Hey Guys :D This is a Maximum Ride fic I came up with one day, and decided to try and turn it into a story! Yay :D I've been meaning to post it for awhile, but I just never got around to it. Finally Ice Krystal convinced me to post it xD There will be an OC in here later by her, but i'll mention it again once we get to her.

This is my first fic I have ever posted on here, so please be nice! If you don't like it don't read it. Though you should know, flames will be used to roast marshmallows!

This story is mainly Miggy, with a bit of Fax. It was meant to be just Fax, but then as I continued Miggy made more sense with the plot line.

Disclaimer: I don't own Maximum Ride, just the OCs that will be later in this story!

Max POV

The flock and I flew through the air, just over the Grand Canyon. It was beautiful and I smiled at the look of wonder on everyone's faces. Fang caught my eye and smiled, one of those rare smiles of his. My heart fluttered in my chest at the sight of it. Right now was one of those rare times when I actually felt happy. And completely safe. But of course, this is my life right? And nothing good in it can last very long.

"Erasers," I whispered "Right below us, I can sense them." Their scent was awful, and it took all I had not to cover my nose.

"I'm not picking up anything at all Max," Iggy told me. Angel who was next to him nodded her head in agreement.

"Well I am, so I say we go before this gets bad."

"Max," Fang said "I kinda have to go with Iggy on this one. He would pick up on Erasers, I think you're just being paranoid."

I huffed and looked over at Gazzy and Nudge. They both shrugged and nodded at Iggy.

I blinked back the angry tears that were threatening to leak from my eyes. The entire flock didn't believe me? Weren't we all supposed to help and listen to each other so we would not get hurt? It really didn't seem like it right now. "Fine," I yelled "You can all get killed see if I care!" I flew away, knowing full well I should stay with them, but they were just so irritating!

"Are you PMSing or something Max?" Iggy yelled after me.

I turned and glared, ready to give an angry retort. What I planned to say, I really don't know, but then I was interrupted by a pressure on my shoulder. A warm breath tickled my ear and a voice said,

"Well, well, well, what have we here? Could it be Miss. Maximum Ride?" I could tell it was an Eraser by the roughness of its voice. I turned around preparing to fight, but nothing was there.

"What the hell?" I said. Then suddenly an Eraser was in front of me. I almost screamed, but contained my self. I probably jumped like ten feet though, if that's even possible when your flying. The Eraser smirked, obviously enjoying scaring the shit out of me.

"Get into position guys!" I yelled to the flock. I saw them all start flying in different directions. Then I turned to analyze the enemy. There only seemed to be about four Erasers, but I knew that I could no longer trust my eyes to find them. These were obviously a new generation of Erasers, ones that could turn invisible.

Of course as I was contemplating this, an Eraser came out of no where and slammed his fist across my face. My vision started to blacken as I spiraled to the ground.

"Max! Someone help her," Nudge yelled. No one caught me though, and I hit the ground with a sickening crunch. Before I could contain it I let out a blood curdling scream. All my bones hurt like a bitch, and my skin felt like it was on fire. I literally felt like I was being torn in half, and I had a massive headache. I would probably have a concussion later along with a full body cast. If I even made it out of this alive.

"Someone just kill me," I whimpered "Please, I can't take this." The pain was unbearable, and I just wanted it to stop. An Eraser was over me before I could say another word.

"The great Maximum Ride, begging for mercy," He chuckled "How pathetic."

I wanted to scream at him. It was his fault I was like this! He was the one who knocked me out of the sky. But of course all that would get me was a laugh at best. The Eraser obviously did not care that he'd hurt me. In fact, he was enjoying it.

"How about this Maximum, I just knock you out now, then you get to live, and my job will be complete." I figured he was smiling, but I couldn't see anything. I was as blind as Iggy.

The last thing I felt was the Eraser slamming his fist into my face, and I was doing nothing to stop him.

I woke up God knows how long later, feeling slightly drowsy. Someones hand was wrapped around mine, and I squeezed their fingers to let them know I was awake.

"Oh thank God Max," Fang sighed in relief "Are you feeling any better?"

"Really sore, but not too bad. I just feel like I ran non-stop for a week," He chuckled

"Well when we last saw your mother she said you should be back to normal in no time at all. Your bones healed up pretty quick, probably from all the adrenaline you had after the attack,"

"That's good. Broken bones are a nuisance," I told him "How long was I out anyway?"

"Nine days. Your mother kept giving you medicine to keep you asleep since when you woke up the first time you thrashed around a lot. She was afraid you would not heal right if we let you keep doing that;" He chuckled again. Then I noticed something. There was something stopping me from seeing. I reached up to my face to pull off whatever it was and frowned. There was nothing there.

"Fang," I whispered "I can't see."

"What do you mean?"

"I mean my eyes are open, there's nothing in front of them, and I can't see anything!" I yelled, "Fang, what is going on?" I whispered

"Max its okay," Iggy whispered next to me. I hadn't noticed him until now. "You will be okay"

"No I won't! I'm blind Iggy. I won't ever be able to see again," Tears came into my eyes, but I held them back.

"Everything will be okay Max," Iggy said "Just go to sleep, and when you wake up, your eyes will be adjusted again. I promise." His words comforted me, but he had sounded worried. Iggy had been through this before, and I was sure he knew everything would not be okay. I was certain he had just made a promise he could not keep.

I know that was short, but this was kind of a prolouge thing :p Next chapter will be longer and have lots of MIGGY! Go Miggy! Not really, I like Fax, but Miggy fits with this better.

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