Wow first fan fiction...it might suck for the first few chapters since I will be trying to understand how I want to write this PLEASE CRITQUE MEEEEEE. I'm also skipping to the Toriel fight. Note: I don't own Undertale.

How many times? How many times have I died again? I've lost count. God save me from this it hurts like hell. As I get up from bed,in a small room adorned with a closet and one other bed, I see Flowey staring at me with sad eyes. "I'm OK , let's try this again" I say determined. He just nods, his golden petals once probably beautiful were now torn and burned by the same monster I call Mom.

I get up and see Toriel...mom was working in the kitchen,humming a melody, I smell something burning probably one of her pies, I cringe and decide to as quietly as possible run for it. I'm down the stairs almost falling multiple times at my pace, Left then right almost there. Then I scream in agony as my shoulder gets seared with a fireball. I am on the floor clutching my right shoulder, my favorite white turtle-neck with red stripes is chared and I am in so much pain, but I have to get up and move. Move.A soft, female voice in the back of my head tells me as Flowey is trying to get me up scared to death. NOW!

"Were do you think you are going my child" Toriel's voice echos through the halls. No, I can't get caught or I wont make it out. But, a battle starts. Don't hurt her. The voice says as she always does. I snap at her. I already promised I wouldn't. And dodged multiple fireballs to the face. OK, knew plan.

*ACT

*TALK

"Mom can I promise you something?" I say trying to keep the hurt off my face as I roll away from a fireball.

"Please indulge me child" she says as she gets ready to shoot more fire.

"I promise that I will get everyone out to see the sun again"

She is taken aback. Then she has a murderous grin, I roll out of the way of more fireballs. "that is a hefty promise for such a small child"That pisses me off. But I take a deep breath and say, still dogging mind you. "Then how about a bet? If I win you have to apologize for trying to kill me and treat me like I'm your real child"

As she thinks about it I look for ways around her. "alright it's a deal" ...WHAT SHE BOUGHT THAT! "But if you lose then I get to kill your little plant friend" Flowey shivers, oh, that's why.

"OK, deal" I say as she goes around me and walks away. She almost looks sad, almost.

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"Why is it so eff'n cold!" I yell into the frigid air. "Maybe because it's snowing" said Flowey with a smirk, I'm glad that he's smiling I haven't seen it since before my first fight with Mom.

"shut up" cracking a grin myself as I shiver and speak. Now he looks worried. "We need to get you out of the cold" He says

"for a flower with no feelings you sure worry a lot" I say. He's surprised like he didn't notice he was worried. "huh really?"

"Really" Wile we were talking I was walking on a path in the middle of two forests when we heard...

CRACK!

I squeaked loudly and ran. But I was stopped by what looked like a wooden barricade. Shit! The girl in the back of my mind said. No kidding.

"Human" A voice said behind me and I jumped.

"Don't you know how to greet a knew pall, turn around and shake my hand"

Don't trust him. She squeaks. OK, just don't trust anyone.

I turn around but don't shake...a bony hand? Why am I surprised that he's a skeleton? He has a shit-eating, sharp-tooth smile with one gold tooth, and wearing a jet black jacket with one gold stripe going down the side of each arm, it's unzipped and I can see a red and black striped turtle-neck and scarf. He is also wearing black shorts with a gold stripe down each side of the legs and red sneakers with black socks and shoelaces. Lastly wearing also a necklace with a gold star, save point.

"common don't be so rude kid" he says his red eyes stair (did I forget to mention he has red glowing eyes oops) while I just glare at him. "whatever" and then I see it as he waves his hand, a joy buzzer. For all I know he could have rigged it to could kill me. "Names Sans, Sans the skeleton"

My scrutinizing face melts away and I smile. "Names Frisk, nice to meet you Sans" He gives me a smile that probably means You're a weirdo and says. "Oh you're a human, that's hilarious. Well since you actually look smart you can go through the gate I guess" so that's what it is...huh.

Then he pulls out a *snort* skeleton key and unlocks the door. He hears my snort. "What's so funny?"

"You have *giggle* a *snort* skeleton key HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!"

" Heh, real funny kid" He says sarcastically. "Oh, common that was great a real rib-tickler" I cover my mouth to keep from laughing but a giggle comes before I can.

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Sans POV

"You should be quieter" I say in an indifferent tone. "just because I won't kill you doesn't mean my boss won't. He should be coming to check on me in a few seconds"

Her eyes go wide as I mention papyrus, my asshole of a brother. As we go through the I see the silhouette of him. "Would you look at that here he comes" As she frantically searches for a place to hide I stand there. She glares at me when she notices I'm not doing anything, I shrug as she notices a boulder on the other side of me. And then, she pushes me and says "If you aren't going to help, get. Out. Of. My. Way."

Wow, savage. I laugh though and wait for the silhouette to become my boss.