Hey there! This is my second attempt at writing a fanfiction in English, so wish me luck! Oh yeah, I don't live in the US so I'm not sure if the terminology I used was correct...I need a beta. I can take criticism but please, no flames! I tried my best in this!
I don't own anything, I swear!
Read and enjoy. This is just the prologue.
The killer, the team and the strangers.
It was suppose to be just like any other case.
They would learn what they could about the unsub, then make a profile, after that follow that profile to look for more clues about the killer, and finally, search for him/her before he or she could take another innocent life. That was the way they worked. It was simple.
What were the odds that, for the first time ever, the unsub would change his M.O. completely, right before they could catch him?
He killed children, from one year old to thirteen. But he didn't hunt any kind of children, he had killed cops children, sons and daughters of the very ones who had tried to catch him and failed. He saw the parent's cry of dismay for their loss, enjoyed every minute of it, and then went off for his next victim.
The unsub started hunting in D.C a few days ago, killing the son of a cop who tried to help in the last case he was. The locals tried in vain to find him and stop him. That's when the true slaughter began.
That's when the locals called the BAU for help.
The team started just like any other case, following their own M.O, not knowing that he was watching them, and, when they less expect it, he would attack.
He never touched any of the parents or any grown up, he never laid a hand on the woman who was babysitting the son of the leader of the team, he just knocked her out and took the child with him. He never tried to kill the father of the littlest kid, the blonde one, son of one of the females of the team; in fact, he was actually nice, he just injected him a sedative and left him lying there in the living room while he carried the crying kid in his arms, trying to shush him. The oldest of the kids was also the most difficult to take, but no impossible. He knocked out the mother just like the other female, she was the cousin of the toughest member of the team; the boy didn't leave willingly, but finally gave up when he threatened the life of his mom, who was lying unconscious on the floor of the kitchen.
The unsub took three children, three kids whose deaths would affect seven lives.
The team tried to act calm, they kept tracking him by their profile, hoping with all their hearts that they would find their kids safe and sound. They didn't expect any change, they weren't ready for it.
It was suppose to be just like any other case.
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But the truth was… it wasn't.
So...this is it. What do you think guys? Any interested? Or this was so bad that you couldn't keep reading for this part. Please, tell me what you think!