Hi, I'm Angyl98 this is my first Maximum Ride Fanfic so please review and tell me anything I can do to make it better.

(Max) pov."FANG!" I scream as he plummets towards the earth. I rush to save him but he's falling so fast and an eraser grabs me and slams me on the ground.

"Max, Max. wake up your dreaming" I hear someone say as they touch my shoulder.

I jump up and take in my sorroundings where am I... Oh yea were at a hotel I remember. "Fang?" I say drowsily.
and I start crying wich I promise I usually dont't do.

Fang pulls me into his lap and I cry on his shoulder "Max it's ok it was just a dream." He says calmly.

I try to compose myself as the rest of the flock wakes up. Angel comes over and sits on my bed while Iggy, Gazzy, and Nudge moan.

"it's way to early." Iggy mumbles. I look at the clock it's 11:00 already.

I jump out of bed and start kicking the flock awake. (gently of course) and force them to get ready They take turns changing in the bathroom... Nudge first as always.

I wait for my turn. Dumping my backpack out on the bed to find my credit card It's not there and my bag wasn't where it was last night either. "Fang my credit cards missing." I say somewhat calmly.

He walks over and starts helping me look. "did you check your pockets." he says.

"of course I did" I say and start trying to check my pocket's without him seeing.

It's in one of them "I found it" I cry pretending to check under the bed.