Chapter 1 on the Hogwarts express
It was Harry first year at Hogwarts and he was very excited as he got on the train and found a compartment for himself, after he said goodbye to his crying mother. As the train leaves kings cross two twins, a boy and a girl both with flaming red hair, entered his compartment. The girl ask "can we set with you" and Harry answered "yes of course you can I am Harry by the way" The girl said "thanks, by the way my name is Ginny and this is my twin brother Ron. It turned out that they were all first years this year and really did not know very many people yet.
They talked for what to them was hours until a girl with bushy brown hair entered the compartment. She said "we will be at Hogwarts soon you should put on your rods "and she add "I am Hermione I am a first year and you are"? The three of the answer her and she left. As the all change into their school rods they talked about how the hoped they that they were not in her house as she slimed to be to bossy.
As they got off the train at hogsmead station, they got gleams of two things. One was carts that where not being pushed by anything, the second was Hogwarts castle and it was beautiful, more beautiful than words. As they made their way across the platform they heard I voice call "first years over her, first years over here". They look and sow the biggest man they had ever seen, as the voice added "I am Rubuis Hagrid by the way I am keeper of keys and grounds here, and I will be taking you all to the castle on the boots.
As the three of them made their way to boats the where joined by Hermione and the four of them ended up on a boat together. It took what they would say was forever to get to the castle on the boats cause they were both excited and nerves. As they finely got out of the boats they were mate by a vary stern looking woman with eyes like a cat, she said "welcome to Hogwarts in a few minutes we will begin the sorting ceremony, where you will be sorted into one of four houses. Each house has its own history and has turned out great witches and wizards. There are four houses are Gryffindor, ravenclaw, hufflepuff, and slytherin. I am professor McGonagall, head of Gryffindor house and I teach transfiguration. "With that she left the for a minute before coming back and bring them to the great hall for the sorting.
A/N Weill that's chapter one hope you all liked it as this is my first fanfic. I know there is a lot of misspelling and grammar eras I am in need of a beta really bad. I have a good plan for this story and hope to update a lot if you all like it. Some of it will be like the book will some will be like the book with some changes and other will be may own totally. I also did not like that there was really no Hermione we will get to see her in the next chapter although she will be more back round like the rest of the Wesley's but she is there Ron will need her and so will Ginny(Ginny more than Ron and soon). So love it or not review it let me know and massage me if you would like to beta for me I would love you for life HUGGGGGGGGS.