So this my first story I have ever post on fanfiction
And I'm wondering if I should continue it so please leave
Comments if I should or not, THANK YOU.
"Hey Emily….Emily!"
"Oh, h….eys howsss y…ou doings "Emily responded with an incredibly drunk slur.
"Have you been drinking….again!"
"Maybe a little" Emily nearly falling over the railing of the bored walk onto the beach Emily's friend grabbed her before she fell, head first.
"Emily you need to stop getting blackout drunk, you're going to hurt yourself or others around you!" Emily ignoring her, and making a slowly stagers over to the stairs removing her shoes and slowly making her way to the sand filled beach.
"You know what Emily I'm not going to be your babysitter whenever your blackout drunk!" Emily paying her no mind kept her drank staggering onto the beach. "Whatever, I don't have to deal with this every time you're drunk!" Emily's friend finally snapped after year of watching over Emily drink herself stupid, and never tries making the attempt to change. So she left her friend at the dark beach.
"Aww, she got mad at me a left me alone" Emily pouted, and continued stubbing on the beach eventually the drunk Emily fell hard onto the sandy beach floor "Ouch!" Emily giggles to herself falling, Emily then glares around to find a big dark figure. "Hey can you help me up….I'm a little drunk, can u give me a ride to my house please" the figure didn't answer "I can see you, don't ignore me!" the figure starts walking towards the dumb drunk, the figure is now in touching distance from Emily. "Are you going to help me?" Emily grinned
"Rini….Rini, I was looking for all day on the beach, you finally came back" The figure then kneeled down and look into the eyes of the girl who was sprawled on the beach floor "…You're not….Rini!" The figure screamed to the point it almost shock Emily sober "Your eyes don't hold the same of Rini!" The figure jumped up.
"Are you drunk and lost your friend to?" Emily finally got her legs together and got up, she watched as the now clearly man started to grinning his fist into his head "Are you okay?" Emily touched the man on his shoulder, suddenly snapping him back into reality. He glanced over and spun around facing her using his right hand to grab her neck tightly, preventing her from screaming ,and dug his other hand in his pocket.
"H…help…me" Emily was struggling to scream but his grip on her neck was to strong so she started too frail her arms and legs roughly. His grip loosening, he then ripped his hand out of his jacket pocket with a damped cloth and covered her mouth with the damp cloth. Emily slowly stopped struggling, He looked deeply into her eyes as she started to whimper and tear up as she faded in and out of consciousness then finally her body now limp he carried her away "YOUR NOT RINI, YOUR NOT THE INNOCENT RINI I MISSED"
Should this be continued please leave comments
And if you see any mistakes please let me be
Aware of.