Rewrite of the first chapter not as good as my first one but this all I can do.

~VampireLuver23

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"No." the girl ran though the forest carefully avoiding hitting trees. She knew if she stopped for even for a second he would catch her. She dared and looked back her long dress got caught under her feet as she tripped over a tree branch.

"No please don't." the girl cried as the knife slit her throat killing her instantly. The moon shone brightly though the trees

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August

Day 1

The sun was shining bright and people milling around outside. Unfortunately for Taniyama Mai she stuck inside Shibuya Psychic Research (or SPR for short).

The clock chimed saying it was 10 o'clock. Half an hour till the client arrives. Mai thought as she walked to her desk. "I'm so bored." Mai said laying her head on her desk, "Maybe I can sleep for a bit." But that thought was cook short as she heard her boss call out.

"Mai, tea."

"Hai." Mai slowly got open and made her way over to the small kitchenette. Mai got out the kettle tray and tea. Once the kettle was full of water she put it on the stove and waited for it to whistle.

Mai knocked on the door and let herself in once she heard Naru. "Here you go Naru." She said as she set the tea in front of him. She waited for at least 3 minutes until Naru looked up.

"Mai I know my face is handsome and all but don't you have some filing to door?" Mai blushed a little but held her ground

"I was not looking at your face. I was waiting for a thank you." Mai said avoiding the filing question. She still hadn't done the big stack of files that were sitting on her desk when she came in.

Naru just stared at her.

Mai turned away and said, "Narcissistic jerk."

Naru smirked "I heard that."

Mai blushed hard "You were suppose too." And then shut the door.

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The clients came in 20 minutes later. Mai shot up from her chair- bored from filing- at the sound of the bell above the door.

"Ohayō, Welcome to Shibuya Psychic Research. I'm Taniyama Mai do you have an appointment?" Mai asked when she walked to the door.

"Hai. I'm Takahashi Mizuki and this is my cousin Katie. She is from America, so she doesn't know much Japanese."

Takahashi Mizuki had her brown hair up in an elegant bun and green eyes. With a black business suit that had a pencil skirt and black pumps. She only looked to be in her late twenties.

Takahashi Katie had long blonde hair and blue-green eyes. She was wearing a blue tank top with a thin black jacket over it. She had a jean skirt with long grey leggings and black converse, and looked around Mai's age.

"Come this way while I get my boss." Mai then walked over to Naru's door and knocked. "The clients are here Naru." She did the same to Lin-san door.

Mai then went to the kitchen to make tea and get cookies. After that was done she went to where everyone was sitting waiting for her.

Mai sat the tea in front of Naru, Lin-san, Mizuki-san, and Katie-san. "Arigatō." Katie said.

"You're welcome." Mai said and sat down.

"Takahashi-san tell me about what you have experience in your home?" Naru asked

"Well most of the experience to Katie." Katie looked up at the sound of her name.

"Hai. Umm, I hear screams at midnight every night," Katie-san started in slow broken Japanese. "And sometimes I see a black figure at the end of my bed in the middle of the night. And once when my friends and I were having a bonfire I looked to the woods that surround our house and I saw the same black figure that is always at the end of my bed. I screamed and ran away my friends thought I was playing a trick and when I looked back it was gone." Katie-san took of her jacket and pulled her shirt up to show burns that said 'Get Out'. Naru looked the same but there was something in his eyes, Mai gasped, and Lin stopped typing. "I wake up sometimes and find this burns."

"Will you please help us?" Mizuki-san said

"We'll take the case. We will need a room for 3 girls, a room big enough for 5 boys and a room for a base." Naru stood up "Leave contact information with my assistant." Lin-san and Naru both walked back to their offices.

After Mizuki-san and Katie-san left Mai went to her desk and called everyone to them about the case.

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"Naru I'm leaving." Mai called out as she put her jacket on and slipped her shoes on.

Mai heard a door opened and her narcissist of a boss said "Don't be late. Arrive here by eight."

"Yes, Naru." Mai then left. The warm air was long gone with the sun. She pulled her small jacket tighter against her. When she arrived at her apartment she took a shower then got her pajamas on. She packed her suitcase and climbed into bed.

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Mai woke up in a field of flowers. "Gene?" She called out

"Right here Mai." Gene said behind her

"Gene!" squealed Mai hugging Gene. "I haven't seen in a while."

"I came here to warn you Mai." Mai let go of Gene and stepped back

"Now you sound like Naru, you know."

Gene laughed, "What did he do now?"

"Beside ordering me around, everything. He can be so annoying and he never says 'Thank You' and he does is insult me." Mai said 'Makes me wonder why I even love him.'

"I can help you with that Idiot Scientist."

"Really?" Mai perked up from her bad mood.

"Yeah….But back to why I am her." Gene put his hands on her shoulders. "You must be careful Mai with this case."

Mai nodded

"Now wake up before you are late."

Mai woke up and looked at her clock 6:30. She got out of bed and jumped in the shower. The hot water woke her up and by the time she got out it was 7:00. The towel wrapped around her she made her way back to her room where she got dressed in a jean mini skirt and a white halter top and a white jacket. She slipped on a pair a black ballet flats with a bow on the side of each.

Mai then packed her bag since she failed to do so last night by then it was 7:25 and Mai was out the door.

"Mai help load the equipment in the van." Naru said when Mai arrived on time. A rare thing for her.

"Hai." Mai mumbled still a bit tired.

After loading the van Bou-san and Ayako arrived with Masako and John.

Bou-san or Houshou Takigawa a retired monk and a bassist in a band help with exorcism.

Matsuzaki Ayako a miko and a Doctor.

Hara Masako a famous medium who also likes Naru and always tries to faint by him and take him on dates.

John Brown an Australian priest who has a funny accent when he speaks Japanese.

Bou-san and Ayako were fighting over something and John was trying to make them stop.

"Mai your with Lin and I. Let's go." Naru said from behind her.

'Great 6 hours in a car with the worlds quietest people in the world.' Mai thought as she got in the car.

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So this is the rewrite review and tell me about it. Chapter e2 should be up tomorrow sometime.

Now I'm off to get ready for my Winter Guard compation. 5th one today got first place 3 times second 1 time.

~VampireLuver23