PLEASE READ THIS: (The Author's note)
Hey guys! It's Ilovemiax again. I know it's been a while since I created a story. This one will be completely independent (not with AannR). Well, I'd tell you if I was. But continuing with the Author's Note… this will be a crossover with Yu-Gi-Oh 5D's. I have gotten really obsessive lately, so I need to express myself. Also, no matter how many time I (or Luna) will bash the show, just keep in mind: I mean none of it! I completely support Dueling. If the characters seem OOC to you… it's probably true. I'll try to keep them in character as much as I can. Another thing, this is AU-ish, so even though the time period I set this in, means that Goodwin is dead- in this story he will be very much alive. So no flamers please! For those of you who don't know, Luna is my OC. She will be the narrator (meaning first person POV). Stuff about her, well, she is Gibbs and Jenny's daughter. Actually, I believe that's all you need to know. Wow this is most likely the longest author's note I have. I'm shooting for reviews, and to see how many views I get. If I get enough, I might just post the rest. I do have this story written, but if I feel that I have no support in this story, I may dis-continue. (Most likely, if that happens, I'll just keep it for myself.) I am also trying to create longer chapters, and improve my writing skills so… yeah… And now for the Basic info:
Summary: An NCIS agent ends up dead in Neo Domino City and Jack Atlas is the prime suspect! Is he just a victim, as he claims, or a killer?
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DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT OWN YU-GI-OH 5D'S OR NCIS
Ready, Steady, DUEL!
By: Ilovemiax
Chapter 1: Neo Domino City
"Oh gross, would you look at that? Just when you thought D.C couldn't have any more women he could… ugh." I shuttered, watching Tony stick his tongue down another woman's throat.
"Ugh, Tony, go suck her face off somewhere else!" McGee groaned as he and I walked onto the base parking lot. As usual, Tony made a face, but waved good-bye to his newest bimbo. He ran to catch up with us.
"Geez, how many girls do you get?" I asked slightly disgusted, "How have you not slept with every woman in D.C?"
"I haven't slept with everyone." Tony argued. We neared the elevator. We then stepped in as Agent Marco stepped out. We let the doors ping closed before we resumed out conversation. Tony began again, "I didn't sleep with Ziva—"
"Ah, yes you did," McGee interjected, "remember that mission where the both of you were undercover as assassins? Ziva was Sophie and you were—" The doors pinged again, and we stepped out. "—her husband."
I smirked, "I remember that! And you tried to nail that FBI chick!"
McGee laughed, "Then Ziva said she got 'pregnant' and scared her off!" We both laughed.
"That's doesn't count!" Tony argued, "It was work related! She was on top too…" he grumbled afterword. I don't think he knows that we heard that.
"Sure it was~" McGee teased. Our laughter was heard as the three of us entered the bullpen and began to 'start out day'.
"And I can name someone who I haven't slept with!" Tony blurted out. He seemed proud as he sauntered over to my desk and placed himself in front of me. I have a feeling I knew the answer. It would be the juvenile one, but I decided to ask anyway against my better judgment.
"Yeah and who might that be?" I challenged, "And I do not count." I waved to Ziva as she came in and started talking to McGee. To catch up on what she missed.
"Your mom!" Tony blurted out. Proudly, I might add. Ziva's moth dropped open, and McGee chocked on his coffee. I looked away as fast as I could. Tony froze, knowing he spoke at the wrong time. He turned slowly, I swear I could hear his heart thumping, expecting Gibbs to be behind him. Well, he was right. He found Gibbs… and my Jenny.
"B-boss, D-d-director, that was… I mean… oh crap…" At that moment, both Gibbs and Jenny were giving him death glares. Oh, if only looks could kill. Tony would've been sent to the deepest layer of Hell. "T-that came out wrong," he managed to squeak out later. Dad grunted, walked to his desk (to grab his bag), then called out, "Gear up! There's a dead marine!"
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"Where the hell is this Neo Domino City?" I asked peering out the window. Gibbs was driving, with Tony and I in the back seat. Probably, a way to get back at Tony for his comment. I had gotten used to it… sort of. I would puke on occasion, but other than that I am currently able to control the contents of my stomach. Partially, because I learned not to eat before getting into a car with my father. Director Sheppard, for some reason, instructed that McGee to stay back in NCIS. Apparently, we wouldn't becoming back form Neo Domino until the case was solved. So, throughout the investigation, we would be contacting each other via MTAC, email, and what not. Even Ducky, Palmer, and Abby would be joining us. Abby was ecstatic.
McGee was on speaker phone with me. "According to my research, it's a small island off the coast of Maryland. Considered U.S territory, but it's not too popular, but there's a neighboring island known as Satellite. Used to part of the City, but they were split up. Whoa, there's even a really long bridge connecting the two islands."
"Split up? How?" Tony asked, holding in what was left of his breakfast.
"There was an incident known as the Zero Reverse."
"Oh yeah, I remember reading about that somewhere. It was a huge explosion caused by something called Old Momentum. It just blew up and separated the city and Satellite." I supplied, grabbing onto the driver seat in front of me, to steady myself while Gibbs turned a corner.
"Is that it?" Tony asked, "What so special about this place anyway? What's a marine doing there? I don't think they even have a base there."
"They don't," McGee confirmed, "But it's a city full of people known as Turbo Duelists." He continued to explain. I've heard of these Turbo Duelists, but I never really understood the point. Honestly, playing a card game on a motorcycle, sorry- D-Wheel, is… reckless. Someone could die that way. Then when they do die, and someone asks, "I'm so sorry for your loss. How did they die?" That's awkward if your response it, "They died playing cards on a motorcycle." I guess that's just me. I don't kind much entertainment in watching holographic figures "kill" each other.
"So why is NCIS involved?" I asked, "I know it's a marine, but couldn't the body just be shipped to us? Is this really worth the entire trip? Why not the FBI or something? They deal with cases like this too."
"The dead marine is an NCIS agent," Gibbs said. I felt my face flush and turn red. I was not expecting that. "Way to go Luna," I thought to myself, "You just found a way to insult every marine living and dead."
We took a boat to get to the city. The city's director, I heard, was letting us use whatever resource we needed. Ziva and I both agreed that this was a little fishy. We kept our opinions to ourselves. After a good half hour of listening to Jimmy puke up his insides, we finally arrived in Neo Domino City.
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Before reaching the crime scene we were forced to meet with the Director of the Public Security Maintenance Bureau, Director Rex Goodwin. He was really… creepy.
Crime Scene
"Geez," I said snapping a picture of the body, "This place is like New York! Only more…techy."
"You mean more McGee-ish?" Ziva asked, and then agreed, "You are right, he would really have enjoyed this city. It is a geek-heaven." A soft beep from Ducky's liver temperature (A/N: Sorry, I have no idea what it's called) thermometer turned out attention to Ducky.
"You got an ID?" Tony asked, leaning over Ducky's shoulder.
Ducky nodded, "Meet Special Agent Casey Sherticoff. Poor man…" He turned to Jimmy, "Mr. Palmer will you—?" Jimmy nodded, helping to lift the agent.
"Man the media's all over this!" Tony observed, "It's like they've never seen a dead body." I took another picture. A soft clink caught my attention. Something silver fell from Casey's body.
"Wait, Ducky!" I called, picking up the silver object, "Does Casey wear earrings?"
He check, "No, but that looks like a woman's earing." I held it up as it reflected the sun. It was shaped like an "A". One news reporter saw this and began shouting. I caught a name. Jack Atlas. Tony walked up to me, "Well, from the sound of this, it doesn't belong to a woman. Jack Atlas, huh…"
"Maybe a jealous boyfriend?" I suggested, "or the killer?" Whoever Jack Atlas was, she was defiantly famous around here, which meant our jobs got a whole lot harder.
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And a warning for the second chapter: as most of you know my OC is named Luna, and in 5D's there is a character called Luna. SO I am sticking to the Japanese names in order to avoid confusion. For those of you who do not know, Luna (5D's) is also called Ruka.
