Just something small I thought of. A poem about the high ranking Fire Nation. Any feedback you can offer would be appreciated.
"The Fire Nation." - Poem
Cruel and unforgiving,
Their actions will never be forgiven,
Their ways will never be forgotten;
The other Nation's fall to their knees.
Not through free will, not through their own actions.
But through uncountable fear.
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The waters of the Water Nation's boil at their arrogance,
The Earth shakes at their horrible actions.
The air thins at their hatred.
However, they still fall to their knees.
Not through free will, not through their own actions.
But through uncountable fear.
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The Fire Nation will never change,
They will win the war, it seems to be going in that direction anyway.
Say goodnight to freedom and peace.
However, even with all this the other Nations still fall to their knees,
Not through free will, not through their own actions.
But through uncountable fear.
Feedback... please?
Wolf x