Hi ! my name is Grecia and it is my first time ever writing a story so if there is any thing you think I should do better or anything about the plot of the story that doesn´t fit please tell me , i´m open to suggestions
(forgive my language im from Perú so my native language is spanish )
Athena Mayfield:
Born 1987 (25)
Daughter to Louis and Steven Mayfield , nuclear scientists
Has 2 sisters Charlotte and Violet Mayfield
Has lived in S.H.I.E.L.D since 2002 (15)
Parents died when she was 15 because of a radiation accident
Because of exposure to gamma rays has a water controlling ability
Trained in several self-defense techniques
Is recently an active S.H.I.E.L.D agent
Is specialized in criminal behavior analysis
Behavior and Characteristics:
Hyper vigilant
Very active
Happy most of the time , it´s very difficult to upset her unless there is a threat against her sisters or someone she loves
Very direct in her thoughts
Uses sarcasm very often
She , as well as her sisters , is used in interrogations because of her unbreakable façade
NOT the sentimental type
Acts before thinking
Charlotte Mayfield:
Born in 1989 (23)
Daughter to Louis and Steven Mayfield , nuclear scientists
Has 2 sisters Athena and Violet Mayfield
Has lived in S.H.I.E.L.D since 2002 (13)
Parents died when she was 13 because of a radiation accident
Because of exposure to gamma rays has a mind controlling ability
Trained in several self-defense techniques
Is recently an active S.H.I.E.L.D agent
Is specialized in designing special S.H.I.E.L.D suits
Behavior and Characteristics:
Almost always happy
Appears silent and shy when she doesn´t know someone
Has a hard time trusting someone
Is a reserved person
Not the sentimental type
Thinks things though before doing them
She , as well as her sisters , is used in interrogations because of her unbreakable façade
Violet Mayfield:
Born in 1992 (20)
Daughter to Louis and Steven Mayfield , nuclear scientists
Has 2 sisters Athena and Charlotte Mayfield
Has lived in S.H.I.E.L.D since 2002 (10)
Parents died when she was 10 because of a radiation accident
Because of exposure to gamma rays has the ability to transform into anything she desires
Trained in several self-defense techniques
Is recently an active S.H.I.E.L.D agent
Has specialized in team administration
Behavior and Characteristics:
Almost always happy
Very sentimental
Has a serious appearance
Loves technology
Is often an intermediary for fights
Uses violence as a last resource
has the spirit of leadership
Events:
Athena, Charlotte and Violet Mayfield were found unconscious in their parent´s private lab after an accidental explosion caused by the overheating of a machine. Because of the explosion many flammable chemicals overheated, causing a radioactive wave that killed everything in its path.
The Mayfield sister's weren´t killed because they were waiting in a secure environment for their parents to come back before the explosion (their parent's office). After realizing something went wrong the girls left the office in search of their parents, at that moment they got hit by one of the last radiation waves which left them unconscious after a few moments of severe pain.
The S.H.I.E.L.D agents arrived aprox.30 min after the explosion, having the lab in close surveillance wasn´t enough to avoid the deaths of Louis and Steven Mayfield. After securing the scene the girls were retrieved and brought to S.H.I.E.L.D headquarters.
The Mayfield´s have lived in S.H.I.E.L.D since 2002 and have proved to be very useful in hand-to-hand combat, they have controlled their powers and learned to use them at their desire. They are also being considered for the Avengers Iniciative .