes.

"I already told you. I was 18 and I wanted to explore." I smiled at her slightly. She didn't seem convinced but she dropped the subject. Charlie looked at the clock and downed the rest of his coffee.

"Well I'm going to head out. Billy is probably already there." I smiled and remembered when he use to go fishing when we were here.

"Have fun Dad." I said. Cecilia kissed him and I looked down at the table. He kissed Bella's forehead and then mine. Cecilia left not long after that, saying she was going to the grocery shop. That left Bella and Edward.

"So what are you planning on doing today?" Bella asked.

"I don't know. I'll probably go look around and see if anything has changed." I said. I looked at the clock and then my phone rang. I looked at the caller id and saw Sam's name flash.

"Hello?" I asked.

"We need you back at the motel." he said.

"Okay. I'll be there in about fifteen minutes." I hung up and looked over at Bella and Edward.

"I have to go. How about I come back and we go out for dinner later?" I pocketed my phone and stood up.

"Yeah I would really like that." Bella stood up and I hugged her tightly. "I'm really glad you came back." She whispered into my ear.

"Me too. It was nice meeting you Edward." we shook hands and I left. I walked back to the motel. By the time I got there, I was freezing. My hands were numb as I rubbed them together, trying to cause some sort of a friction so they would get warm.