UPDATED
Author's Note: Here is the first rewritten chapter of the true Rinnegan. If you are new to this story, please ignore the other chapters. They are bad. Really bad. If you do want to read them, think of them as the guidelines of the story. If the other chapters are already updated, then they should all have an 'UPDATED' thing on top. BTW, this is slightly AU.
Summery: What if almost everyone, including Iruka, hated Naruto? What if the person who hated him the most, actually liked him? What if that person, who Naruto grew to like, died right in front of him? Powerful/Grey True Rinnegan Naruto.
It was a peaceful morning in Konoha. The birds were chirping, the sun was shining, and everyone was sleeping peacefully. That is, except for an eight year old Naruto Uzumaki who had been to exited to go to sleep. That day would be the day that he would finally go to the academy. He was exited to finally have the chance to make friends. Maybe he would become the rookie of the year, then become the best ninja in the village, and then become the Hokage, the leader of the village, but little did our favorite blonde know, today would not go as he wanted it to.
Naruto was so exited. He wanted to be able to use jutsu, and be able to fight bad guys and save princesses. He wanted to be able to fight with Kage, and fight legends. He had huge expectations for himself and wanted to be the hokage. He had heard that his teachers where named Iruka and Mizuki. He was exited for school. He wanted to learn new things. He wanted to be smart and powerful.
"Sigh… what do you think fox?" He asked the strange creature that he had talked to when he was a child, especially when he was being beaten. The villager's didn't like him much. Even when he was a kid. He never had anyone to talk to, other the the third hokage, and an ANBU who wore a dog mask. He called him Inu. But he never really got to talk to them. So one day when he was walking down the road at the age of five…
FLASHBACK
Naruto was walking down the road that lead to his house. He had just met a kind man that had given him candy. It tasted strange, and it gave him a stomach ache, but it was the first time someone had given him something. He got to his house, only to find it in ruins. Villagers stood around it, holding hammer's and torches. They were braking his house again. Well, it wasn't like this wasn't a common thing. It happened a lot. He tried to hide, but one of the villagers spotted him. Before he could even start running, a chunnin that was there threw a kunai into his shoulder. The pain he felt sent him to the ground. He then felt the kicks. He was being torn apart.
"You Damn Demon! Give me back my son!"
"Die demon brat! You don't deserve to live."
"I hate you, we hate you! Just die already!"
Naruto heard more and more of these comments. They hurt. Not because of what they said, but because he didn't know how to make them stop. He curled into a ball and felt the pain in his ribs. He felt broken. He felt so alone.
"I'm sorry! Please, stop this! I'm so so sorry!" Naruto yelled as they continued the onslaught. He didn't know what to do.
"Yeah right. Your sorry you killed thousands of innocents. Take this you damn demon!" A man said as he hit Naruto in the head with a bottle, giving him the sweet release of unconsciousness.
IN NARUTO'S MINDSCAPE
Naruto woke up in a foot of water. He looked up and saw a series of pipes that were blue, red, and purple. He looked around and saw light at the end of the tunnel. He followed it and ended up in a room. He looked around and saw a huge cage. There was a piece of paper on the cage with writing on it, but he had no idea what it said.
He walked up to the cage and saw two eyes. He saw sorrow in the eyes. Sorrow a lot like what he was having. Then the eyes noticed Naruto. They immediately filled with anger. The giant fox hit the front of the cage before growling.
"Hi there. What's your name?" Naruto asked with a smile. The fox seemed surprised.
'No one ever asked me for my name. Especially not after first seeing me.' The fox thought. "You may call me Kurama. Who are you?" Kurama asked.
"I'm Naruto, Naruto Uzumaki!" Naruto yelled and smiled at the giant fox.
"Uzumaki, like Kushina Uzumaki?" Kurama asked.
"Who? Wait… do you know my mother? Is that her name?" Naruto asked, confusion evident on his face.
'This kid is so innocent. Those bastard villagers. And people wonder why I didn't attack the village sooner. It's not like I even got to enjoy it since I was under a genjutsu. Sigh. I may as well help this kid out.' Thought the kyuubi."Kit, when you wake up, I'm going to help you."
"Thank you, Kurama san." Naruto said as he walked into his cage and fell asleep on his paw.
"This kid… is either the bravest kid I've ever seen, or the dumbest." Kurama said.
"Or he's both." said a voice from behind Kurama.
"Probably. So, when are you gonna introduce yourself to the kid?" Kurama asked.
"Hmm, not yet. He hasn't awakened it yet. I'll wait until he does." said the voice. In the darkness, all that could be seen from the person was a single blue eye, and a golden eye with lines circling the pupil.
"IF, he awakens it. You never know. He is just a kid." Kurama replied.
"Oh, he will. He isn't the chosen one for nothing." the voice said.
"That's what she said about you. Yet you weren't the chosen one. How do you know he's the one?" Kurama asked, skeptical of the child.
"Just trust me, Kurama san. He just is." the voice said. "And I think that the descendant of the dark powers has awoken.
"Do you think he'll be like the last one?" Kurama asked.
"I don't know. If he is, then let's hope Naruto is the chosen one." the voice said.
OUTSIDE NARUTO'S MINDSCAPE
Naruto woke up only to find that the villagers were gone. He looked at himself only to find his wounds gone. He was also surrounded by a crimson chakra. He got up and walked to his house, ready to clean up the rubble that was once his home.
FLASHBACK END
"I don't think your thinking logically. Most of the stuff you think about is straight out of a fantasy told to children." Kurama said from within Naruto's mind.
"Oh, come on! Aren't you supposed to be encouraging me? Some friend your are." Naruto said, and fake pouted.
"Che, gaki, I'm not your friend, only your ally." Kurama said with a groan.
"Whatever, I've gotta make it to the academy. The teacher's are probably already taking role!" Naruto said as he opened the door to his class room. He was a minute early and quickly sat down in the middle of the second row. He was next to a girl with blonde hair, and a brooding boy with black hair.
"Hey! My names Naruto. Naruto Uzumaki. What's yours?" Naruto asked the boy next to him.
"Hmm..." The boy didn't even acknowledge he was there. He just kept staring at the wall, as if in deep thought.
'I guess I'll ask him later.' Naruto thought. Everyone else was talking when a man with a scar across his nose asked for quiet.
"Quiet down everyone." he announced. No one listened. The man formed a ram hand sign and his head grew. "QUIET!" He yelled. Everyone seemed to shut up afterwords. "Now then, since we don't know any of you, I want you all to come down here and tell us about yourselves." and so he called the first name. Shino Aburame.
"My name is Shino. I like bugs. I don't like people who kill bugs just because they can. I want to someday be the head of my clan.
"Choji Akimichi."
A rotund boy walked up to the front of the class. he wore a green jacket and a white shirt, and had what appeared to be a pair of underwear on his head. "Hi I'm Choji. I like food, and my friends. I don't like people who call me fat, or people that hurt my friends. I want to someday take over my clan."
"Kara Gekko." (Daughter of Hayate Gekko. First O.C. She has long brown hair, wears a white t-shirt and black pants. She also has a black jacket. She has black eyes.)
"Hi. I'm Kara. I like swords and my friends. I hate emos and my goal for the future is to gain the title of sword mistress of Konoha."
"Sakura Haruno"
"Hi! My name is Sakura. I like..." She stopped as she looked over at Sasuke Uchiha."I don't like bully's or people who say my for head is weird. My dream for the future..." looks at the Uchiha.
"Hinata Hyuuga."
"Hi, m...my name is H...Hinata Hyuuga. I l...like pressing flowers. I d...don't like the separation I...in my clan. My dream for the future… to remove the seal from the branch members of my family."
"Kiba Inuzuka."
"Hello! My names Kiba. I like my friend Akamaru. I don't like cats. My goal for the future is to take my sister's spot as the head of the Inuzuka.
"Orion Kuradesu." (Second OC. Has black hair, wears a dark blue T-shirt and black ANBU pant. He also wears a black leather jacket. He wears dark blue fingerless gloves. He has a mischievous look to him.)
"Hey. I don't like much. I don't really hate anything either. I don't have a dream, since dreaming is useless."
"Shikamaru Nara."
"Hi. My name is Shikamaru. I like shōgi and cloud watching. I don't like troublesome things. My dream for the future is to get some sleep."
"Sasuke Uchiha."
"My name is Sasuke Uchiha. I don't particularly like anything. I hate a certain person. My dream for the future is to kill a certain someone."
"Ino Yamanaka."
"Hey. I'm Ino. I like my friends and flowers. I dislike bully's. My dream for the future is to become the head of the Yamanaka clan."
"That seems to be everyone." Iruka finished.
"Iruka, you forgot someone." Mizuki said.
"Oh, of course. Naruto Uzumaki." Iruka said through his gritting teeth.
"HELLO! My name is Naruto Uzumaki! I like my friends, Inu san, Hokage sama and ramen! I don't like bully's, vegetables, mean people, or crazy people. My dream is to one day become hokage."
"Alright. Now that that's over, lets get on to the first days lesson." Iruka said with a frown. That day they had started learning the basics of taijutsu. Going through every kata in the academy style. Iruka had given Naruto a fake one that would leave him defenseless against almost any attack. So Naruto ended up having a lot of trouble with the spars. He ended that day with a lot of bruises. Naruto was surprised when Mizuki walked over to him.
"Need some help Naruto?" Mizuki asked.
"Yes! These katas don't make any sense." Naruto said with a frown.
"Can I see your katas?" Mizuki asked.
"Sure. Here look." Naruto said, handing him the scroll he had been given.
'Hmm. These katas are all wrong. Any of these would be suicide.' Mizuki thought. "Hmm. Naruto, I'm gonna give you a more advanced kata scroll. If you can learn it, you'll be super strong. But you can't tell anyone I gave you this and never show Iruka. Got it?" Mizuki asked.
"Got it. Thank you Mizuki sensei." Naruto said as he went to work on learning the kata. Mizuki stayed with him and helped him when he made a mistake. He was actually a natural at a chunnin level taijutsu style.
End Of First Chapter
Author's Notes: First chapter done. I'm gonna delete the other chapter's since they wont make sense. See ya!