Well it kinda just came to me one day
I've been thinking of making a fanfiction for a while and I finally made one
Dragonball z related
My first try at a fanfiction
Enjoy!!
After the battle with Kid Buu...
About 8 minutes after Kid Buu was defeated, the Z fighters figured that they needed their greatest warriors back. Goku did not disagree. He got over the fact that he thought he was the only person in the universe worth attacking
So Bulma, Krillin, #18(from now on 18 for convenience), Trunks and Goten took off for Planet Namek.
N/A: For anyone who doesn't know, people can only be revived with the Dragonballs once on earth, but the Namekian Dragonballs can revive someone an unlimited amount of time, hence the fact that they have to go to Namek...
The ship, the Mach 7, landed on the soft Namekian ground.
"Well, we're finally here!" said Goten, jumping out from a hole in the hull of the ship.
"Yeah!" said Trunks, following Goten,"We've finally traveled to planet Namek!"
"What do you think we'll find here?" said Goten
"I dunno... maybe the DRAGONBALLS?!?!?!?!" yelled Trunks
"Hey, who's shouting?!" yelled Krillin, jumping out from the ship.
"Give them a break," said 18, also coming out of the ship," Both their dads have come to this planet. They must be excited."
"Did Dende tell you how to teach you some Namekian?" asked Goten.
"I learned enough to figure out how to get our dad's back!" said Trunks.
"Then what are we waiting for!?" said Goten," Lets GO!!!!"
And so their adventure starts.
But in another region of the planet...
"Ginyu, I'm picking up a power source," said Jeice, turning to face his captain.
"Finally, someone comes!" yelled Ginyu," Power level please..."
"About... I'd give it a 760,000, two 600,000, a 550,000, and a 4," said Burter, coming from another part of the room.
"Well, looks like our saiyan friends have finally showed up..." said Ginyu," Shall we meet them?"
And they took off, heading for the source of the power.
N/A: Well, that's the intro. The Ginyu force returning and all that. Here's the rest.
"Where's the first dragonball?!?!?" yelled Goten
"Uh...we haven't picked one up yet," said Bulma
"We can do this faster," said Trunks, and he took the radar from Bulma.
"Yeah!" said Goten," We can find them ten times as fast as you guys. Let's go Trunks!"
They took off into the sky.
"Ok, where's the first dragonball?" said Goten.
"Well, it should be somewhere in this region...," said Trunks," Go west."
"Where's west?" asked Goten.
"In... that direction." Trunks pointed west.
"Oh...OK!"
"So...you excited?"
"Well, yeah...our dad's are coming back..."
"I'm not so sure...my dad being back would only mean more training..."
"Hey...you want to race?"
"Ok...first one to get a dragonball and bring it back to..."Trunks looked around."That island over there."
"Alright...1...2...3...GO!" and they sped off in the direction off the dragonball.
N/A: Play-by-play coming up...
Goten sped ahead first. When they hit the ground near the dragonball, Trunks was the first one to find it. Trunks took off as soon as he got it. Goten followed him and got the dragonball from Trunks (the Namekian Dragonballs are very large and heavy). Trunks gave a last boost of energy to try to catch Goten, but he couldn't catch up. Goten got to the island first.
And so it went on. The fact that Goten kept challenging Trunks to different races might of help along a little.
But finally they had all seven dragonballs.
"Well we did it!" said Goten, breathing heavily.
"Yeah," Trunks," And you beat me almost every time."
"Well, we better bring these back to Bulma so we can bring Goku and my dad back to life."
They flew back to the landing site...to find that the Ginyu force had waited for them there.
They had Bulma locked inside the ship, Krillin and 18 were on the ground, unconscious.
"Well, what do you know?" said Ginyu," The brats have finally showed up."
"Who are you callin' a brat," said Goten," And...who are you?"
"We are the Ginyu Force," said Ginyu, and the Ginyu force took their trademark stance.
"Wow," said Trunks," You guys are really weird."
"WHAT!?!?" yelled Ginyu," You have a lot of guts sayin' that kid. Recoome, teach them a lesson about respect."
"Duh, you got it boss," said Recoome.
N/A: This is how Recoome should really sound.
"Well, Goten," said Trunks," Shall we?"
"We shall," said Goten, and the energy began to swirl around them as they turned in Super Saiyans.
"Ginyu!" shouted Jeice," Their power levels just rose to above 12000000!"
" Twelve million, huh?" said Ginyu, a smile spreading across his face," Well, this should be interesting."
Recoome launched himself at Goten. His speed was unbelievable. Goten barely moved out of the way. Trunks tried to attack Recoome, but he moved out of the way. He then spun around and positioned himself in front of Trunks and nailed him in the stomach. Trunks was caught off guard, and his breath left him. "Trunks!" yelled Goten, and he flew forward and kicked Recoome in the head.
N/A: Comparing sizes here, Recoome's head is about the size of Goten, so it was an easy target.
Seeing an opening, Trunks recovered himself, cupped his hands together and yelled "FINISH BUSTER!"
The buster hit Recoome in the stomach, blasting him into the air.
"Now Goten!" shouted Trunks.
"Ok," said Goten," Here it goes. KA-ME-KA-ME-HAAAA!"
N/A: Also for those who don't know, Goten can't pronounce HAME right, so he says KAME again. A little fact here, KAME HAME HA in Japanese means Turtle Destruction Wave, so when Goten says Kame Kame Ha, he is actually saying Turtle Turtle Wave. Bet some of you never knew that, huh?
The powerful wave hit Recoome, and he took the full hit of the blow. His scream echoed across the plain as the beam disintegrated him.
While everybody was looking at the destruction of Recoome, Trunks was sneaking off with the Dragonballs.
"Ok," said Trunks," Let's see..." Trunks then began to speak in Namekian.
Well, since a 1000 foot-high dragon coming out of 3-square-foot orange spheres is much more interesting than some one being destroyed by pure energy; everyone now turned their attention to the now summoned Porunga.
"STATE YOUR WISHES," said Porunga, in a loud booming voice.
N/A: This Namekian was translated to make it easier for yours truly.
"Number 1, I wish that Goku and Vegeta were wished back to life," said Trunks," Next, I wish that they were teleported to Bulma's house on planet Earth. And last, I wish that Goten, Bulma, 18, Krillin, and I were all brought back to Earth."
"YOUR WISH HAS BEEN GRANTED,"said Porunga in the same booming voice.
And just like that, they were gone off the planet.
"Oh, shit," said Jeice," They took off."
"Well...looks like they forgot their ship," said Ginyu triumphantly, turning to face his last hope at revenge.
Well, that was the first page. Tell me what you think, because I need all the help I can get.