ALRIGHT! This is the revised version of the same 'ol Chapter 1, it should be easier to read and follow. I am working on the rest of the chappies, just be patient with me. Don't forget to review and ENJOY!

Your Info
Name: Natsumi Atakimoto aka Natsumi-chan

age:16

Height: 5'3

Weight: 121.5 lbs

Rank:3rd seat of the 10th Divison

Family: One brother Nootau Atakimoto 19 years old 3rd seat of the 2nd Divison, he's the one that named you.
Zanpatou: sword, Takeo meaning 'warrior' you're a fire element user
Looks: a lot like a little Yoroichi but a little lighter skin complexion and black hair many people say Yoroichi is your mother, but you doubting that, thought someone like her wouldn't abandon her child(ren) also have rather big breasts for your age although not as big as Matsumoto you wear a ordinary Shigami outfit, but with the back out much like Soi Fong's outfit and white arm warmers like Byakuya's

Past: you and your brother grew up in the 78th District with Renji and Rukia as orphans you never seen or met your parents, needless to say, however you became great friends with the two, your brother, on the other hand has this rivalry with Renji much like the one he has with Ichigo

Nowadays: you achieved 3rd seat on the 10th Divison and friends with almost everyone except 12th Divison captain ,Mayuri, 2nd Divison lieutenant, Marechiyo, 5th Divison caption, Aizen , and 9th Divison captain, Tousen, but admired Ichimaru, captain of the 3rd Divison much to your brother's dismay (also this is before Aizen, Tousen, and Ichimaru left)

Personality: nice, quick to say 'yes' to favors without thinking about consequences making it an advantage for your lieutenant Rangiku Matsumoto, and a bit of a pervert ,but not like the 8th Divison Captain ,Shunsui, very caring, and occasionally hangs out with Matsumoto and Hanatarou 7th seat of the 4th Divison

Likes: doing favors(not those kind of favors PERVS), going out, freeloading, having fun, and fighting to better yourself

Dislikes: very mean people, being idle, someone groping you

I was walking down the corridors of the tenth division when someone called my name, I turned around to see a short boy with bluish-green eyes and white hair holding a stack of papers.

"hai, Hitsugaya-taicho" I answered.

"well third-seat, can you give these papers to Ukitake-taicho?" he ordered more so than asked handing me the stack of papers.

"hai, Hitsugaya-taicho" I nodded and walked off.

'does he even that I have a name' I pouted. I only been with the tenth division for two weeks, but that should've been more than enough time for him to know the third in command in his division. As I walked through Soul Society to deliver the papers, I bumped into my good friend Hanatarou.

"Oi Natsumi-chan, I've been looking for you" he exclaimed slightly out of breath

"hmm, well what is it" I asked shifing the papers in my hands somewhat impatiently.

"I have to do a quick favor for Rukia and all the taichos and fuku-taichos are taking their showers in the baracks, can you please take over my duty today and hand them out their towels?" he asked and bowed

"okay" I said simply, he looked up at me with a surprised expression spread across his face.

"but I have to deliver these papers to Ukitake-taicho's divison first, but I'll help you out as soon as I'm done."

"oh thank you!" Hanatarou said and bowed again

"you're welcome, anytime" I respond patting his head with one hand while balancing the papers on another.

I flash-stepped the rest of the way to 13th division's office to avoid any more distractions, upon arriving I stepped up to the huge twin doors.

"Oi, Ukitake-taicho are you in?" I called through the door knocking on it then I thought about it.

'Hanatarou-kun said that all of the captains and vice captains were taking showers of course he's not here' I spun on my heel to take the papers back, slightly annoyed at my captain for sending me there knowing that Ukitake wouldn't be there.

"He's not here right now, but what is it?" a female's voice sounded behind me sending electricity up my spine in shock.

"um, Hitsugaya-taicho asked me to deliver these." I state plainly slightly lifting the papers.

"oh yes, we were expecting you" the red-headed girl responded taking the papers, another guy came up and dumped candy in my arms taking up the same amount of space as the papers did. I sweat-dropped.

"and uh, what is this for?" I asked barely able to keep it all in my arms.

"it's for you and your captain" he explained telling me that Ukitake-taicho told him to give it to me.

"um, thanks...I guess." I finished up the conversation, bowing as much as I could without causing the candy to spill over. I flash-stepped back to my divison, eager to get the candy out of my hands. 'please let Matsumoto be there.'

"taicho, fuku-taicho" I sort of yelled through the door, since I couldn't knock.

"what is it?" Matsumoto's sleepy voice rang through the door, I sighed.

"I have something for Hitsugaya-taicho from Ukitake-taicho" I yelled back getting even more impatient, I had other things to do. I heard a sigh followed by the locks from the door.

"what is-" Matsumoto began lazily when I pushed the mountain of candy into her arms and taking off not bothering to look back. "ja ne, fuku-taicho"

I finally made my way to the showering quarters and dashed into the room that held the towel cart, once I found it I proceeded to roll it into the stall where they were showering. 'wait a second, there's gonna be alot of naked guys in there, what did I get myself into?'

"oh Kami" I whispered blushing furiously and turned to make a break for it when I felt a sharp pain on my butt and shot up.

"what's up Natsumi" Renji's voice sounded behind me, my head reluctantly turned to face him. My eyes widened more the further they traveled down his naked form taking in the details of his cut body until it rested on a certain part. "oh my..." I whispered as blood streamed from my nose.

"what are you doing in-hey! I'm up here" he mused waving a hand in front of my face. I shook my head hard trying to erase the images that my mind took of him.

"like what you see" he teased grinning wide as I snapped my head up to glare at him.

"R-R-Renji-f-fuku-t-taicho" I stuttered wiping the blood with my hand before squeezing my eyes shut "y-you really n-need a towel, sir" I continued reaching for a towel to give him, suddenly I felt strong arms wrap around my waist and lift me off the ground in greeting, before setting me down on my feet. I gasped feeling violated by the male anatomy pressed against my body. I spun around to see the nude body of another vice captain.

"oh Kami" I blushed deeply "you guys really need towels" I continued handing them the drying cloth.

"aww, what's wrong Natsumi-chan, you look flustered" Hisagi questioned wrapped the towel loosely around his hips, it was oh so sexy.

"ano..." I started when I heard someone call for a towel 'save'

"uh, looks like I have to go" I pushed the cart hurriedly past them.

"Kuchiki-taicho, here you go" I say looking away as you handed him a towel, when I felt him grab it I heard my brother's voice.

"nee-san, what the hell are you doing in here?" he asked with a surprised look an his face.

"I'm doing a favor for someone." I replied dryly, narrowing my eyes. I threw a towel in his face annoyed. "He's not even a captain or vice-captain."

"I'll say" Renji voiced from a distance, "URUSAI" I yelled blushing madly, earning a laugh from him.

"third-seat, there's no need to yell" nobody calls me third-seat, but my captain. You looked down to see him in a towel 'thank God'

"gomen nasai, taicho" I apologized when yet another person called for me. "excuse me, sir" I sighed rolling the cart to Ikkaku.

"here." I murmur closing my eyes as I extended my arm with the towel in his direction, but what he grabbed wasn't a towel. I eyes shot open to see his hands squeezing my breasts.

"BAKA" I screamed and punched him in the face. His head flew back as he staggered a couple steps backwards. "how dare you?" I growled before proceeding to beat the living day lights out of him until my brother grabbed me. Even all beat up Ikkaku wore a grin on his face.

"ONII-SAN!" I struggled to shake his grip but he proved to be the stronger sibling. "That's sexual harassment, why are you holding me down?! You should be on my side!" I hissed kicking my feet wildly.

"THIRD-SEAT!" I heard my captain yell "calm down!"

"taicho" I spoke softly feeling the anger drain from my system.

"captain" my brother breathed in disbelief releasing me "that pipsqueak is your captain?"

"pipsqueak" Hitsugaya repeated in annoyance, a vien pulsated on his forehead.

"onii-san, that's my captain! What's wrong with you! I apologize for him, sir. He was just kidding" I bowed in respect.

"no I wa-OOW" Brother scoffed when I elbowed him sharply in the stomach and smiled.

"I see, I'll see you later third seat" Hitsugaya waved off. I quickly finished my job and returned the towel cart to it's rightful place 'why that Hanatarou, I'll get him for this'

I nearly ran out of the shower quarters to see Hanatarou running towards me 'just the guy I wanted to see'

"Hanatarou-kun..." I began my voice as angelic as possible "YOU SET ME UP" I yelled grinding my knuckles into his temples.

"gomen nasai, gomen nasai...I didnt set you up, I promise" he squirmed holding onto my wrists. I released him upon hearing Matsumoto's voice calling me.

"Matsumoto fuku-taicho..." I stated blankly, she was probably running away from her paper work again.

"I'm so bored, ne, let's go out for a drink" she stated her eyes lighting up, I sweat-dropped.

"I'm only sixteen years old!" I scolded her, she just folded her arms under her breasts.

"a little won't hurt, it's either that or you do my paperwork for the week" she threatened, my eyes widened.

"are you bribing me" I asked incredulously.

"come oooonnnnn, you work just as hard as Hitsugaya-taicho. You need to lighten up!" she whined shaking my shoulders lightly.

"fuku-taicho, it's eleven in the morning, even if I agreed to go it's still too early!" I sighed narrowing my eyes.

"okay then, will you come tonight? Renji, Hisagi, Ikkaku and I will be there" she asked hopefully

"No! They were coming on to me just a couple minutes ago, completely sober!" I say annoyed.

"please Akiyama-san" she pleaded displaying her irresistible puppy eyes.

"fuku-taicho..." I attempted to protest weakly.

"please" she asked again breaking my resolve, I nodded.

"yay! you're the best, I promise you wont regret it!" she celebrated crushing me in her breasts.

"fuku-taicho, y-you're killing me" I choked out before she finally released me waving as sauntered off.

"what the hell did I get myself into, again!" I sighed to myself then glanced back at Hanatarou who patiently waited for me and the lieutenant to finish.

"thanks for sticking around, Hanatarou-kun, but I'm going back to my division. See you around" I waved back at him as you ran in the direction of your squad. I knocked on the big twin doors of my captain's office.

"come in" he spoke and I opened the door walking in on him while he was doing his paperwork. This was the first time I ever set foot in his office. It was completely furnished; Like a apartment and office in one.

"what is it third seat" he asked not even bothering to look up from his work 'still with that third seat mess'

"sir, my name is Natsumi Atakimoto. I'd appreciate it if you called me by my name!" I said boldly.

"what?" he asked finally lifting his head from his desk to look at me.

"I said my name is Natsumi Aktimotoand that I would appreciate it if you called me by my name" I repeated yourself, Hitsugaya snorted.

"I'm aware of your name, but I'll call you whatever I want. Third Seat." he said rather coldly returning his sight on his paperwork "now state your business with me."

I chewed my bottom lip "do you hate me or something" I prodded, he gave me a hard look before returning his sight to his paperwork again.

"no" he replied simply "I just want to know what you are doing in my office." In truth I forgot what I came in here for but I couldn't let him know that.

"taicho...if that's the case then call me by my name, please" I breathed out.

"Natsumi, what is it?" he sighed pinching the bridge of his nose

"oh you actually said it!" I said excitedly glomping him, burying him in my breasts in the process.

"get off of me!" he gasped a slight blush upon his cheeks.

"oh sorry" I muttered standing up and dusting myself off.

"what do you want" he asked in annoyance his patience officially drained

"oh nothing, see you later taicho" I replied promptly leaving his office.

I met with Matsumoto and the others, even though I would do almost anything with her, drinking wasn't one of them and I really didnt want to be there.

"so Natsumi what's going on in your life? I haven't seen you with a boyfriend, what's up with that?" Ikkaku inquired already drunk.

"what the hell are you talking about" I muttered bitterly.

"aw come on, don't be mean" Renji slurred then glanced down at my side, noticing that I hadn't taken so much as a sip of my sake, he nudged Matsumoto.

"yeah, come on Natsumi, you didn't even touch your sake" Matsumoto slurred as well

"hey" hic "let's hold her down" Hisagi grinned grabbing and folding my arms behind my back while Renji held my legs down.

"what the hell you guys" I exasperated, squirming as Matsumoto poured two whole bottles of sake down my throat. I coughed and sputtered as soon as it was over.

"how do you feel" she asked mischievously, after waiting a few moment

"uhhh..." I slurred heavily extremely intoxicated.

"whoops, I think I gave her too much" she sighed tucking me under her arm "we're gonna have to cut this meeting short you guys, Hitsugaya would kill me if I let her remain like this"

"aww, don't give her so much next time" Hisagi complained lifting himself to leave Ikkaku and Renji followed suit.

"the rocks are running with up Matsu-chan, look" I giggled hysterically as she carried me.

Matsumoto knocked on Hitsugaya's door.

"it's late, what is it?" he asked on the other side

"open the door, taicho" Mastumoto sighed as she watched the door fly open. The strawberry blonde dropped me on top of him.

"hey taicho" I slurred resting my head on his chest, wrapping my arms around his neck.

"Matsumoto, what happened" he growled feeling his cheeks burning.

"I accidentally gave her to much sake, but she'll be fine" she shrugged her shoulders, he sighed and pushed me off of him. I rolled onto my back still giggling.

"can she stay here tonight?" Mastsumoto asked

"NO" the white-haired captain yelled.

"why not" she whined.

"why can't you bring her to your house or even her own house" he asked

"I don't have the space" she answered quickly tucking her hair behind her ears tiredly.

"and you think I do" he questioned taking a quick glance around his office

"but we're already here" Matsumoto continued to whine lazily

"Matsumoto" Hitsugaya warned

"please" she begged in her sweetest voice

"fine" he sighed in defeat picking me up and laying me down on his bed, by this time I had already passed out and he just pulled the covers over my body.

"Matsumoto.." he started but she had already sprawled out asleep on his couch, he sighed again pulling some spare covers over her and prepared for bed himself.

And there you have it, don't forget to review. Until we meet again...JA NE!