This is my first fic! I'm accepting any feedback to help improve my writing. So let's go!
"Talking" Human speech
(Talking) Poké speech
Gan wasn't your ordinary kid. Aged at 11 and with little friends, he was living in a house owned by his parents in southern Lumiose City. He rather liked his life, but felt too bored. His best friend Mip, from Sinnoh had a Pokémon, and boy was he jealous. He pleaded to his Mom, "May I have a Pokémon? Mip has one and they are so perfect together! Why can't I have one?" Gan kept bombarding his mother with questions until he was stopped by a "Fine, but you have to go with your friends and contact me weekly. Understood?"
Gan had mixed emotions, he was happy, shocked, and mostly surprised. Before he had a chance to reply, his mom added, "You'll take one of my Pokémon, his name is Mylan, he's a level 5 Mudkip." Gan had more in store. He was given many lectures on how to stay safe, and how to use the pokéballs she gave him before the lectures came. Topping that he was awarded a PokéGear, loaded with Mip, his mom's and a few other friend's numbers. Afterwards he was done being pummeled by warnings his mother said, "Call Mip and ask him to meet up at our house. You two should go journey through Kalos together! It'll be a blast I bet. Oh, and get some sleep, you need the rest for your big day tomorrow.
Time Skip to 7:32 A.M.
(POV:Gan)
I woke up and yawned with excitement. I was going to be a trainer! So I started off with calling out Mylan, from his pokéball. "Mylan, time to shine!" In a white beam of light there he was, in all his glory, Mylan. "Kip!" (Hello!) Came the little creature as it leapt into my arms. I was starting to think of all the fun we'd have until I remembered. I need to eat, and then meet up with Mip! Mylan was laying on my pillow so I called him. "Mylan, we need to eat, and meet some friends!" "Kip Mudkip!" He cheered. (Sounds like fun!) "I have no clue what you're saying but let's move!" Mylan and I ran to eat to eat some Pokéfood and Berry Pebbles respectively. Only seconds after they finished their food, a doorbell was heard. "That must be Mip!" I ran to the front door, Mylan in suit. Flinging the door open, I saw Mip standing patiently in front of the door. "Boo. Good to see you again." Mip in a teal t-shirt, black basketball shorts with matching shoes calmly said. "Before you say anything else Mip, your hair is orange now? And my mom asked me to journey through Kalos with you, if you accepted of course." I blared. "Sure, you may come, but you need a Pokémon. What've you got up your nose now?" Mip replied. I answered, "Mylan, my new friend." "Kip." (Hello.) came from behind me. Mylan waltzed ahead of me to see Mip, and my Arceus did he like his partner. A Piplup, a female one at that. "Huh, looks like Mylan has an eye for Pip, eh?" I teased. "Do you support it?" Mip added, sarcastically. "Mudkip mud kip.." (She's just a pretty penguin..) Mylan whimpered. "Hey, to cheer you up Mylan, how about we battle Mip and Pip? If they aren't ready to accept defeat by default, that is." I challenged, and Mylan perked up at that. " Count. us in." Mip replied. "To the park we go!" I shouted as I ran to the park, where battlefields could be found.
Mip and I stood at opposite sides of the grass cleared patch of dirt, about fourty feed long and ten feet wide. Mylan was standing in front of me, eager to battle. Pip was in front of Mip and ready to fight as well. We had one kind man to act as ref, so that worked. A small audience was whispering in anticipation. "Battle, Begin!" The kind man who acted as ref boomed. And as if on cue, Pip shot into the air and used the move Tackle on Mylan, and missed. "Mylan, you show them what a Tackle really is!" I shouted to Mylan who obeyed. Mylan rushed at the penguin and threw her down, dealing a decent amount of damage. "Our turn!" Mip shouted to me. "Pip, use Bubble!" Mip ordered. "Mylan, dodge it!" I plead. Mylan was grazed by a few bubbles, but other than that, he was fine. "Tackle till this is over, Mylan!" Mylan obediently tackled the penguin who was coming in to get closer for another Bubble attack, taking another hit, and was powerless to stop the Mudkip, who fainted his first opponent. "Pip is unable to battle, Mylan is the winner!" Boomed the referee. "Good job Mylan! I'm so proud of you buddy!" I cried "Kip mud!" (I'm stronger!) "Hey, I think you know a new move. I don't mind if you test it on me." I said with a smile. Moments later I was blasted in the face with water. "Water Gun, good job Mylan." "Kip." (Thanks.) "Hey, Gan, wasn't expecting this little guy to be so powerful." Came a voice from behind me. Mip was standing there, grinning with happiness for his friend. "So where to now?" I asked. "The Pokémon center, smart one." He replied "Pip needs some healing."
POV:Mylan (He still will speak in 'Kip Mudkip!' But that's in parentheses now)
Running, my next favorite thing to do, apart from swimming. Bounding after my trainer, we ran to the Pokémon center, to heal Pip. I leapt onto Gan's back and then his head. It's comfortable up there so I lay down and slept. "Zzzzz..." (Kiiiiii...) I was awoken with a tap on my back, and then Gan asking, "Mylan can I return you into your pokéball? You need to heal." I nodded. In a red beam of light, I was back in my pokéball, which is quite comfortable, seeing as it's a island inside. While I was running around the island, I felt like I was being repaired, especially where I was hit by Pip in battle. Soon after, I was sent back into the real world, and greeted by a friendly face; Gan.
Author's Note: Sorry for cliffhanger, I needed to stop somewhere. Next chapter should be up within a few days.. So yeah. Other than that, I am Miplets, signing out.
