A/N:I've decided to remake this story, my brother has been telling me to remake it, and I never got around to it. When I saw aurora nightz remake hers, It kinda encouraged me to do it. She is a really good author and you should check out her stories. Well anyway if the people that reviewed in my last story want the characters they reviewed in here, just give me heads up alright? If you want your character in this story just review him in, please don't P.M me about it. I hardly ever look at my messages so just review him in. Don't review the character unless you read the guide lines on how I want you to review him/her/it(it is there for a certain crew mate I had last time). Guidelines are at the end of the chapter. Enjoy the story, give me reviews, I accept all reviews, even flames. It feels good to be back!

In a small town on a small little island in the east blue. It was a very happy loud night as a festival was going on. People were wearing kimonos, suits and other formal clothing for this special occasion. Kids were at play while adults were conversing and laughing with each other as they ate or drank some sake. It was an annual festival in this town. The lights from the stores and the moon is what lit up the night, and that was all they needed. Families were walking around having fun and caring for the young ones in the group. A man walked down the road, he had a big smile on his face and he was wearing a straw hat. Everyone in the town knew him well as he was a funny man and his brother always got him out of trouble. His name was Orez D. Lance, he had black hair that went to his eyes, His hair was thick and usually messy and uncombed. He had a nice tan, green eyes, and with the peoples opinion, a really big heart. He smiled and laughed with the people he saw as he walked down the street. He brightened up everyones day. Even though he gets himself in trouble a lot but know one looks at his bad traits, only his good ones.

"Oi, Jaxon? Where are you" Lance yelled out as he walked down the road, he asked some people if they knew where he was and they didn't know. Lance just sighed as he sat on a bench.

"Luther and Mom are going to kill me" Lance said as he lowered his arms next to him. Why does Jax always have to run off and do something stupid. At least when I did stuff like that when I was his age I was back before dinner, and I never did anything when the festival was coming up. Lance stood up and began his search again. When he started to walk he suddenly got hit in the back of the head. He heard a popping sound and then water was all over him. Well he thought it was water, but it was actually all sticky and gross. Lance looked up as he saw Jax and his friends. They had water balloons in their hands, ready to fire.

"hehe, um lets take it easy guys" Lance said as he started to back up a little. "I mean mom wants you home for dinner Jax" Lance finished as he kept backing up laughing nervously. Jax raised his hand and he then made a fist.

"FIRE!" He yelled as him and his friends sent a barrage of balloons at Lance, he just turned around and ran away as balloons whizzed by or hit the ground next to him. They chased after Lance while throwing and laughing at him.

"If only I could run faster!" Lance yelled as he kept running away. Lance then got an idea. He ran into an alley way and hid behind the cold brick wall. He felt him self stick to the wall. It felt weird and gross but at this point he really didn't care. Jaxons friends ran by The alley, Lance saw jax. Lance grabbed Jax by his shirt and pulled him into the alley.

"we're going home to eat" Lance said as he dragged him by his collar, Jax struggled to get free but that wasn't happening. Lance walked down the road and everyone just stared at them.

"Lance your making a scene" Jax yelled as he threw punches and kicks but from his position he would miss or barely graze him.

"I don't care, I'm just making sure your coming home for dinner, and besides." Lance said as he let him go. Jax stood and backed away from Lance. He was about to start complaining but he then saw that lance was very serious at the moment.

"This is a special day for us, and you know especially for me and Luther this is are last night together" Lance said, he took his straw hat off and just stared at it. He had kind and innocent eyes as he stared at the hat. Jax looked at the hat as well.

"Luffy gave it to you himself right?" Jax asked as he walked over to Lance, Lance walked with him, heading for their house. Lance waited for a bit thinking about what to say.

"well, yeah. He gave me this hat because he thought I was just like him when he was little. He said that was the only reason he gave it to me" Lance said with a smile as he took his hat off and shoved it on Jaxons head. Jax tilted the hat up and looked at him, Lance wasn't where he was before though. He looked around but then he finally noticed that he was standing by a park fountain. Lance threw a beri in .

"Why did you toss the beri in that fountain" Jax asked looking at him, Lances smile only grew as he looked at Jax. He then looked up at the sky. Jax looked at him patiently. They were silent for minutes and when the intensity of the moment was about to get to Jax. Lance looked at him.

"You wanna know why they call this fountain 'The Three Wishes'?" Lance asked Jax, Jax nodded as he stared at the fountain. He was thirsty by just looking at the clean and pure water. Jax licked his lips.

"Let me refresh your memory Jax" Lance said with a warm smile. He took some water from the fountain and drank some. Jax looked at Lance wondering what he wished for. Lance wiped his face with the sleeve of his hoody.

"It's called The Three Wishes because there is three wishes to choose from, despite what people think you only get one wish," Lance said as he walked over to jax and he grabbed his hat and put it back where it belongs, a top of his head.

"Let's go" Lance said as he walked down the road, Jax didn't move an inch. Lance stopped and then looked at Jaxon. Jax was looking at the ground, with saddened eyes. Lance walked over to Jax and put his hand on Jaxons shoulder. Jax looked up at Lance with sad eyes. Lance only smiled at him.

"Want to know what I wished for?" Lance asked looking down at his little brother. That was not the reason of his sad eyes but he nodded his head. Lance patted his head and he chuckled. Lance then turned around and started to walk away. Jax looked shocked.

"wait! What about the wish?" Jax called out, Lance just kept walking. Jax ran up to him and grabbed a hold of his sleeve. Lance kept looking forward.

"I will tell you soon, but not now. The time isn't right" Lance said as he put his hand on jaxons head, he got down to his level and smiled at him. Jaxon couldn't help but smile back. Lance then opened a door, when he did he got slugged in the face, Jax walked right by the man who slugged Lance.

"Ow, Luther why did you hit me" Lance asked as he rubbed his cheek, he hissed when he made contact. Luther just stood abroad and he crossed his arms. He had a mean look on his face. Luther then just sighed as he looked at Lance. Lance only blinked at him. Luther walked over to him and stuck his hand out. Lance took his hand as he was helped up to his feet.

"It's the last day we're gonna be here, you would think we would spend more time with mom. She will be alone soon. Since dad is dead and Jax is gonna leave in 3 years too. He will be 18 at that time, We turn 18 mid night." Luther said to Lance as they walked inside. Lance just sighed as he brushed himself off. He then realized that he was still grimy from the little munchkin attack. Lance was about to go up stairs.

"Lance, give your mom a hug" Lance heard behind him, he turned around and gave her a hug. She kissed him on the cheek as they hugged. She then let go and walked out into the kitchen. Lance smiled as he followed her to help with the food. Mom and Lance set the food on the table.

"Dinner!" Mom yelled in the house. Luther and Jax were immediately in the room to eat.

DAWN. . .

Lance and Luther were sailing off the island, the sun was just rising over the horizon as the waves crashed against there tiny boat. Lance was sitting at the very top of the sail as he looked ahead. Luther was laying down in front of the sail.

"Luther," Lance said looking down at him, Luther just grunted his answer, letting him know he is awake.

"why did you decide to sail with me" Lance asked looking down at him. Luther opened his eyes and looked out at the sea. He saw birds fly through the sky, and only for a moment, he thought flying would be very nice.

"Luther?" Lance asked again looking at him. Luther then just stood up. He looked at his hand and then he clenched his fist.

"I want to be the strongest person in the world" Luther said looking at Lance, Lance then just nodded looking at him. "You want to be the pirate king?" Luther asked, Lance again nodded at him. Luther stared out to the sea again.

"some where down the line, if I'm on the pirate kings ship, won't I eventually become the strongest?" Luther asked not just Lance, but himself as he looked at the sea. Lance put his arms behind his head as he laid down.

"I dunno" Lance said looking up at the sky, the mix of red, orange, and blue seemed really beautiful.

"Well, I guess we'll find out" Luther said looking up at him. Lance just smirked as he put his hat over his face.

JAXON. . .

Jax was just staring out the window looking at his the tiny little vessel sailing away. He sighed wishing he was like them, able to leave this boring island. Jax then turned around and looked at his bed. He walked over and sat on it and examined the knife Lance gave him, and the nice revolver Luther gave him. Jax put the gun under his bed and he picked up the knife and looked at it. He then remembered what Lance said.

Jax was sleeping soundlessly in his bed. He had a calm face as he laid underneath the warm nice blanket. Then there was a tapping. Jaxons eyes flickered open, he yawned as he sat up. It was dark, the only thing that gave light was the moons ray. Jax saw the shadow of a figure thanks to the moons ray. Jax looked over and he noticed it was Lance. Lance opened the window and sat down on the window sill. Jax just yawned as he looked at Lance, Lance smiled as he walked in. Jaxon leaned over and turned the light on.

"What are you doing Lance" Jax asked as he looked at Lance. Lance then sat at the end of his bed.

"You want to know the wish right?" Lance asked, Jax looked at him in wonder but then he suddenly remembered what he meant. Jax then slowly nodded his head as he looked at Lance. Lance smiled as he walked back over to the window sill. Jax just kept watching him sleepily.

"I wished for a safe voyage across the sea, the protection of my family and friends, and to return home safely" Lance said looking at the moon. Jax was shocked that he said all three of them.

"Brother! You can only pick one though" Jaxon said looking at him. Lance just laughed out loud hearing what he said. Jax was confused on why this was funny, this was no laughing matter. It was said that the person that wished for more then one would never have his dream come true.

"Jax, you're forgetting one very important thing about me" Lance said looking at him while shaking his head. Jax looked at him. Wondering what this thing is that made him wish for more then one.

"It's because-" . . .

Jax just laughed as he remembered what he said. He wondered how he didn't see it before. Jaxon then set the knife down and opened his window. He smelt the ocean and breakfast as he looked out to the sea where he last saw their tiny vessel. He laughed again.

"You're a pirate, you couldn't stand only having a piece of the treasure when you can obtain it all, huh?" Jaxon said as he looked out to the sea. Wishing he was on that boat too.

A/N: Alright the end of chapter one! I have to say I think that was one of my best of works. Well anyway if you wanna review a character then just follow these guide lines. Also if your character was in my last story, just give me a heads up and I'll just put him/her in the story again okay? Here are the guide lines.

Name:

Age:

bounty name: (what they call you on your bounty poster)

Fighting skills:(if they have a weapon of choice just put that here too)

Position:(cook, navigator, swordsman, etc.)

Personality:

Likes:

Dislikes:

What he/she looks like: (hair, eyes, clothing, etc.)

History:

Dream:

Whatever else you want to put then please do.

If you want, tell me how she meets Lance or Luther. If I really can't make him/her join the way you want then please don't hate me.

That's it for this, I hoped you enjoyed the chapter!