Prologue
The dark snowy night gaze fell ona sleeping baby.The baby grew soundless as he washed up on land.
He stared at the people watching him.They were not human.One stuck a finger to hismouth.It smelled like rotten cheese.He bit his finger.
The demons had named the baby Hiei.They trained him.He soon soon slayeda packof thieves..He was about 6 years old by then.His power increased and soon the demons who had raised him got too scared of him.
Hiei grew over the years.He soon went to a smith and wanted to challenge him.He said he was a demon and was too powerful for Hiei.Hiei also wanted a third eye.The smith wouldn't let him because he thought it would hurt too much.
Hiei showed proof that he could stand it by cutting one of his own fingers.
For about 3 years Hiei had surgery.At the end the smith wanted to challenge Hiei but Hiei just stumbled away with his black shirt dragging behind him.
I know this is sucky but please review