This is the revised version of the one I published before! Enjoy =] 3, abi

Chapter 1-Boarding

Bella's P.O.V.

Excitement rushed through me, it was the day that the Titanic began it's maiden voyage. Three blocks away from seeing the vast ship, the largest one in the world. My fingers were intertwined with Jacob's, resting my head on his arm as our chauffeur drove us.

"One more block away." I whispered with a grin.

Jacob smiled back looking down at me, my favorite smile. His black hair was shimmering against the sunlight. I stared until the sunlight passed. I slowly started to gaze down at my left hand, I couldn't believe in less then a month I would be marrying Jacob. I loved him, but I don't think I'm ready. I was seventeen, it felt like my life was rushing, hurrying to be done with.

"Bella, we're here." He whispered back, looking out into the distance.

I followed his gaze to the front of the car, past the driver to the this massive ship. It had enormous funnels, a broad deck, and more portholes then I can count.

"Bella, come on. We have to go." Alice, my sister, said with thrills.

Jacob was already out of the car holding the door for me, like a gentlemen. I walked towards the door, stepping down to get to the ground. My lengthy dress skirt became trapped under my shoe. I stumbled right in front of the door, falling out. I closed my eyes, not wanting to know what was to come of me. I waited to hear the noise of a thump on the ground, and pain surge through my body. I then noticed that Jacob was holding me, I opened my eyes looking up to see his face with his smile. He laughed.

"You're such a klutz, Bella." he said as his smile was fading.

"Bella, are you alright? You have to watch where you are stepping!" My mother grimaced at me.

My mother's car had just pulled behind Jacob, Alice, and my car. She was so perceptive, only associating with first class people, and only acting that way.

"James, can you get our bags?" Jacob spoke as he lifted the bags to James.

"Put them over onto the loading dock for us."

James, Jacob's attendant, rushed through the crowd of thousands of people, taking each bag one by one to the loading dock. Typical Jacob always getting people to help him, my persuader.

As we walked through the crowd, walking towards the first class section of the boat to go on I stared at the Titanic, it came closer and closer with each step. We finally approached the loading area for the first class passengers. Jacob gave the man our tickets, and we walked on to the ramp to the first class cabins. I could smell the fresh paint in the air, it felt like a new beginning was approaching. While I entered the ship I glanced out into the mass of people, this will be the last time I will see land for a long time.

I set my foot in, gazing at the extravagant flooring, and chandeliers that hung from the ceiling. I forgot that Alice was standing right next to me, and so with all the sound around me.

Alice persistently called out ,"Bella? Come on, we have no time to waste! I have to set up your clothing for tonight's dinner, and we have to set up our rooms."

Alice as usual, with her pixie short hair, gracefulness as a ballerina with each step, and her affectionate personality. She was my best friend, and sister. We were there for each other, no matter what was to happen.

"I'm coming, can we look around the ship first?" I said in return, shouting down the corridor as she ran to the cabin.

Edward's P.O.V.

We boarded the Titanic, the most enormous ship I've ever seen in the century I've been alive. I thought in my head as I muted out everyone else's thoughts inside our third class cabin. I laid down thinking of what I would do as I was here awaiting to go home to America. I felt a jolt underneath me, the ship was sending off then.

For Edward and Jasper to find love would be excellent. It's time they stop searching, and be happy for their love. Esme's thought was surrounded by kindness, and concern. She was the most sweet-hearted one out of all of us. She tousled her wavy brunette hair with her fingers, as her golden-eyes glare at the door thinking about what to do.

"Esme, I don't think that will be any time soon." I replied with a chuckle.

Esme glared at me with the you will see look she usually gave me. Sometimes she ended up to be correct while others she was the complete opposite of right.

The energy around me was tiring, and stressful, especially when reading your families thoughts. I decided to take my plain music sheets, and pencil out onto the third and second class deck of the ship. The breeze was pleasant as it skinned across my face with the misty sky not giving me away. For the humans it must have been a frigid breeze on their bodies. I sat near the back of the boat on the closest bench to the sea, which was just behind me. The bench was in the direction of the first class deck, which looked quite like a balcony with stairs to the deck I was on. I glanced at the deck several times as I wrote my composure.

Then I saw her, with her extensive wavy hair brunette hair, it reminded me of Esme, and her muddy brown eyes were her own, and pale white skin just like mine. I stared at her admiring her beauty, muting all the mental voices. She must have noticed because she studied me right back. A shoot of electricity surged through me. Her hair was following the wind, pulling it back, she pulled her sight away from me, gazing into the ocean right in front of her with her hands gripping the railing as she stood. She walked away as she saw a man calling to her next to the lifeboats over in the back of the Titanic.

"Bella, come on, love!" the man called out to her.

The shout of the word love caused me pain once he said it. Thats when I noticed a big diamond ring on her left hand, I then knew she was on this ship for a marriage afterwards.

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