NFA(note from author)
What if there was no war no threat and Tris had two men fighting over her? Who would she pick? Four or Eric? who would she choose?
Also if you think of anything that would make the story better press, don't hesitate to give me your ideas and implements I would love to hear them. Btw my first fanfiction
This series does not belong to me,
Chapter 1
I've done it!
I've got in to Dauntless!
I've beaten the odds, and got in and I am first ranked. As me and Christina bounce around in circles hugging each other, I could feel the the hairs and the back of my neck tingle so I wiggle out of Christina's arms and turn around to see Eric glaring at me, so I decide to give him my death stare back. One he had looked away and turn back to my friends.
"What was that all about" Will asks, the curiosity in his voice plain and clear.
"I don't know answer, I felt a tingling on my neck so I turned around to find Eric giving me the evils do I gave him evils to" I say giving them a taste of what my evils look like which makes us all burst out laughing. That's when I feel a tap on my shoulder to find a group of people standing behind me, including a few of my friends Marlene, Uriah and my initiation instructor four.
"Hi" he says.
"Hey, is there something you want? Hi Marlene, Uriah, congrats guys"
"Thanks" they say in unison. I smile back at them and then turn my attention back to Four.
"So"
"So what?" He asks with a confused look on his face. "You wanted something" I say with a massive sigh.
"Oh yeah, I just wanted to say that you guys to attend a meeting with a lady called Sarah she is in charge of job applications, be there for around 10:30, then in the evening you will be assigned your apartments. Everyone clear?"
"Yes we're clear thanks" I say, after a few seconds of silence Uriah shouts out to all of our surprise "candor or dauntless party at my apartment on Wednesday, who's in?"
After that a mass chorus of 'yes' and 'defiantly' ring out which leaves me standing in silence twiddling my thumbs trying to be incognito, but sadly my attempt fails and everyone turns to stare at me and a man about Fours adding which I think is Zeke Uriahs older brother exclaims with a laugh "we have a pansycake in our midst", everyone starts laughing, and when I speak again my voice had gone deathly quite which I never knew I could do and say "as if, I could take you on easily, knob head. I'm game for Wednesday" I say with a smirk.
"Well Zeke I think you just told" four exclaims trying to hold back his laughter "and by a stiff no less" that's when we all burst out laughing in great gaffaw of raucous laughter.