Lily's story.
a/n: Hi I hope u like my story, and I wanted to provide a name that know one knows how to pronounce, like Hermione, so I've given the welsh name Rhian to one of my characters. It's pronounced Ree-anne.
Please Review my first fanfic, and if you people out there like it I'll make it into a series - enjoy :)!!!
As soon as she walked through the barrier on to platform nine and three quarters where she would board the Hogwarts express, many pairs of eyes turned to face her, but she was use to this by now.
Exceedingly pretty, muggle born Lily Evans attracted so many stares off open-mouthed gawping boys, both sides of the barrier, she had learnt to ignore it. As boys ran from every direction, offering her help with her trunk, she turned a deep shade of scarlet which matched her beautiful golden red hair, which hung down each side of her face in long shiny spirals. As the boys eyes traveled across from the her sleek hair, to her smooth fair complexion (which was starting to return to its original colour), they noticed her stunning emerald green, sparkling eyes, Lily was very glad when three girls walked over to her. The staring boys were starting make her feel very uncomftuble.
"Hi, I'm Rhian Potter", said an equally pretty girl with long golden blonde hair, and deep baby blue eyes. As the boys attention turned to her, Rhian carried on as if she was also use to this reaction. "I know this sounds silly, but would you like any help with you're trunk?" Lily grinned openly as she, Rhian and the other two girls heaved the heavy trunk up the steps as the confused boys parted. "This is Lyndsey and Sophie by the way she said gesturing towards the other two girls. As they clambered up the last step, a greasy haired, but still very good looking boy stepped out in front of them. "Allow me", he said taking Lilys corner of trunk. Rhian made an obvious splutter of anger as she cleared her throat loudly. The boy turned around to face Rhian. "And if its not the beautiful Rhian Potter" he said, smirking. Lily turned around to see Rhian wearing a very forced smile,
"And if its not the amazing Serveus Snape," she said through gritted teeth. As Lily stared from one to the other, seeing the tension mounting between the two, after a look that could kill from Rhian, she finally found her voice. "Umm, don't worry about the trunk, I'm sure me and the girls can manage between us," she said timidly stepping forward to take the handle of the trunk. "No, I couldn't possibly, that would be most un gentlemanly," said Snape, grasping her hand, "Well then, if you're sure," said Lily removing her hand from his, "Were in compartment seventeen", Rhian said suddenly smirking, Lily looked at her curiously, Rhian just winked. She's up to something thought Lily as they walked down the corridor.
As Rhian pulled the shutters of the compartment open, Lily saw that there was already four boys sitting there, talking and laughing loudly. They all turned to see who had opened the doors to their compartment, for a moment they just stared at Lily, but then there eyes drifted to her side where Rhian stood. As she stepped forward so they could see who was standing behind her, each of the four boys jumped to their feet. "You", snarled one boy with messy black hair. He was talking to Serveus Snape. "Now come on Sirius", said a tall, very handsome boy with jet black hair, sticking up in every direction which made him look really cute, "hopefully he's learn't his lesson after last time he came near us and went away with a broken nose". To late the first boy had already lunged at Snape, only to be joined by the other three boys and Rhian. When they finally stopped fighting, Snape ran out of the compartment covered in cuts and bruises muttering that he'd get them back later. As the compartment burst into cheer's Rhian introduced Lily to the four boys. "This is Sirius Black, she said pointing to the boy with messy black hair who was examining his black eye, he looked up and smiled at her, "hey Lil", he said, "and this is Remus Lupin and Peter Petergreiw", she said pointing to two boys who were playing with exploding cards and had black singed eyebrows as a result, and this is my twin brother, James Potter". James who was searching through his trunk for his wand to mend his glasses that had cracked whilst fighting stood up and shook her hand, "nice to meet you Lily", he said smiling. You two are twins, you look nothing like each other," said Lily before she could stop herself, blushing furiously. "Good", said James grinning, I'd hate too be as ugly as her - oww" he said after getting a friendly punch off Rhian. "By the way, your wands in your pocket", Lily added as James blushed and Rhian giggled.
As the trains whistle blew, the engine started with a soft roar. Windows flew open in every direction as children hung out waving frantically to there parents. "Bye mam, bye dad,"shouted James, "Bye," joined in Rhian., "Hey, where's your parents Lil,"asked Rhian, "Oh, well my mothers quite ill in hospital, and my fathers dead", she said quietly, "my sister assisted me here in a taxi, but there's no way she would come through the barrier, she hates me, she hates witches and wizards, she thinks I'm a freak", There was a deadly silence for a few moments as everyone looked away to give lily a chance to dry her eyes. "Oh Lily, I'm so sorry", said Rhian breaking the silence and given her friend a small hug. "Hey, look there's the lady coming round with the trolley, I'm starving", said James, as he once again started rummaging though his trunk, this time, looking for his money, "James", Rhian giggled, "in your pocket", she said still giggling as James turned around. "Oh", he said, taking out a small blue bag with a J written on it, which was identical to the one Rhian was holding except that Rhian had an R on hers instead. As the two girls, Remus, James and Sirius walked out of the compartment leaving Peter, munching his cheese and crackers his mother had packed him, and Sophie and Lyndsey giggling over a muggle teenaged girl magazine they had bought on the muggle side of the station, they once again came face to face with Serveus Snape. But this time 3 other boys along with 2 girls accompanied him. "Why if its not the King of freaks himself, James Potter", said Serveus Snape loudly as the five behind him smirked and laughed nastily. "I'd like to introduce you to a few of my friends of myn, meet Lucious Malfoy", he said pointing to an averaged sized boy with a very thin and pale face with mousy blonde hair, Lucious smirked evilly. "And this is Narressor Nott", he continued. Narressor, was a tall girl who would have been very pretty with her long, dark hair and long eye lashes if it wasn't for the evil look she wore on her face. "And this is Arabella Parkinson, Frederick Goyle and Andrew Crabble,"Snape finished. "Okay, and why would we want to know that," questioned Rhian. "Because you load of freaks are gonna wantta to know are names so you can grasses up to some teacher," said Arabella Parkinson. "And what would we be grassing you up for if we were a grass which unlike you load of scum, we aren't," Rhian continued. "Umm, let me think," said Narressor Nott sarcastically, "this maybe." There was a loud thump followed by a load of laughter. Narressor had hit Rhian so hard that she had fallen over and hit her head on the floor knocking her self out. "Go Ness," said Arabella as she and the others laughed. As Lily caught Snapes eye she was astonished to see he wasn't laughing but looking rather uncomfortable."Bitch", screamed Lily, slapping Narressor write across the face and then dogging one that Narressor sent back. "Eww," shrieked Arabella, you were touched by a slimey mudblood." Over the shrieks of the two girls, James shouted out that he had too many manners to hit a girl so he'd have to settle for the next best thing. Next thing Lucius Malfoy knew he was lying on the floor, blood streaming from his nose. "Come on", said Lily to Remus as she motioned to him to help her take Lily back to there compartment. There was a nasty cut going down the side off her face, which was bleeding quite heavily. "We'll be there in a minute", Sirius called out after them as he struggled to hold James off Lucius Malfoy who was now standing up again ("nobody hits my sister....").
Remus kicked the door to the compartment open as he struggled to get the limp and still out cold form of Rhian through. As Lyndsey and Sophie saw, they rushed over to help. "Oh my gosh, what happened", screamed Lyndsey as Remus put Rhian down gently on the seat. "Those stupid gits hit her", said James walking into the compartment with Sirius. "I brought her some chocolate for when she comes round", said Sirius timidly who was as white as a sheet. "I'm going to go and find an older student", said Sophie, "yeah, I'll come with you too", said Lyndsey. "I'll stay here with Rhian", whispered Lily. "Okay, I'll be back in a minute," replied Sophie before rushing out after Lyndsey.
In no time at all, although it seemed like hours to Lily, Sophie and Lyndsey returned with two older students. "This is Author Weasley and Mollie Boorly," Sophie told them,"their 5th year prefects."Ohh, what happened", said Mollie concerned. "Narressor Nott hit her," said Lily. "Don't be a grass Lil", said Sirius. "No, she's right. I've heard of the Nott family. There very into the dark arts", said Author, "She must be Alker Nott's daughter," he said to Mollie. Mollie nodded. "Yes", she said. The people they bother with, The Averys, the Lestranges, the Snapes, - Serveus Snape,"blurted out James," he was there". Author glanced at Mollie. "Keep away from him," he said sternly, "His family are very dark wizards they were even said to"-, but what they were said to have done they didn't find out because at that moment a loud voice rang through the train. "The Hogwarts express will be arriving at Hogsmeade station shortly. Please insure that you have changed into your school robes and remember to leave your luggage onboard where we shall deliver it to your rooms, thank-you". "Oh gosh, we haven't changed into are robes yet", said Mollie. "Coming Mol", said Author," when your friend wakes up take her to Professor Mcgonagall and just tell her she's fallen over or something, okay." he added before following Mollie to change. "Thanks," Lily called after him. "Talking of robes, none of us are changed," she added. "Well if you girls just step out a sec, whilst we change then we'll swap," said Sirius. "Hang on a sec, what about Rhi," said Lily. "Oh yeah um that doesn't matter" said Sirius. "Yeah it does," said Remus, "what happens if she wakes up whilst were changing - I wouldn't mind," muttered Sirius. "I knew it!" screamed James grinning. You fancy Rhian, you're in love with my sis - shhh," whispered Lily. "Wherrre am I," said Rhian. "Lily," she said as Lily peered over her. "Come on Rhi, I'll explain latter", said Lily as she along with Sophie, supported Rhian out of the compartment. "I can walk you know! came the ignorant voice of Rhian. "By the way somebody wake Peter up," called Lily who had just noticed him asleep in the corner.
As the girls sat outside the compartment waiting for the boys to finish changing, Lily told Rhian, Sophie and Lyndsey about what happened with Snape's gang. "I'm going to kill her". Said Rhian who had now regained full consciousness as Lily told them how Narressor Nott had hit her. "K, you can go and change now," said Remus coming out with James, Sirius and Peter. "Are you o.k? Rhi," said James rushing to her side along with Sirius. "I'm fine," said Rhian getting really annoyed. "If anyone else ask's me that I swear its them who you'll be asking themselves if there okay."
As the girls changed in silence the train slowed down as it pulled into the station. "Hurry", said Lily as she finished doing up her laces on her shoes and stuffed her hat on. As they rushed out, along with the boys who had been waiting for them, they joined the crowd who were pushing and shoving trying to get out of the door. When they finally managed too, they saw a very large man, who was shouting for all the first years to come over too him where he was standing by a small fleet of boats by a lake. "That must be Hagrid", said James as they walked towards the man, "Dad told us about him, he's the Games Keeper - Firs' years over 'ere". Bellowed the man. "Right no more than four in a boat," he said as he climbed in to one. As Sirius, James, Remus and Peter climbed into one and Lily, Rhian, Sophie and Lyndsey climbed in to another, as if by magic, which it probably was Lily reminded herself, the boats started to glide forwards. "Ohh, look at the castle", said Sophie excitedly. "That must be Hogwarts," said Lily. She'd read that it was a castle in an old book she'd picked up in Diagon alley. As the boats reached land, they all scrambled out and followed Hagrid up a path, which lead to a great Oak door, which was one of the many entrances to Hogwarts. As Hagrid knocked loudly, the door suddenly swung open.......
Disclaimer: Rhian, Lyndsey, Sophie, Arabella, Crabble and Goyle's first names and any other stuff along with some of the plot that you don't recognize belong to me. Everything you do, belong to the brilliant J.K.