this is my first fan fiction, my first chapter is going to be short, and not that much happens, its a little boring but it will get better in the next chapter or two, I would love if you review and tell me what I can do different or you can give some ideas. so here is my first chapter...hope you like it.
It's a time in your life when you wish you knew what the right thing to do is, but sadly for most people they don't, at this time in our live for most of us our parents make most too all the decision for us.
My name is Beatrice, I'm 16, my faction is Abnegation. It's the time in my life when I have to choose what faction I want to be in for the rest of my life. I have seen many people make the choice and for some it looks easy and for other it looks like the make the decision but closing the eyes and letting their blood drop on whatever it happens to be over.
My brother and I are the same age; wonder if he will switch faction, what will our parents thinks if we both leave? Will they be mad at us or understanding? As I sit her trying to think of what's best for me a can't help but think once we are at the choosing ceremony, and Caleb makes his choose, if he leaves will I feel like I have to stay or will I leave just like he.
I get home at the same time every day, tonight is my night to make dinner. When I get into the kitchen I see Caleb there. I start to make dinner and then he starts to help, I don't think he can help it because he exactly what we are supposed to be like… selfless, always putting others first and helping anyone when you can.
"thank you for the help" I say to Caleb and we sit with our parents for dinner.
thanks for reading, don't for get to review so I know what I need to improve on.
-joey