So this is the re-written beginning of Too good to be True! um yeah... i hope you like it!
Raven drew in a breath, she tried to ignore her friend Max poking her.
"Dude, duuuude earth to Raven, come in Raven." Max proceeded to make weird radio noises that only brought up her urge to punch the short girl in the face.
"Shut up." Raven growled.
"So she does have a voice." Max shouted triumphantly. "Alright," Max pulled her long brown hair behind an ear. "What wrong? Is it Raph, do you what him?" Max smirked, Raven tried to bury her face from her blush. "Leo is so much hotter, just saiyan, hehe saiyan, Dragon Ball Z." Max muttered, chuckling at her joke. Raven pulled in her feet. Not allowed to kick her, wait till lunch. Max continued to ramble next to her, she caught the words Ninja Turtles, Mikey, really cute, want a Donnie. Raven sighed. Just a normal day.
The noise blasted in her ear. Metal, clanging against metal. Raven jerked her head up, Shredder, it couldn't be... And Raven's blush burned on her face. Raph.
"Dude, what the shell." Max grinned, her lip pulled up so you could see her fang teeth on her gum.
"Mine." Raven couldn't help hiss under her breath. Max laughed.
"Now all we need is Leo."
Raph threw a kick at the sociopath groin. Shredder let out a growl.
Raph grinned, looking straight at her. His face had scars covering it. Raven picked up on the stitch breaks in his mask.
"My green eyes are better than yours." Max muttered under her breath. Raven rolled her eyes, sending a kick at her friend.
"Oww..."
Raph leaped into the building, using his sai to break the class. He front rolled perfectly to her seat. His green eyes scanned her.
"It really is you." He said quietly. Raven tried to hold her speeding heart. He was so real, large perfect biceps. Light sweat patches on the side of his mask.
"From that dream." His face lit up, which only brought up her blush. He put out a hand.
"You coming?" He growled.
"What?" The word came out a deep whisper.
"Seriously? I didn't come here for nothing." He sounded impatient.
"Uh..." Raven tried to regain her speech pattern. Max smirked next to her.
"Yes she does." Max laughed, slamming palms into her back. Raven stumbled forward, Raph's large hands caught her, her pony tail flicking up. Raph smiled, his arm moved around her back, green eyes set on the swirling portal next to Shredder.
Raph threw a shuriken at Shredder's helmet, narrowly missing his skin.
"Get in." He growled, Raven went to open her mouth, was he talking to her? She looked at Shredder who was standing up again, blades pointing at the ground. Raph sighed, sliding away his hand then doing a hard kick at Shredder.
When Shredder fell in. Raph grinned at her.
"Coming?" Raven nodded, she didn't trust herself to speak. He was real, Raven took in hand, so warm. Raven felt the scars beneath her fingers... this wasn't happening... Was it?...
YAY! so yeah this is a rewrite! you can see the horrible orginal in my TMNT one shot book titled "Raph Love Story" um yep!
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