Here's the first chapter to the Narnia story.
By the way, I read the original stories, so when I read them, the Dawn Treader was 3rd.
Sorry that I'm updating my other stories instead of Gone, but I have a little writer's block on that one so I would appreciate any ideas.
I do not, unfortunately, own Narnia, just my ideas. ;)
(Just a reminder, this is mainly movie-verse)
Hope you like it!
As Edmund saw the great jaws of the sea serpent bearing down on him, he thrust the glowing sword upwards. Right afterwards, he felt a searing pain on his back and heard someone scream. He was in too much pain to comprehend anything beyond his shoulder. His last memory before blacking out was falling.
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Right before Edmund falls, on deck...
"Pull!" Caspian and the crew were desperately trying to draw the serpent towards Edmund. Caspian spared a glance at Edmund and saw him staring into mid-air, not at the monster.
"Ed! Kill it already!" Caspian shouted jerking Edmund out of his trance just in time.
Caspian's attention was pulled downwards by another bump of the boat, that this time made some of the men let loose their ropes. He yanked harder.
The sea serpent lunged, bearing down on Edmund on the mast. Caspian saw Edmund raise a shining blue sword, which meant Eustace (1) had succeeded in placing all the Lord's swords on the table. Right after he saw that, Edmund vanished under the jaws of the serpent.
"Edmund!" he heard Lucy scream, terrified for her brother.
The monster was slowly evaporating, after emitting a very, very loud scream of pain. Caspian tore his eyes away from it and looked over to see Edmund falling with a thing stuck in his shoulder, which he couldn't identify.
"Ed!" Caspian and Lucy both screamed.
They ran over to him, and somehow Caspian manged to catch him, before collapsing under his weight. The thing in his shoulder turned out to be a gigantic fang, which was, unfortunately, not evaporating, as the sea serpent had.
"I'll go get my cordial," said Lucy in panic and ran away to get it.
After she went, Caspian pulled the fang from Edmund's shoulder. It disappeared the moment it got out of his wound. Strange, he thought. Shouldn't it have evaporated when the sea monster died? The thought flew out of his head as he saw Lucy returning with her cordial.
"Hear it is!" she said.
Caspian grabbed it out of her hand, opened it, and let a drop go into Edmund's mouth. Nothing happened at first but then he started shaking, like the poison of the serpent repelled the fire-flower juice. The wound closed after a very long moment, but Edmund was still viontly shivering on the ground. While he was watching this, Caspian noticed that the ocean around them was getting lighter.
"The mist is gone!" yelled one crew member.
"Look the boats!" yelled another.
Caspian jumped up to see the boats with the missing people from the Lone Islands. (2) The crew members all shouted with joy at the sight.
The day was filled with joyful reunions, including Eustace. They heard him shout Lucy's name in the ocean besides the boat and Reepicheep (3), after jumping in with him, discovered the water was sweet, just like his song.
But still Edmund did not move.
(1) If you stare at the word "Eustace" too long, it looks like it's spelled really weirdly. (Sorry, very random)
(2) I'm sorry, but I completely forgot the name of the girl, so she doesn't exist in my story. :(
(3) Is that how you spell his name?
I'm going to San Francisco for 2 weeks without a computer or laptop to work on, but I'll start working on my stories again after I come back.
Thanks for reading!
~The Goddess of Books~