Part 1-New girl

` = inner thoughts

xD let the story begin xD

"Zetsu, come into my office please" Said the echo that filled the hide out.

-Sigh-

I opened the door into the office to see Mumsy (leader, Pein) at his office doing a stupid Sasuke pose, which really pissed me off and a girl which seemed to be in the Akatsuki cloak but her face hidden just like Kakashi has.

"Zetsu, this is Hanaka for the next couple of week I want you to look after her and show her around the base"

"Hello, Zetsu ... n nice to meet you" Hanaka said in a stuttering shy voice.

"Nice to meet you too" I replied

`Do i have to put with her for the next god no's when, why me why could'nt Tobi be stuck with her`

I nodded at Mumsy and moved my head motioning Hanaka to follow me, once she realised what i was trying to say she jumped and followed saying bye to the leader. Along the corridor i heard Hanaka's footsteps behind me starting to slow doing then running to catch up every now and again. We finally got to the emty room that she will be staying in.

"This is where you will be staying and i will leave you to get settled in if you need anything i will be just in the lounge which is just down the hall and round the corner from where the leaders room is."

"Okay..." Hanaka said and smiled.

I nodded and started to turn towards the lounge.

"Err Zetsu...Thank you"

I turned once again and smiled even though she might not of seen it as for my body.

I went back to the lounge and sat down where Itachi, Hidan and Deidara was sitting around. They all turned at me and gave me the 'What did Mumsy want this time' look.

"New member"

"oh ... again dam it Mumsy, what is it with him adding more members. We have enough beutiful arts un" Said Deidara.

"Hmm well her name's Hanaka..." Before I could finish I heard a whimper and footsteps.

I turned and just got the last of Hanaka's cloak. I turned to Deidara who was now confused.

"Well done Deidara you upsetted her without even meeting her..." I sighed and left the lounge to follow Hanaka.

"What... what did i say" Said Deidara faintly.

I finally got to Hanaka's room and knocked. Once i heard the signal to say I could come in I opened the door to Hanaka sitting on her bed cuddling a pillow crying.

"Look what Deidara said he did'nt mean it, he's just a stupid blonde"

"No... it's true im never wanted. All through out my life i have been rejected even my own mother and father rejected me. No matter what i do all i have to do is turn up and i get rejected."

Me: well i decided to redo the story and change it into a one shot. The first part is done and what did yew think?

Zetsu: hmm thanks anyway for reading what was in the previous story but Naruto's Knucklehead's mouse in her head seems to have stopped spinning the wheel and she could'nt think of any thing.

Me: err thanks for that Zetsu...anyway please comment, fav and if yew havernt all ready follow xD