Hi. This is a poem I wrote while thinking about Mikan and her feelings for Natsume. How he always pushes her away from him because he doesn't want her to get hurt. And how Mikan doesn't want that. She wants to be with Natsume. Standing as equals, side by side, facing the world together.
Oh yeah. This poem may not seem like it has a flow at first glance, but it does. It goes A, B, A, B etc. Or just 3 syllables then 5 syllables.
Anyways. R and R please. All forms of criticism are accepted. Enjoy.
Standing as Equals
By
Faux Reves
Can I please
Stand beside you, love
Allow me
To ease your pain and
Suffering
I will answer your
Silent cry
And help in melting
The frozen
Fire trapped within
Your being
So don't stop me from
Loving you
Give me a chance to
Save your mind
And soul from despair
Stop shedding
Invisible tears
That contrast
With my own droplets
Let me say
That my need for you
Is the same
In amount as your
Need for me