Hey people! :) This is only a short story as a practice run sort of! Im not a great writer, and im not too creative, but from not on I'm really working on it! So I hope I do okay and please review! Thanks!
Arizel
I was dreaming. I knew it was a dream, but I didn't want to wake because it was so beautiful here. It was white, with pretty, fluffy clouds. I had never seen anything like it. I was on my own, in this huge area of clouds, and I wasn't sure where to go, but I didn't worry. I just walked around for a little bit and then I started to get a little bit agitated. I felt a big claustrophobic because I couldn't get out. As beautiful as this all was, I was stuck. I started to frantically shout as I didn't know what else to do.
Then I jumped with fear as I awoke from my deep sleep. My head was aching. I couldn't remember what happened to it. Actually I couldn't remember anything. I layed back against the old, stoned wall and stared down the dark, bleak and gloomy alley. I sat there, as I dazed into my childhood thoughts. I had remembered a time like this, where I had fallen off a weak branch which snapped, while it was around 30 – 35ft high in the air. Luckily I landed on the grass, but I landed on my head and from then on, I get these visions, where if I touch an object or person, I see the life of them. Even if it was a tree, its like the tree has eyes, and I watch all its life go by in a split second, and I retain all the information. That was the only thing that made me unique, as far as I was concerned. Other than that, my life was pretty nor-
"Excuse me, Miss? Are you alright?" he spoke sternly as I regained my thoughts and remembered I was still in the alley. I stared blankly at the ground, as I couldn't find the strength to look up, and wondered, who was he? Or how and when he got here? Had I been that lost in my own childhood memories that he had just arrived without my knowledge. I was a little startled by that but I thought it was rude not to answer. "Um, Yeah I'm okay, but, ahhh, my heads really sore, and I cant seem to remember how I got here." I said with a slight worried tone. I still hadn't looked him in the eye, so I tried my best to lift my head. When I caught he's gaze, I couldn't escape he's eyes.
He was unusually beautiful. I couldn't imagine in my life, anyone more beautiful than him. He wasn't just some guy I might have had a crush on if I was a teenager, he was … perfect. Hes thick, slightly medium length black hair fell loosely on his shoulders, and crystal blue eyes were fixed on me. His upper body was well built underneath the un-buttoned shirt. It was the middle of autumn, and here in Ringwood, Oklahoma and the weather wasn't exactly the best so I couldn't imagine someone not cold. He reached out his hand for mind but I rejected because I was too sore. I couldn't move an inch, so I sat there.
" Sorry Sir, what is your name?" I asked. He answered with one, quick word. "Arizel" "Okay. Thanks. Um where am I? and why am I here?" I questioned him, as I stirred. "Ah, girl, it's a long story, but I guess I must tell you" he said, with a hesitation. Only one thing went through my head, what happened?
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