Hey everyone this is the beginning of a story that kind of branches off of monkeyman30.0's story. Mostly it's about my own bionicle creations, better known as MOC's. Seeing as I'm kind of a newbie I look forward to any kind of constructive criticism you wish to give me. Enjoy!

Disclaimer: Bionicle is a product made by the LEGO Company. There are some elements and names in this story that are in the game MYST by ubisoft and cyan, and the demons or Razgriz is taken from ace combat 5.

Credit to: Monkeyman 30.0

WARNING: there might be 2008 spoilers. (Emphasis on the MIGHT). I really don't know weather or not there will be 2008 spoilers, seeing as this story is mostly about my mocs.

General facts about the kayderhin. Pronunciation (Kay-DARE-in).

The kayderhin are a peaceful kind of race. While that can be said about them they really don't like outsiders and tend to kick people out who invade their private lives. They dislike anyone who isn't another kayderhin but they have several alliances, although only one has any true moral value and that alliance will be revealed later. All kayderhin have a tail, two extra appendages on their shoulders, an extradimentional stomach and an extremely long forked tongue. The appendages on their shoulders have many odd things such as a power siphon, electric ball shooter, random effect, etc. one of the kayderhins most preferred tactics in battle is to whip out their forked tongue, wrap it around their enemies, and swallow them whole as they are capable of doing so. The fact that they will do this in battle astounds some beings because the large meal leaves the kayderhin unencumbered. This, of course, is the work of the extradimentional stomach. The kayderhin have interesting eye colors that identify what one power they have out of 11 powers. There is one generation of kayderhin that was experimented on by Makuta Spiriah who accidentally made that generation have the ability to change their eye color and their power alongside it. There is one group of kayderhin nicknamed The Demons of Razgriz. They are the most famous kayderhin in the world, being known for their surprising skill and technique.

Now onto the real story.

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Emanna (E-mon-uh) stared out across the vast desert planes of tomhana (tom-on-uh) with its spans of rock and sand and plateaus with sparse patches vegetation on them.

"It's beautiful isn't it" said a voice from behind.

Emanna didn't have to turn around to know it was Fornax walking up beside her.

"Yes it is Fornax, yes it is" said Emanna.

They both gazed out at the breathtaking scene before them for a while before Fornax mentioned that the food was finally being served inside. As Emanna turned to the door her gaze swept over Fornax.

His build wasn't that much different from hers. He had a black torso, white legs and head and the appendages sprouting from his shoulders had lasers. He had his missile launcher was built as part of his hand and his sword was slung across his back. From Emanna's knowledge Fornax was extremely skilled at parkour aka free running. Emanna looked ahead at the turquoise glass doors before her and thought about her own physique. She had white legs and torso and a blue head. The appendages protruding from her own shoulders shot balls of electricity. She thought back to the day when she first used it and wondered if the bully she zapped got his left side back. She carried no weapon other than the laser weapon she used for tight spaces strapped to her back. She was extremely smart and knew almost everything about mata-nui the mask of life and anything else. (And I mean ANYTHING else, not just about the great spirits.) As they walked through the doors Fornax and Emanna were startled to find that no one else was there.

"I thought you said they prepared the food Fornax" said Emanna.

"They did" explained Fornax "They were just serving it"

Fornax and Emanna spared a glance at each other and switched their eyes to yellow. They could now hear the whisper quiet footsteps coming closer from behind them. Fornax spun around and drew his sword in one quick and fluid motion. His sword met the neck of Voltix and promptly stopped there as Voltix had teal eyes making him invulnerable to physical attack.

"Awwww come on Fornax" Voltix whined "can't you take a joke?"

Voltix was an interesting person. He had a red torso and arms and his legs were partially red with some black. His head was black as well and his appendages coming from his shoulders spewed flame when they were activated. He had a claw rather than a hand on one arm and carried his trusty sniper rifle with him almost all the time. His yellow eyes glinted as Fornax grabbed him by the neck ready to put Voltix's head through the nearest wall. Voltix had no real notable skill other than being a joker and prankster and having the best enemy movement prediction in the world.

Emanna turned at the same time as Fornax to see all the other people who came to the party teleport or appear or speed in from where ever they were hiding to greet them with happy cheer. Foltiac, Schiner, and Erander were in on the joke and they came out laughing at Voltix who currently was being led off to his punishment by a rather upset and grinning Fornax. Emanna didn't want to think of what Fornax would do to Voltix.

A few seconds after they had disappeared down the passage they came running out again looks of terror painted on their faces. They ran to Emanna so Foltiac, Schiner and Erander came over.

"What's the problem Voltix? He hit you too hard?" Foltiac said causing the others to burst out in raucous laughter. These were shortly ended by Fornax's sharp request to shut up.

"We just saw a makuta in that room." The others became dead silent at the mention of a makuta

"He seemed to be watching some screens that were from the first-person view" Voltix explained

"The worst part is that the screens show this room" Fornax said "it appears we have several spies in our midst."

As if those words were a queue, the nearest table of food was sent flying in an ear piercing explosion. And the six demons of Razgriz whirled around prepared for battle as ten people, who were now visibly not kayderhin, walked towards them with gleaming weapons in hand.

From his room in the back of the cool building makuta Icarax stared at the 10 screens. "This should be fun to watch" he said sourly.

Oooohh looks like fight already! Anyways if you need help with pronunciations than here is a list. And the demons of Razgriz are the name my friend gave to this team that my story is centered on.

Tomhana (tom-ON-uh)

Emanna (E-MON-uh)

Kayderhin (Kay-DARE-in).

Fornax (for-NAX)

Voltix (vole-TIX)

Foltiac (FUL-tac)

Schiner (shky-NER)

Erander (air-and-ER)

Well there is the first chapter. Please tell me your opinion on the story. I can't wait for the reviews or the next chapter! Random time!!!! JOHN DID IT!!!!!!

Alright see you!