I had already the first chapter posted but… I didn't like it very much. This one is more my liking and way better than the previous. It can be a little confusing but that's because while I was writing, the ideas popped on my mind and voila! This starts with a "little" introduction, didn't want a prologue only when I finished I notice that the first part was more like a prologue than a chapter, and me being lazy, is more easy write this than read all that and choose.

Chap. 1

Like always, life isn't fair. Don't matter how many good thing you do, there is always something or someone to screw you. Or not… depending on your luck.

Always is a strong word. Involve no exceptions and there are always exceptions, hidden or not!

As usual, there he was… training at full force on his personal gym. Trying to forget how his life sucks, his sister's heart problem, the economic, the end of world, the fact that he's going to do his last mission.

There he was.

Uzumaki Naruto.

Blonde, tanned skin, muscled body, 6 ft 2 inches. A face that could rival any model of any magazine and so one… Who am I kidding? He was the epiphany of normal, except the 3 fox-like scars on both his cheeks. Loud, rude, bossy and little emo. Only he wasn't a person of public demonstrations of emotions. He has a sister, Uzumaki Hinata. Since her early childhood, she suffers from a heart disease. It only can be cured by a heart transplant. But there are extremely expensive, so Naruto works for their godmother in her agency. KONOHA. An agency that, on the surface, do charity work and organize various charity dinners, to gain funds from the richest people on Tokyo. The real actions are assassinations. People trained since youth in multiples martial arts and the ninja ways. All kind of ways to be invisible. After all, a good killer can't be seen!

Being the second most young in the agency with 17 years, (Konohamaru being the youngest with 15), Naruto is already a legend. Started with 14 (minimum age imposed by Tsunade) with little tasks. Helping in the departments of the agency, buying lunches, contacting both the hirer and hired to inform on details, little tasks that don't make any harm.

But fortunately or unfortunately, depending on the perspective, 6 months after started working, he was faced with a situation he wasn't expecting at all.

You see, KONOHA isn't the only type of this agency in city. AKATSUKI is the other agency, in other words, the big rival of KONOHA.

The incident was the following:

Danzou, head of the human resources department, hired AKATSUKI to kill Naruto on a mission he assigned to him on assisting another member of the agency in the killing of Orochimaru. Excused is to say that the other member was a spy of Danzou.

The objective of Danzou was killing Naruto to inherit KONOHA.

6 months before, all back when Tsunade not yet knew that Naruto was alive, Danzou was the next to inherit the agency. He was already planning poisoning Tsunade but his plan was down the drain. Naruto appeared and was nominated to be the next president of the agency.

Goodbye Danzou Tyranny.

So back to the incident, while Naruto was waiting to Orochimaru, the big Tokyo drug lord, to bless his night with his existence ready to be exterminated, he was faced with an inconvenient. He was being target of Sasori in his "practice" with his gun. 6th in the rank of AKATSUKI. Not someone to be messing with.

And not to miss, Sai, who did not want to be set apart by Sasori's game, was also practicing target shooting with Naruto's body. A big creepy game. But you can't expect that someone whose first 10 years of his life was passed on the streets to be a little lamb. After all, Tokyo isn't heaven.

In 10 minutes, Naruto could immobilize both Sasori and Sai. With his .22 (AN: I'm not sure how many bullets a normal gun of .22 caliber can hold but a choose 8. So if someone could tell me the right quantity I would be grateful.), he shot both guys right in middle of their forehead. Instant death. From his earlier experience in streets, he had learnt how to shoot a gun. Of course, no one except his sister knew. A little surprise to his attackers and Danzou. It isn't every day that a 14 years old boy kills 2 man, professionals killers, with a single bullet on their brains. Lesson: Don't play with the unknown.

And after, he still completed his mission. An exemplar assassin, don't leave their mission in half. So Tsunade, following a big surprise with a faint on knowing what happened, did the usual examination that all her's soon to be members do. Naruto became the first one having perfect points on his examination.

So back to the present, Naruto is training in his apartment, waiting for the call of Tsunade about his mission. His last mission. After complete this, he will have all the money necessary for Hinata's operation.

Like when we are expecting something to happen and the time pass much slower. A minute seems more like a year. So like it seems to us, so it happens to Naruto. And patience wasn't a virtue for him. "Fuck… what is Tsunade waiting for? A permission from the pope? Urgh, I hate waiting. Is so exasperating…"

RING… RING…

"Finally! Baa-chan, why did you take so long? Did you need a response from the president?" Naruto yells angrily to the cellphone, much to disgust of Tsunade.

"Oi gaki, can you shup up for a second and listen? Get over here immediately or someone else gets the mission!"

"All right, am listening… and don't you dare to do that to me. I kill you in your sleep and you know I can do it…" Naruto shuts the phone, grabs his keys and leaves towards KONOHA. He didn't know that the simple decision he's making now, will change his life forever from now…

END

So here's the first chapter rewritten. Hope you like much more than the first one and I would like at least one review… Please! Pretty please!

I promise I will try to update as soon as possible but I will only post when I'm satisfied with the result.

Bye!