ThunderAssault: Hello to Everybody! Well here I am, not dead and ready to get stuff done! Lol anyways this is the story that will be the biggest and longest story on this archive. But now Alex we have a new challenger. His name is The Jealous Alpha. Now, what do you have to say about that?
AlexTheHereticLoneWolf666: Sweet dude! I've heard of him. He wants to challenge us?
ThunderAssault: Well not challenging us but he's also writing a long story and well now it seems we have to compete with it. Anyways, let's get to the story. Now, this first chapter was done by me and it took FOREVER! But it was worth it and I hope all of you enjoy it. Well Alex, do you have anything to say?
Alex: Hello, everyone! My names Alex and I'm REALLY excited to start this story! This story IS competing against BravoBravo's 600+ reviews and we are trying to get it to a 1,000+ reviews for our story. Okay, I'm gonna be writing the 2nd chapter. It'll be a while since I'm working on a story called "Ba'al", but it'll be up!
Thunder: Well that's going to be scary I mean good lol anyways we will make this story as long as possible and the best we can. Anyways get to reading, I hope you like it.
Alex: Ha ha ! It wont be scary It'll be Action/Drama/Adventure/Romance/Horror/ Supernatural. It's already 19 thousand words. It'll be probably 20-30K
Thunder: Okay lets let our readers read now.
Both of us: Enjoy!
Chapter 1: Black and Red
"I gotta get out of here."
That's all Humphrey could think as he ran from Kate. Humphrey had just told Kate that he was going to be a "fun-loving lone wolf" so he left her there on her wedding alone. Humphrey kept running while so much went through his head.
He wanted to just stop and cry, knowing that she would be married to that other wolf known as Garth, or as Humphrey called him, Barf. He knew that if he stopped running, he wouldn't be able to move without crying his eyes out. So he ran and ran and ran until he was going to reach the Canadian Express not wanting to turn back.
Humphrey was beginning to get closer to the train tracks as soon as he heard the sounds of the train coming on the tracks.
Gotta make it. Humphrey thought.
Humphrey then began to run as fast as he could so that he could catch the train. He was so focused on running that he didn't notice the branch right in front of him. He tripped over the branch and started doing barrel rolls across the ground. His body was just kicking up dirt every time he hit the ground. Humphrey came to a stop but groaned as he got up. He had dirt and grass all over his fur and had a patch of grass on his head that covered his eyes. He shook his head to get the grass off his head. He then saw the train right in front of him and bolted for it.
Humphrey was about to jump in but was then hit in the side by something. He hit the ground with a thud and lost some of his air. He came to a sliding stop and looked at what had hit him. It was another wolf.
Humphrey looked towards the tracks to see that the train had pass by. "God damn it!" He yelled out loud.
He then looked over at the wolf that hit rammed into him. He ran on over to the wolf with anger in him. He looked at the wolf and pinned him to the ground.
"What the fuck is your problem!" Humphrey yelled at the wolf.
The wolf then kicked Humphrey off of him and stood up. Humphrey was sent to the ground and slid across the ground and finally came to a stop. He then stood up and saw the wolf breathing hard, most likely from running. Humphrey was now angry at the wolf. He ran at the wolf, hoping to try to pin him again. The wolf noticed this and said something.
"I... have news... about... Kate..." the wolf said taken in breaths in-between.
Humphrey heard him and came to a complete stop in front of him. "What do you mean you have news about Kate?" Humphrey asked curiously.
"Kate... she's in trouble... a stampede... had started and... now her dad... is in the stampede." the wolf said still trying to catch his breath.
"Oh damn." Humphrey said in shock.
"Humphrey, go back and save her dad... if you do that maybe she'll admit her feelings towards you." the wolf said.
"Your right, I can't give up. I gotta go now." Humphrey replied running off.
Humphrey then came to a stop. "Hey!" Humphrey yelled.
The wolf turned to him. "Thanks man."
"No problem." the wolf replied.
Humphrey then took off toward the western pack territory. But the one thing that Humphrey didn't notice was that the wolf had made a evil smile as he ran off...
Humphrey was running as fast as he could, dodging branches, and rocks. He did think of something thought as he was running.
That wolf... why did it look like... me? he had the eyes, the fur... even the figure... Wait a second, I should be thinking about Kate! Humphrey thought.
Humphrey then could see the end of the forest and ran even faster. He had reached the end and saw that he was on a low cliff. He looked down the cliff and saw Kate running on the side of the valley. He put on a small smile as he saw her. the next thing Humphrey saw made him feel... strange.
Humphrey looked at the other side of the valley and saw something... black. But this was like a shadow, it looked more like a black figure of a... wolf. Then a lot more of the figures started to appear along the other side of the valley. Humphrey was confused on so many levels. Then the next thing almost scared him to death, one of the black figure looked at him dead in the eyes. The eyes were a bright red. Humphrey rubbed his eyes and when he opened them, the figures were all gone. He shook his head.
I must be imagining things. He thought to himself.
Humphrey then started to go down the hill to get to Kate. By the time he got where she was, he saw her trying to get a piece of log off of a dead tree. He smiled and ran over to Kate and went next to Kate and began helping her.
"Need a hand?" Humphrey said smiling.
Kate turned her head in shock and smiles. "Humphrey!" Kate said in happiness.
"Come on, we can talk later, we gotta save your dad and the other wolf, what's his name." Humphrey said as they both pulled the log off.
"You mean Tony right?" Kate said giggling a little as she got on the log.
"Ha-ha more like Fony." Humphrey said trying to make a joke.
Boy, that joke failed. Kate and Humphrey were now in the log slowly moving towards the big hill. Humphrey then turned around and pushed as hard as he could and sent them to the big hill in no time.
"Hold on!" Humphrey yelled.
Kate and Humphrey grabbed onto the log with dear life. They were moving so fast that it was insane for them to be doing this. Humphrey looked over Kate shoulder and saw turns coming up.
"Lean left, 20 degrees!" he yelled.
Kate and him leaned left and did it perfectly. They took the turn and straightened up and saw another turn, this time turning right.
"Roll right!" This time, Kate yelled it.
Humphrey heard her and leaned right. They took the turn a little rough and almost ran into a big boulder. The log actually hit the boulder a tiny bit but not much to cause massive damage. They then turned to make sure they went straight.
"That was too close!" Humphrey yelled.
"Sorry, I'm still trying to learn!" Kate yelled back.
Humphrey chuckled at what she said. They then were coming up on a hill that wasn't that high. They got to the top of it and could see the stampede of caribou and saw two wolves running from it.
"That's them!" Kate yelled.
"Alright hold on!" Humphrey yelled back.
Humphrey then had leaned right and was now on a course for a big jump. Kate knew what was coming and grabbed hold of the log with all her strength. They got closer and closer until they finally hit the jump. They went flying in air and stayed in the air for a good amount of time. Humphrey then tapped Kate on the shoulder and she turned her head around.
"So how was the wed-" Humphrey couldn't finish as they hit the ground.
They were sent flying forward hitting the ground many times until then came to a stop. They saw Winston and Tony jumped over the log and went behind it. Kate and Humphrey then started to crawl to the log while caribou went over them.
"So how was the wedding?" Humphrey asked fully this time.
"Well it actually never happened..." Kate replied with a sad smile.
"Why not? Was it because of this stampede?" Humphrey asked about to jump to the log.
"No... It was because I lo-" Kate was cut off as she got a hove to the skull.
Humphrey had already jumped to the log and noticed that Kate was out cold. "KATE!" Humphrey yelled as he jumped and covered her body with his.
Humphrey was being stomped on and was getting cuts and bruises everywhere. Winston and Tony knew what to do and started to claw and growl at caribou so that they would go away from the two wolves.
The stampede soon ended and Humphrey was now limp on Kate's body. Humphrey then stood up slowly and got off of Kate so he could see if anything bad happened to her.
"Kate..." Humphrey said in a hopeful voice.
Winston then ran over to Kate's body and put his paw to her neck to check her pulse. He waited awhile but soon enough felt the *Thump*.
"She's alive but unconscious and we need to be careful if we are going to move her." Winston said in a calm voice.
Humphrey then sighed in relief that she wasn't dead. "Wait, when did you know how to treat people?" Humphrey asked questioningly.
"It's not treatments, it's examination, and Eve had been teaching me a little of her 'health' skills." Winston replied.
Humphrey tried to walk to get other wolves to help but when he took one step, he yelped in pain and fell to the ground, yelling and whining.
"Humphrey!" Winston said shocked.
Winston ran over to him and examined him. He had bruises on his paws, shoulders, legs, and face. He also had cuts on his ears, legs, and back. The worst of them was that he had a big gash on the top of his head that started to bleed once he took that one step.
Eve saw the whole thing and ran over Winston in a hurry. "Winston, what happened to Kate?" Eve asked in a worried voice.
"She other there near the log but she's unconscious. We need to more her and take her to the healers den but be careful. Gather some wolves and get them to help carry her." Winston explained.
"What about Humphrey?" Eve asked questioningly.
"I'll take of him. He saved our daughter and now I'm going to save him." Winston said picking Humphrey up slowly.
"Just be careful, that gasp could become bigger." Eve said.
"I will." Winston said giving Eve a lick on the cheek.
Winston then took off towards his and Eve's den so he could help Humphrey heal up. The whole way there, Humphrey was whimpering and whining from the pain as he bounced when Winston was running. Winston saw his den in sight and began going a faster. He finally arrived at his den and set Humphrey down.
"Okay Humphrey, stay with me, I'll be right back. I'm going to go grab some leafs so I can patch your wound up." Winston said to calm him down.
"A-Alright..." Humphrey said in a weak voice.
Winston then took off towards the woods to find some leafs to patch up Humphrey's wounds. While Winston was gone, Humphrey was thinking of so many thing but the most common thing was Kate.
God, I'm in so much pain. I feel like I could die any second now but I can't, not as long as Kate is still alive. What was Kate going to say before she was knocked out? Why didn't the wedding happen between Garth and Kate? Well no matter what happens, I'm not giving up on Kate. Humphrey thought.
Humphrey then saw Winston come running in with a mouth full of leafs and some kind of weird plant.
"What's t-that pl-plant?" Humphrey stuttered in pain.
(Okay the information your about to read is something I decided to use in this story- Thunder) "It's called a Aloe plant, Eve told me that it heals wounds easily. She even showed me how to use in." Winston explained as he dropped the leaves next to Humphrey.
"So, is t-this a-a examination or a t-treatment?" Humphrey asked chuckling but winced afterwards.
"Ha ha you know how to make a joke even when your in so much pain." Winston replied chuckling a little.
Winston then broke one of the leaves from the plant and smeared on this gel like substance on the biggest leaf he had. He then used his paw to spread out the gel so it would cover the whole leaf, which was just big enough for the wound on Humphrey's head. Winston then went over to Humphrey and attempted to put the leaf on when Humphrey pulled away.
"Is it g-going t-to st-sting?" Humphrey asked nervously.
"No it's not, it's actually very soothing." Winston replied.
Humphrey moved his head back forward so Winston could put the leaf on his head. He tilted his head forward and Winston saw the big gash on his head. Winston then slowly put the leaf on Humphrey's head but didn't put to much pressure.
"Alright, now that that is done, let's tend to those other cuts." Winston said.
He then smeared more of the Aloe plant's gel on other leafs and put them on Humphrey's cuts. It was so soothing for Humphrey that since he wasn't moving, he felt relaxed even from all the bruises he had. He then started to fall asleep and soon went into dream land.
3 hours later
Humphrey slowly opened his eyes and groaned. From what he could see was that it was night time, which he was correct. Humphrey then tried to start moving so he could get up, but just whined in pain as he moved his body. He held through the pain and attempted to walk but yelped yet again from the pain and fell to the den floor. He yelped so loud, that it woke up Winston and Eve. They looked over at Humphrey and saw him try to stand up again but Winston was the first to take action. He ran over and caught Humphrey on his side so that he was leaning on him.
"Thanks, I needed that help." Humphrey said thankfully.
"No problem, it's the least I can do." Winston replied.
Eve got up and walked over to Humphrey and licked his cheek. "Thank you for saving my daughter Humphrey. I owe you so much for that." Eve said nicely.
"Well I can't just let the pack leaders daughter die just like that." Humphrey replied not wanting to tell them the real reason he did it.
"Well your a very sweet boy Humphrey. But keep this in mind, if you ever hurt my daughter, I will rip your tail out and shove it up your-"
"Eve, not now sweetie he's had a rough day." Winston said interrupting Eve.
"Okay okay I think we've all had a rough day." Eve replied innocently.
"Anyways, is there anyway I can get back to my den so I can sleep?" Humphrey asked.
"Of course, I was going to help you get there now actually." Winston replied.
"Thank you Winston... Thanks for everything."
"Your welcome Humphrey."
And with that, Winston helped Humphrey walk all the way to his den. Humphrey was leaning on Winston thinking the whole time but then he remember one important thing. Kate.
"Winston?" Humphrey said trying to get his attention.
"Yes Humphrey?" Winston replied.
"Where is Kate?" Humphrey asked hoping she was okay.
"She at the healers den. If you want to see her tomorrow, the den is only two minutes away if you go left of my den. Be careful though, Kate's still unconscious and is in some beat up condition from the hit to the head." Winston replied.
Humphrey sighed in relief that she wasn't dead. They continued walking but the rest of the way there Humphrey started to see those... black figures again. Humphrey could see one slowly moving on the side of them on the other side of the bush but when he saw it, it disappeared. The whole way this kept happening and he decided to ask Winston a weird question.
"Winston, what do you think when you see black wolf figures with red eyes?" Humphrey asked curiously but nervous.
"Interesting question Humphrey... I think of demons." Winston replied.
Humphrey thought about it and thought that demons weren't real. By the time he though of it, he could see his den. He smiled because soon he would be fast asleep and then he'd see Kate tomorrow. They got into Humphrey's den and Winston took him to the middle of his den. He slowly set Humphrey down on the ground nice and easy. Humphrey winced as he felt the pressure of his body go against his bruised body.
"Alright, well now that your here, I'm going to be heading back to Eve. I don't want to keep her waiting." Winston said chuckling.
"Alright, I'm gonna get some sleep now. I'm so tired from all this pain." Humphrey replied also chuckling.
"Okay goodnight Humphrey." Winston said heading out the entrance.
"Night Winston." Humphrey replied.
Humphrey then laid his head down and closed his eyes together some sleep. He soon went off into dreams land but little did he know... he was being watched...
Thunder: Well I'm surely rited and happy that I finished that chapter. It was insanely long and took so much time to put in so much detail. What did you think of it Alex?
Alex: -Reads again- It's… Amazing… Ha ha. Any who, I'm typing the next chapter but it'll take awhile since I'm obsessed with Ba'al.
Thunder: Well thanks man I hope our readers like it as well.. I swear guys this dude has been writing non-stop, he's unstoppable I mean seriously lol. Anyways, I hope you all liked it, we plan to make this the best story on the site and more. Well now the next chapter will be written by Alex here. It'll be amazing. Anyways, I must be going now so I'll let Alex here say the last words for the night. Go on buddy.
Alex: Hey guys, I'll be writing the next chapter, and once I'm done with Ba'al, Please check it out.
Thunder: We just told them 3 times that your writing the next chapter… haha lol anyways bye guy's!
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