Ok, I know, 4 beyblade fic, but know body knows that. I destroyed 2 fics so far. 1 I'm giving another chance. Please, somebody, review this fic. Please, for me! Oh and this is like the other fic, just a little different.
Disclamer: I don't own any one, just the made up characters and made up blades. But soon, I will own it all, MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.
Summary: 1 girl, 4 boys, 5 friends, 1 enemy, 11 blades, 11 bit beasts. 100 chaos. (4th boy coming soon.) OcxOcxOc(+ 2 other Oc. What, surprised?)
Profiles.
David Magulo
Hair Color: Brown
Hair style: Pointy (4 spikes going straight up.
Eye color: Brown
Blade: Ending X
Blade System: Hard Metal System exe.
Clothes: White shirt with BBA on it(Red). Blue jeans, and a black Beyblade ready belt. Wears black sneakers.
Bit beast: Zaber X
Bit beast looks: Has rollers on his arms. Looks like Dragoon, except he is green.
Element: Wind.
Moves: Rapid Spin Tornado (Endurance attack), Whirl Wind Attack (Defense attack), Dragons Strike (Offensive move)
Favorite colors: Blue black and red.
Profile: A boy who has bladed ever since the sport was created. His best friend is Max of BBA Revolution. He has actually tied with Max in a bey battle. He never learned to give up a match and also end up tired at the end of every match, that is challenging for him that is.
Crush: Mitchell Palinsga
Brian Notago
Hair color: Black
Hair style: Round (like a ball)
Eye color: Blue
Blade: Snake to Heaven
Blade System: Hard Metal System
Clothes: Brown shirt with yellow sleeves. Green pants and walks bear footed. Also has a green backpack which holds all of his Beyblade gear.
Bit beast: Hydra
Bit beast looks: Green, 20 snake heads head, 4 legs, and a tail.
Element: Water
Moves: Tidal Wave(Defense), Water Ride (Endurance) Servants Strike (offence)
Fav colors: Green, brown and blue.
Profile: Has been David's best opponent, and was the last one to join the team. He has 2 times the knowledge that David has in blading. He bey battles just like David. Even though he is the smartest, he happens to be the one to also open a bey battle, challenging every bey blader he sees in the hope of being a better blader then David.
Crush: Mitchell Palinsga
Allan Delmego
Hair color: black
Hair style: flat
Eye color: Hazel
Blade: Maximum Rock
Blade system: Hard Metal System
Clothes: blue shirt, brown pants, and a blue Beyblade ready belt. Wears white sneakers.
Bit beast: Sphinx
Bit beast looks: A Cat, a cat made of rock.
Element: Earth
Moves: Rock bottom (Offence) Rock Hard (Defense) Sand of Doom (Endurance)
Fav colors: Blue and red
Profile: The weakess link of the team. But mostly about him is a mystery.
Crush: Mitchell Palinsga.
Mitchell Palinsga
Hair color: black
Hair style: long
Eye color: Blue
Blade: Flamming fury
Blade System: Hard metal System
Clothes: white shirt, blue skirt with pockets that hold her blade equipment. She wears cute pink shoes and a blue purse.
Bitbeast: Nemean Lion.
Bit beast looks: A lion made of fire
Element: fire
Moves: fire punch (offense), flaming sun (defense), burning desire(endurance)
Fav colors: Blue and pink
Profile: The first to team up with David, and is a great passionate bey blader. She uses complete stradegy, and focus all he stat in endurance. Her desire to Beyblade is as big as the sun, which also describes the way she looks. Very mean yet sweet at the same time.
Crush: David Magulo
(Mitchell's POV)
I was walking in the moon light. Walking, just walking, alone. Spending time in Japan is great. Tomorrow, David is coming. I hear a ring on my cell phone. I pick it up.
"So Mitchell, did he ask you out on a date yet." It was Mariah. I couldn't help but blush, even when I was alone, talking on the phone.
"Mariah, I don't like him ok." I said.
"Sure you don't, well don't worry, me Ray and Lee are going their tomorrow. Ray is really exited to bey battle with David again." Said Mariah.
"That's great to know, maybe David will win this time. How about me vs. you Mariah, we never battled. So how about it."
"Sure, why not."
"Ok, bye."
"Bye."
I looked at my watch, 11:00 pm. 5 hours till David is here, I can't wait to see his face again. I heard some one sneaking up behind me. I hit him with the elbow and turned around. To my surprise it was Allan.
"Allan, why are you here. Shouldn't you just be on the plain or the airport?" I asked.
"BOO!" I heard behind me. I couldn't help but jump up. I turned around and saw Brian and David behind me. I blushed, that was humiliating, especially in front of David.
"Heh, we lied about the plain time and arrived 5 hours ago. What took us so long, well the bus just arrived 2 hours ago, and just stopped 1 hour and a half later, so we relaxed under the bridge. O and your cell phone got our attention." Blabbed Brian.
(David's POV)
"THATS IT!" She yelled, it was loud, but not loud enough to wake any one up. She raised her purse and started hitting the 3 of us. Even though she was hurting us, she looked pretty, especially under the moon light. I loved it when she was mad. Except when she always hits us when she is.
"Mitchell, can you stop, ow, you're, ow, hurting us. ow. I said while getting hit.
"Sorry." She replied.
Brian stood up really fast.
"Um, Mitchell." Said Brian who was blushing. "Would you go out with me, lets say tomorrow."
"Brian!" She said Blushing with a surprising "Uh, sorry, but you're just not my type." She said.
"In that case can I take your out?" asked Allan who stood up as fast as Brian.
She raised her purse up. "NO!" She yelled and hit Allan "You ask me each month and it's the same answer, no."
She looked at me. I was still on the ground. She walked to me slowly, and gave me her hand. I took it blushing, and she helped me up. She was blushing also. I looked at my other two team mates, they were crying that she didn't help them up. I looked in her eyes. She went out and hugged me, and I blushed some more.
"Mitchell, you're hugging me." I said, even though I loved the hug.
"Oh sorry." She said while releasing, and then she blushed once again.
"Ok, so Mitchell, Max is letting more people stay at his place right." Asked Allan. He had to ask, ruining the moment. The special and most important moment to me.
"Huh, oh yeah, don't worry he is." Said Mitchell.
We walked to Max's place. I was looking at the ground.
'What does she think of me. Did that hug mean she loves me. Did it. Does she love me?' I asked myself in a thought. I looked up and stared at Mitchell.
"Mitchell, about earlier, with the hug" I started.
She looked at me.
"David! I know what you are going to say. I don't know what happened, I just, hugged you." Said Mitchell.
I looked to where we were going. I saw the house, just 1 block away. I looked at my watch, 3:00 in the morning.
'If only I could tell Mitchell, the feelings I have for her.'
We made it to the house. The lights were on. I rang the door bell. The door opened.
"Oh hey David, you came here early. I just woke up to get a little break fast, then brush my teeth and everything." Said Max who was in his pajamas.
"Er erm, hello, how about us 2?" asked Brian and Allan at the same time.
"Oh, sorry." Said Max.
We all went in.
"Ok, I have 4 sleeping bags, who will take my bed every night?" asked Max.
"Oh Max, you can take it, we'll just take the sleeping bags." I said.
"You sure?" he asked.
"Yeah Max, you can take your bed." We all said in unison. We all then laughed.
"Hey Mitchell, you might want to get some rest, you didn't sleep at all." Said Max.
"How about we all sleep. I also think Mariah is coming tomorrow to bey battle Mitchell tomorrow." Said Brian.
"Yeah, also Rey and Lee." Mitchell replied.
We all went in a sleeping bag, except for Max who continued eating his breakfast. I looked at Mitchell, she was asleep. She looked so calm, so peaceful, so cute.
'Does she love me? Does she? Do I love her. That's a silly question, I do love her. But does she love me? Does she?'
I looked around Max's room, it was the same as last year, except for the bags. Good thing I went by Tyson's earlier and dropped them off.
'Tomorrow I'll be at Tyson's place. I just hope I don't sleep next to Daichi like last, who wouldn't stop kicking me.'
I looked back at beautiful Mitchell. It was clear to me then, I certainly did love her. I stood up and went to the basement.
"Let it Rip!" I said finally launching my blade.
It landed in the dish. I was calm. I looked at my watch, 6:00. I called Zaber X back to me and went out for a fresh walk. I went straight to Tyson's place. I was outside his door.
"David." I heard behind me. It was Ray. "Long time no see."
"Let me guess, here for a re-match?" I asked.
"Later. Lets see how if Tyson got use to his new alarm clock Daichi yet."
We went inside.
"Ugh Daichi, why did you have to wake me up?' I heard Tyson say.
We knocked on Tyson's door.
"Hey Tyson, me and David are here." Said Ray.
Tyson opened the door.
To be continued
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